Reviews For Initiation
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Reviewer: sweetjazminelee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/13 05:43 pm Title: 12: Dual

Ohhhh I can't wait for the next chapter. I am so excited right now. I need to know what happens next.

Reviewer: THE Queen of Bad Puns Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/13 06:58 pm Title: 12: Dual

Why haven't you uploaded yet? There's only one chapter left! Please update! Please? :D

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/12 06:26 am Title: 12: Dual

At the beginning it says daughter instead of son

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/12 06:11 am Title: 10: Royal Summons

It says " you never asked her nicola replied " when referring to bill

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/12 12:26 am Title: 8: Revelry

Lol grounded until further notice somehow i don't think julian will abide by that

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 07:31 pm Title: 6: Dream On

Okay when they are getting on the bus it says tomboy a term usually used for girls and in the forest sequence it says dress

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 06:07 pm Title: 5: Matchmaker

On the part where bill tells andreas what regan said it says " perfect girl for the job"

Reviewer: Hikari Elric Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/12 05:40 pm Title: 4: Naming Names

Oh holy crap where is that outfit considered dressing up for omg

Reviewer: xxxRosaxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/12 11:50 am Title: 12: Dual

I know I always only comment on the last chapter posted buts its cuz im so into the story I really just wanna keep reading I really hope you post the next chapter I know u havet posted in a while but I really wanna know how it ends

Reviewer: Jennilouulovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 10:07 pm Title: 1: Bite

Wow. First off, I only review stories I reallly like. And looky here, a review for you! And what a killler cliffhanger! I need the final chapter!! Update soon please? 'insert puppy dog eyes here'

Reviewer: Jennilouulovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 10:07 pm Title: 1: Bite

Wow. First off, I only review stories I reallly like. And looky here, a review for you! And what a killler cliffhanger! I need the final chapter!! Update soon please? 'insert puppy dog eyes here'

Reviewer: teamjumbie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/11 12:32 am Title: 12: Dual

i hope you realized that this chapter killed me! i was so happy just rading of the love between the two butthen you had to go screw up my happehness...... lol i need to get a life hehe

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/11 12:18 am Title: 2: Flight

Awesome story! I find it rather interesting and will finish reading the rest of the story another time ^^

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 08:04 pm Title: 1: Bite

oooh okay. :) good luck with everything though ^__^ have u written many books besides this? Yes, yes, yes. I'd love to :D :D Where can I find it? ^^

Author's Response:

Whoot! okay.

 It's posted on inkpop.com under the title 'Initiation'. (It's both books that are on THFF. I was going to change that but I'll leave it alone for a bit so you can have a chance to find it and add me!) You'll have to sign up for the site (its an original fiction archive sponsored by Harper Literature) then search for it. I've got a few other original things on there as well.

 Technically I've written two books. They're under the Court of Roses series on this site. I'm in the middle of the third.

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 07:22 pm Title: 1: Bite

Ehh. I'm terribly sorry to ask this in a review, but.. changeling and this one, its an actual novel you've published, but you've just changed the names here? Ahh it's so cool ^^ I've always wanted to publish something.. ee. how does it feel? :D *feels incredibly stupid now* sowwy ^^

Author's Response:

oh, no no no no. I haven't published either of my books yet. I'm atill hunting for an agent to help me publish my work. (I'll tell you one thing, if you think writing is hard, finding someone to take your novel is even harder! lol)

You're correct on the name-changing bit, too. (The same goes for gender in Bill's case- in the original book he's a girl.) Also, don't feel stupid- I like questions. I like them a lot. They give me a chance to ramble on about stomething and maybe give someone an answer. X3 Feel free to ask me just about anything.

By the way, if you want to read the original work (with a couple of scenes that i deleted from here because I couldn't exactly put Bill in a dress) then let me know. I'll give you the info for finding it online. =3

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 06:31 pm Title: 9: Grounded

:D :D *favoriting*

Author's Response: yay! =]

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 02:40 pm Title: 3: Family

So andreas's real name is matthew? Interesting. :D i like both names. hehe ^^

Author's Response: ^^ Glad you like it hun!

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 02:38 pm Title: 2: Flight

:D :D It's all i can say. because im bad at leaving reviews but i really feel that i want too :D i love this.

Author's Response: Glad you dug it dear! <3 You get cyber-cake for that. -hands over cake-

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 02:36 pm Title: 1: Bite

just finished changeling (or how u spell it) and i absolutely loved it. im sorry for not reviewing. i normally dont XD anyway.. i really really like this. its different from what i normally read. can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reviewing anyway. I'm glad you're enjoying my books. ^_^

 A good review strategy is to tell the author what you liked, what you though they might be able to improve upon and what you'd like to see them do next. (Be that with the story or their writing in general). Just in case you wanted to know. ^^

Reviewer: DieNacht1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 09:04 pm Title: 6: Dream On

interesting story

Author's Response: Why, thank you. Please tell me you read 'Changeling' first? ^_^;; otherwise this won't have made much sense...

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