Date: 04/21/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
it's sad to see georg and gustav go but it's understandable.
and hoooraaayyy billa!!!
next chapter soon bitte!
Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to review. The next chapter is in outline stages, but hopefully I'll get it up soon.
Date: 04/21/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
I really really love this. But I found this chapter really creepy. Like...the second voice through the monitor. Tom having this dread all day. Hearing Bills singing in the wind. And this figure all dressed in black standing outside.
Maybe its cause I'm sitting in my basement all alone. I have the chills now.
But I still love it. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story. :) And your reactions please me...that means I'm doing something right. LOL. Thank you!
Date: 04/21/08 05:00 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
Okay, you rock. The manly hugging and all and Simone hearing two voices, and the end, my God, the end.
I have chills.
Author's Response: No, no chills! *drapes blankets over you* Wow, everyone is having such extreme reactions to this story that it's blowing my mind. Thank you. Honestly, I'm humbled.
Date: 04/21/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
I'd leave you a better review if I could see my screen through my tears.
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. :) *hands tissues over*
Date: 04/21/08 04:55 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
HOLY SHIT CHICKADEE.
YOU'VE GOT ME FROM THE JUMP, BUT THIS SERIOUSLY CEMENTED IT.
I felt so sorry for Tom, the monotony of it all while everyone went on with their lives. No one really understands what he went through; but the knife that twisted? Gustav and Georg moving on.
Yeah, I know, they couldn't let their world end just because Tokio Hotel ended, but I didn't expect it. I know know why... I think I kinda teared up with Tom because I understood that emotion. Happiness and dread. Like doing something you should've done a long time ago and finally doing it... that dread of change but the happiness that the difficult part is finally behind you.
And then, of course then, the arrival of Bill just... I mean. Tom's scrabbling to get to his twin was so heartwrenching I teared up again! Damn you and your provoking of my tears.
If you can't figure it out, I'm waiting with bated breath on the next chapter. I just refreshed the page and BAM... there it was. And yes, it knocked me for a loop.
Author's Response: I am very pleased that you are still enjoying this story. Your comments mean more than I can say. Thank you. *squishes*rnrnSorry I made you cry. :( It was very painful to write the scene with the G's and Tom. It was the closing of one chapter and the start of another.
Date: 04/20/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
This story is good.
I shouldn't have read it but I did.
It was good.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving my story a chance. :)
Date: 04/08/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
You SHOULD be satisfied with this chapter! I had to take a break many times through it to be able to read it without my eyes glassing over XD The last instrumental concert just about killed me *bawls* That was really beautiful and a very good idea.
So, Bill is kinda back? As in a ghost, or something else? *ponder* This is seriously very good, and very emotional. I'm putting it in my faves, it deservs it.
Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks, hon, for your refreshing reviews. As for Bill being kind back...got to keep reading to find out! LOL *Huggles*
Date: 04/08/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
Wow. Glued to the screen still. My eyes clouded over in the middle and I needed a break from reaading XD
This is so damn good. Really. Wow.
Date: 04/08/08 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2: Despair
Okay, I'm completely glued to the screen. I love these kinds of stories... I might be crazy, I don't know.. but I do.
I'm gonna run to the next chapters right away.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying it. :D
Date: 04/07/08 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Confusion! Tom is very messed up, and I find his insanity a bit hard to follow, but I have no doubt it will all come together with time. Loving this story.
Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Oh dear. If it's hard to follow then that means I'm not doing a good job of portraying what I need to. Please email me at bratwaite@msn.com with any questions because I need to know what I can do to better express my point in the plot. Thanks! :)
Date: 04/07/08 10:57 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Lovely chapter! I love that the 'dream' IS sort of real and not just his imaginations. Very interesting. Tom's angst was also portrayed very well. Great chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for understanding. :D I appreciate you taking time out to review. Glad you are enjoying it and stay tuned!
Date: 04/07/08 08:16 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Why are his hands wet?? Tell me, tell me, TELL ME!!!!
