Date: 04/01/10 07:27 pm Title: Prologue: A Promise
This is one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read on this site, but since it's been a year and three months I doubt you'll continue. This was worth reading anyway, it's thought provoking and makes you want to read more, which is what a story should be. One of the best stories on this site in my opinion.
Date: 03/18/10 10:23 am Title: Chapter 6: A Worrisome Situation
OhmygodohmygodOHMYGOD! The ending of this chapter scared the crap out of me!! If that's not Bill, then who is it? And what's going on?
Author's Response: If it's scaring you, then that means I'm doing something right. *pets* And it IS Bill. He's just a little different. All will be explained by the end.
Date: 03/15/10 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
O-M-F-G!!!!!!!!!!!!
this bill scares me a little...but i desperately want him to be with tom...but wth does "what's done can't be undone" means????????
i'm so curious...
Author's Response: All will be revealed by the end of this fic, I promise you. Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 11/19/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
sweet mary...
THAT'S it, wasnt it?
they were supposed to go together but tom messed it up, didnt he? that's what went wrong, right?
i have all these crazy theories in my head and all of them point to some bizzare Ghostwhisperer-ish scenario and -ugh- its scaring the hell outta me. why the hell do i feel like there's a third party involved in all this? like someone in the backroom of things?
... it aint god, that's for sure.
Author's Response: Hmmm...very interesting theory you have there. You'll have to keep reading to see if you're right or not *wink, wink*. I took a break from writing, but I will be continuing this story soon. Don't worry, I DO plan on finishing this. :D Thanks for reading and for your patience.
Date: 11/14/09 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
this story is really good! i hope you write more soon! :/ so sad.
Date: 11/07/09 04:16 am Title: Prologue: A Promise
this story is so amazing, i just read it all over again, i do hope you plan on finishing it. it's brilliant!
Date: 09/30/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
please update this story...
Date: 06/17/09 03:36 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
OMG the suspense in killing me. We're they suppose to die together that night or was it suppose to be Tom? I cannot wait to find out what is going on.
I am curious to find out what does Bill men exactly by every time he says "What's done cannot be undone."
Author's Response: I'll let you figure out in future chapters whether or not they were supposed to die together and I'll let you in on a hint about what Bill keeps muttering: It's all about the foreshadowing in this fic. ;) Thanks for reviewing and hopefully my real life will calm down soon so I can sit back down and get the rest of this churned out. It WILL be done, just a question of WHEN. :D Stay tuned!
Date: 06/10/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
ahhhhh this needs to be finished!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will finish this, but I'm on hiatus for a bit right now. Stay tuned.
Date: 05/17/09 03:16 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
I just started this story, and I am amazed at your awesomness and you know when you find a really good fic and your like holy crap i can't believe that that just happened;Thats what happened to me in this fic. I bow dowm to you :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am happy that you are enjoying this. I am on a bit of a hiatus right now. I was steadily working and then our project ended, so I am searching for a new job right now and updating my resume. So please be patient with me, as I WILL finish this fic. :D I have everything mapped out already, so I just need time to actually sit and write it. Please stay tuned.
Date: 04/15/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Will you continue this story? I've been checking for updates (normally i forget to do it), and i was wondering if you decide to leave it like this or maybe retake it later. Very good story by the way, i like the creppy bill character.
Author's Response: Hey, hon! I am going to continue this, I just have been very busy of late and it wasn't planned. *sigh* I have the story mapped out, I just need to find time to sit down and churn it out. Please be patient with me, and thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 04/12/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
I DON'T GET IT! ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE SOON??
Author's Response: Hi, I'm sorry to be taking so long in writing this story. I WILL complete it (I have the entire story mapped out) but I've been hugely busy for a while since I went back to work. Please be patient with me. rnrnAs for the not getting it part...this story has a lot of symbolism and foreshadowing in it. I promise you that you can see where this story is going from the beginning if you just know where to look. :D
Date: 03/07/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 8: These Scars Do Not Heal
Um, I am a little freaked out by the second coming of Bill right now... but still, very well written. There were a few places where you had started writing something a character was saying, but you didn't place the end quotation marks to close the quote. Like that second to last paragraph where Bill says, "What's done, cannot be undone." That was it as far as grammatical mistakes that I saw ;-)
Date: 03/07/09 09:28 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
Oh. My. God. I must either be a sobbing, bawling mess or you just might write some good stuff. I loved this chapter, it came at just the right time. I haven't found any mistakes yet, but if I do, I will let you know.
Date: 03/07/09 09:13 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
Again, another chapter that I sobbed through. I love this chapter best so far, though. The last two chapters were good, but sometimes I felt that they didn't fully encompass in words the emotion that I felt Tom should be feeling. This chapter has it, it was spot on. Great job, I'm going to get another box of tissues before I read the next chapter ;-)
Date: 03/07/09 09:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Despair
Its amazing how easily I cried at the thought of Bill dying. And this isn't real! I honestly don't know what I'd do if one of the boys died in real life. I don't even want to think about it.
Anyways, great beginning to the story. I liked the flashback in the first chapter, it really set the tone. This chapter was excellent, as well. I feel like I am mourning right alongside Tom. I really do like stories that allow me to get very emotionally involved, and its only chapter 2 and I'm bawling, haha. Although I did have to run back to the table of contents and make sure one of the genres was paranormal, otherwise I don't think I'd be able to survive Bill's death as a plot point without that.
Date: 03/02/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
MY HOLY GOD this was fuckin amazing! i can't believe it! i got so excited!!! I gosh i got no words to say how interesting this is getting MYFUCKINGLORD! *screams aloud*
-Grimada
Date: 03/01/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Dude! What the hell man?! You better update soon...
God, this story is so... It's creepy but there's something about it that I just can't stop reading it...
This story is really great man... You seriously need to update soon I'm not even kidding.
UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews and I am working on the next part. :D
Date: 03/01/09 03:12 am Title: Chapter 8: These Scars Do Not Heal
Dude... Is Bill a demon or a vampire?
Gosh! This story is addicting!
Date: 03/01/09 03:03 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Ugh! This story is tooooo sssaaadddd man!