Date: 09/30/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter One - Decode
lol at the crotch thing :D
This fic is funny and refreshing ^^ Please update soon ^^
Author's Response: thank you! :3rnI'm happy you enjoyed reading it. rnOnwards to third chappie!
Date: 09/30/10 08:31 pm Title: Prologue: All The Things She Said
I like your writing style ^^ It will be interesting when she met Tom :O
Author's Response: Thank you! ^>^rnI appreciate it.rnoh, don't worry in how she will meet Tom...rn*inserts evil laugh here*
Date: 09/26/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter One - Decode
Mooooooooore.... Noooooooooow.... I´ve only read two/ one and a half chapter... but i´m already addicted.... Please, update now!! Cause this is frickin' amazing... And, i don´t like the haters either... i find them creepy... Sure, i would understand if somebody "hated" the band if his/hers friend talked about them 24/7 but... then you´re not really a hater... u... just don´t like 'em...
Author's Response: Thankies, and no worries, there will be more.rnI'm not sure if I'm missing any type of fans, that's Riene for you. X3
Date: 09/26/10 11:58 am Title: Chapter One - Decode
really good so far, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thankies, glad you likies it, don't worry, there is more. X3
Date: 07/25/10 07:45 am Title: Prologue: All The Things She Said
Hm, okay. Your plot isn't bad. Infact, the idea's definitely workable.
Some advice I'd like to give you: (Warning, I'm honest)- which you may accept or just chuck away - But I would recommend a good banner artist and a nice catchy banner. Also, maybe a better, less vague summary. Your writing style isn't bad, although its a little...abrupt maybe? I don't read each word, I just skim, because there isn't enough substance.
You have a good idea here, though, and it would be disappointing for it to not get noticed. All the best!
-Ice
Author's Response: Thankies for the advice Ice (hey, I made a rhyme! :D Cool~.) and for the compliment as well. I do appreciate the comment (and the advice, I really do need help) Less vague summary? Hmmm (>.<), I may try to lessen the summary, maybe make it a simple one though. I thought that my writing style would be sloppy or kinda child like or something like that. I'm still trying to find a banner artist for this story (or I might make the banner on my own though, still not sure). I may need a beta reader as well. (Also, sorry to ask, but why do you meant by not enough substance? o.o)rnrnAgain, thankies! :3 (I'll edit the prologue again when I have time, lastly, thank you so muchies. :3)