I've been crying during all 4 chapters I've been reading now, and I can't stop. It's just so beautiful and sad at the same time^^')
Please write another chapter soon okay sweety??^^)
I TOTALLY LOVE THE STORY!!!^^D
Keep up with your GREATE writing^^)
Love your Liebetub
Author's Response: Remember Bill was crying in his dream? Well his hands were wet when he woke up...so it's not completely a dream. :) rnrnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/07/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Emotions in this fic pulls me.
Oh God, this is so good!
hope to read next one soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your response. Stay tuned! :)
Date: 04/07/08 04:37 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
I'm halfway torn between thinking that Tom is full-out crazy or that hes right. More soon please!
Author's Response: Hmmm. Maybe he's a bit of both? LOL. Thanks so much for taking time to review. :D
Date: 04/07/08 04:08 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Gah! I don't even know what to say. I just hope you update really soon because I need resolution! I am desperate to know how Bill intends to come back.
Author's Response: I just hope the unsaid stuff is good! LOL. Thanks for your review and I will update as soon as I can. The entire story is already mapped out and it's admittedly a strange one. But I am a strange person. Anyway, plot is mapped out, it's just a matter of me filling in the stuff between key plot points. :DrnrnThanks for giving my fic a chance. I know Death!Fic is not usually a favorite.
Date: 04/07/08 03:57 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
The realism in Tom's session with the doctor is brilliant. I'm a psych major and I've been through all the training on how to deal with patients, but I honestly don't know what I would do with Tom or how I would handle a session like that.
The scene with Simone and Tom ripped my guts out and finally made me cry.
I'm so grateful for the dream sequence and the small sense of resolution. It's given me some confidence that you aren't going to leave me completely gutted and bleeding out at the end of this.
Date: 04/07/08 03:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Despair
Blindsighted once again! I'm picturing Tom laying in bed all peaceful but mournful, and then Simone says she's going to let him up and I'm like "Wait, what?" and then the buckles and the bandages. OMG.
Author's Response: Oh dear. I'm sorry I keep torturing you, hon. :D Thanks for your review.
Date: 04/07/08 03:34 am Title: Prologue: A Promise
Shit! Oh my god.
Okay, so I knew Bill was going to die. That's pretty obvious when you say it's a deathfic and then Bill talks about dying, but that was just so abrupt. It felt like a car accident. I didn't see it coming.
I'm not a deathfic fan. I even hated my own deathfic. I'm going to keep reading though. I know this has to be good.
Date: 04/07/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
I was literally on the edge of my chair while I read that fic. There was so much heartache and sorrow and in the midst of it Tom, who knows that Bill is coming back for him but he can't tell anyone.
I wanted to cry when Tom had to be told to go to bed, because they had to restrain him.
I still don't like that therapist of his, but I adored that she gave him a stuffed animal to destroy. And then another one. I laughed aloud at that.
The dream made me sad and hopeful. At least Tom knows that Bill is coming.
Author's Response: Yes, Alexis Blaine is a bit prickly isn't she? Is there a particular point you don't like about her? I always love different viewpoints. She's not at all approachable like your Stephen is she? *beats Alexis with a stick* There. Dead. *giggles*rnrnI know I said Bill would come back in this chapter, but my muse kicked my ass and refused to let it happen. It will have to wait for the 5th now. I'm glad you are still with me on this. I need your opinion on stuff. IM tonight (4/7) maybe? Or call? Whichever. :D
Date: 04/07/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
This always makes me cry. ;_; The line in this chapter that struck me the hardest was this: "Did you see Bushido in the front row crying?" It makes Bill's death feel just a little bit more real, and of course it's a wretched feeling.
I can't wait to see where you're going to take it, because I'm just not sure... Write more soon, please!
Author's Response: Oh. *pets little ducky* Thanks for your review, hon. I've been horribly lax on responding to mine lately, so I'm trying to make amends. It is a sad fic so I'm sorry I'm making you cry. Thanks for taking a chance on this story and I hope you'll stick around. rnrnIn other notes, when are you going to draw again? Have been missing your stuff on LJ lately. :D *Hugs*