Date: 01/01/09 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8: These Scars Do Not Heal
:O I was so not expecting an update from you! Thank you thank you thank you! ♥ You know I'm thinking of you and your Mum *hugs*
Oh god...Bill licking Tom's cuts *___*
You have me so hooked with this story!
Author's Response: You're a sweetheart. I wanted this chapter to be longer, but my muse ran dry for the night, so what I didn't get in will have to be in chapter 9. I will try to get my phone scene for our fic done in the next few days or so. Thanks for the hugs. *squishes*
Date: 12/01/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
omg om go mgom gogmomgmoomgom update update this story gives me chills it made me ruin my bill manicure (yeah black nails white tips) i lov it please coutine it
Date: 11/16/08 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
wow!! i am so glad bill is back but very curious as to what is really going on. please update again soon. i hope things have settled for you and sorry you had to go through such an ordeal. i'll try to be patient and wait for an update...its just that this story is soo good!
Date: 11/15/08 03:43 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
That was beautiful! More dreams right? Right?? I like them... I"m totally favoriting it! *sniffles and looks away to hide my puffy eyes from you
Date: 10/07/08 03:09 am Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
OH MY GOD CONTINUE AS SOON AS YOU CAN, I will be waiting impatiently for this!!!!!!!!
so fucking good, woah woah WOAH
Date: 09/29/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
I have two news:
-one: i stopped crying since the previous chapter! that's the good one!
-two: I bit my lip too hard when reading and i hurt myself.It hurt,fortunately it didn't bleed much.It was an accident ,really! but this fic left me trembling a bit.I'd exagerate if i said i trembled a lot,but i'm not lying when i say my heart race twice faster!
Bill questioned tom why he didn't wonder where did bill appear from.Tom won't care,he isn't thinking anymore.
And Bill, what dark force is in him,that he 's like he's going to kill everybody? OMG! this is a horror movie script! give it to hollywood they'd make it a movie!lol
Date: 09/29/08 09:37 am Title: Chapter 6: A Worrisome Situation
AAAAAhh!! it's fucking scary!! O_O
What's going on?
I understand simone,Bill reminds me of samara from "the ring" *shudders*,but more scary because he looks physicaly "normal",but his eyes are dark and void,he is DEAD!! Tom is so into his own world of happiness,he knew Bill would come back,and to him, it don't matter how, or whatever are the circumstances of his brother's return. He didn't care that Bill was returning from the dead *brrr!! scary!*
But for Simone, OMG! Fo her, her son s ten feet in the ground in a coffin. He is dead, so who-or what is that person?
I scratched my skin a bit when i read this chapter because i couldn't stop shuddering and imagine gore things. Bill is now, scaring me to death. He's not human...
In the previous chapters, you spoke about Bill being lost. But i recall a scene where tom found his eyes so dark when he was on the stone. There are things i don't understand ,but i guess it is part of the suspens...
Date: 09/29/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
What can i say? I HATE YOU!!
don't be so shocked!i didn't really mean it(or yes...) I hate you as much as I LOVE YOU!
You're the first person ever! writing a fanfiction,who could keep deep angst every chapter and keep me crying in front of my screen. I look stupid, i'm very emotional,and i regret the moment i wanted to give this finaly a try,yet at the same time i'm glad i stopped avoiding this fic.
I'm confused,i don't know what i feel,my nose is running and i don't have tissue,and you know what i do now? I wipe it off with my shirt(disgusting i know, but i don't care!)
You know what i think? Thre should be cops to arrest overtalented people lol!! undrockroll,cynical_terror,majestrix,little muse,you,...you'd be all arrested for making people cry! lol but i want to give you all an award too.
My cat gomez is sleeping next to me,and i'm suddenly glad he's there,so i can stroke his warm fur for comfort.You see what you do to me?Usually i kick the shit out of him when he's nearby,because he always wants to sleep on my laptop,it's warm there.I guess he can thank you too,i don't kick him.
Now with the chapter(yes this review isn't other yet lol! i'm a very talkative french girl you see.and i'm trying to improve my english so if you thought at first i'm insane,or stupid it's okay,because surely somewhere in my reviews i did some major grammar error or something.
whatever...When i read this,it's like i'm watching a movie,a horror movie(or not totaly ). I mean, my heart jumped a lot ,this far.Especially when simone heard another voice in the monitor *shudders*
the suspens is killing me sometimes, my eyes are glued to each word and before i know it,i read the last one of the chapter.I was so into it.the story has it's own logic making it so believable.
