Reviews For Make You Cream
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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/18 10:48 pm Title: Want some, Tomi?

this was a good story!

Reviewer: cj89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 12:15 am Title: Want some, Tomi?

Ewww did they go to bed all sticky like that? Bill should at least give his Tomi a wash.

Author's Response: LMAO hell naws, Bill's too much of a neat freak for that :D

Reviewer: kaulitzgirl4evr101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 12:15 am Title: Want some, Tomi?

this is a great syrupy,marshmellowy,whipped cream fan fiction ever. and i gotta say from the moment i saw the title i knew it would be great.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it :P

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 12:12 am Title: Want some, Tomi?

Very yummy food play XDDD I loved that...
Top!Bill with Bot!Tom ALWAYS love. *_*
I liked the food play.. and
the "I'd carry you upstairs Tomi but I can't" Like LOL. xDDD

Really enjoyed it :)


Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! That line almost didn't make it in there, I'm glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 10:16 pm Title: Want some, Tomi?

I totally meant to say this earlier, however...

I'm not into food play...but this was HAWT. (And besides, I only read this food play, cause it was yours.)

*Throws glitter everywhere*

*Shakes hands cause glitter got stuck to hand*

*WAILS* IT WONT GO AWAY!

Author's Response: Oh my! Thank you! And, uh, maybe if you just wipe your hand against Tom it will all get stuck to him instead :P

Reviewer: OWL Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 06:02 am Title: Want some, Tomi?

Evvie, your sex scenes are godly. Damn, I can never write as great as you, especially with sex and smut. Lend me your awesome! XD
OMGZ. I LOVED THE WHIPPED CREAM!!!! Butterscotch, marshmallows... bahh I love it!! Great job! You definitely gave justice to my dare ;) I'm glad you are finally out of the WB.
You must be dared again!!! :D

--Jilly

Author's Response: I'm glad the dare is over! And I doubt they're godly, but thank you! You'll be good at smut soon you just got to writewritewrite :P I am not being dared again! Uh uh, no way!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 05:23 am Title: Want some, Tomi?

Mmmmm. I'm totally craving a sundae now. :p
Very yummy smut. :]

Author's Response: They're good, but even better when Tom's the ice cream! Thank you :D

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