Tom's anger towards Bill when he thought that Bill was ignoring him, simone's reactions...
The dark atmosphere...
What else?
(G.Clooney:"-nespresso!"
Me: "-shut up!")
Sorry for that lol,everytime i see the question "what else?" it rminds me of the guy U_u
I guess i should stop this review here before you yawn,annoyed.
Date: 09/29/08 08:33 am Title: Chapter 4: Mood Swings
Okay, now i knos i'll cry every chapter. i'm proud of myself,in this chapter my eyes only watered but my tears didn't fall! And i even laughed a few times. I can't believe you put some funny scenes in a morbidly sad chapter.I'm glad for that,because it helps a lot to not drown totaly in the angst.Real talent always manage to "touch" the heart of the reader,or if you were a paint artist,your canvas would've been beautiful
Date: 09/29/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
OMG,i can't stop my tears. Simone being the one causing them to fll! her despair as a mother was too much for me,it made me cry. My heat couldn't stop racing through the whole chapter.Tom's dram was very interessant and i felt like I was the one dreaming,you know. Oh my,i thought sophia and muse were the masters of angst,but here you are tearing my poor reader's heart with your words. You're talented^^ and i'm glad someone talented wrote something like this.There re people with great ideas of fic, but they lack the talent to master the art of writing and eventualy the fic is a big disapointment. Thanks!
Date: 09/29/08 07:56 am Title: Chapter 2: Despair
wow! poor tomi
Date: 09/29/08 06:57 am Title: Prologue: A Promise
oh!! okay, i admit that the "character death" thing was scaring me a bit. But somehow i gave this a try,still. He's dead in the first chapter so now i think i can continue lol! because no strings where attached to the charactere yet.I mean,when you read a fic,and you're sooo in love with the characters and their world,and at the end the author decides to end their life...Even if it was beautiful ending despite the death,it hurt so much to read it. But here,it made me a bit uneasy,BUT mostly,i'm curious now,there's no way for me to let this go,i want to find out what you have in store. It's rare a begining like this,and we all know how rare too original stories can be^^
Date: 09/28/08 06:23 pm Title: Prologue: A Promise
Honey! -hugs- Omg, I'm so glad you're okay! That must've been terrifying... and 16 days?! Unbelievable. You're one tough trooper. :) Keep on keepin' on, sweetheart. ♥
Date: 09/12/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
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Author's Response: Is this a good or a bad thing? *is perplexed*
Date: 09/11/08 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
Wow. o.O This is amazing! I've never read anything like it before.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am happy that you like it. Stay tuned!
Date: 09/10/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
gahhhhh, scary!!
freaky!!
bill, dont hurt her! or..
saki will..
um. eat you...
SO THERE ¬_¬
Author's Response: *giggles* Cute! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :D
Date: 09/08/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
Its so good that Bill came back to Tom like he said. But answer me this why is his mom acting like that?
Author's Response: She's acting like that because something is wrong with Bill. You'll find out what later on. Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/08/08 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
Bill seems different, he still loves Tom but he's changed. What did he do? Update soon!
Author's Response: I promise you will all find out in good time. *hugs* Thanks for reading and I'll try to update later this week.
Date: 09/08/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
I am ECSTATIC that you are updating this again :) You write beautifully--easy to read and understand, yet not simple and completely intelligent. It'd be a shame if you let your stories collect dust for too long ;)
I can't wait to see more, and WTF BILL D: You better explain this! :P
Author's Response: Hello, Lynn, my love! Thanks so much for your review! I really appreciate your opinion and I will do my best to continue to update this regularly. But you are torturing me as well with no HA lately. *pouts* Pretty please? With naked Bills and Toms on top? LOL! <3333
Date: 09/08/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
oh my godddd....
III WANNA READ MORE AND MORE AND MOOORE
Its alwayyyss soo goood.
Author's Response: Well I'll do my best to give you more to read. LOL. Hopefully later this week if I get this next chapter outlined right. Thanks for reviewing!