Date: 01/20/11 10:08 am Title: Shutout
I hope the fact that this hasn't been updated since August doesn't mean you've stopped working on it. :( It's good, though, and I'd like to see more.
Date: 01/12/11 12:06 am Title: Shutout
Awwwww! this is too cute! More please :)
Date: 01/05/11 09:46 am Title: Laws of the Game
this story is great!!so hot and sweet,pls write more,we can't wait!
Date: 12/07/10 11:52 pm Title: Shutout
So i just read first part and this part..I am absolutely addicted. These stories are fabulous. I love Tom and bill in these stories, I hope u are still writing this because it is amazing
Date: 11/06/10 01:24 pm Title: Shutout
Please update soon! I love this story!
Date: 11/03/10 11:32 pm Title: Shutout
I was so excited when I saw you were working on this sequel. i just saw but better late than never. I just reread the first one and I loved it as much the second time as I did the first. Keep up the great work on this one, I can't wait for more!
Date: 09/29/10 06:36 am Title: Laws of the Game
GAH. I saw "...possible change of heart" on the summary and I was like "Do I WANT to read this &get my heartbroken if Bill and Tom break up?! I can't handle that *pulls out hair*"
Date: 09/21/10 10:29 am Title: Shutout
Bwahahaha! God,Lucy's so much fun! I don't thinks she's a bad person, she's just kind of...Unique? LOL. Poor Bill, but I so envy him for having a boyfriend like Tom. I can picture over what sort of things they'd argue, but I think they're the type to always come back to each other even when their quarells result in the other taking some time off for some time somewhere else. I love this story :)
Date: 09/21/10 10:02 am Title: Obstruction
OMFG! I didn't know you wrote a sequel to "on defence". Well, I don't know how I managed to miss it, it's strange, but I'm very very happy you wrote this. Ilove the way you develop your characters, and the way everything is realistic. Looks like we'll have lots of fun with Lucy :)
Date: 09/10/10 08:29 pm Title: Shutout
Hi!
So I just read 'On Deffense' and was inevitably dragged into catch up with this one, too.
I love Tom and Bill's characters here. They are absolutely breathtaking!
Lucy now, she's a funny add to the story. Most couples have to deal sometime with getting along with their partner's relatives. It's always sort of awkward. Bill is doing just great, anyway; plus, he got a gorgeous Gucci bag!
Anyway, I'm absolutely looking forward to read what's next.
See ya.
Date: 09/09/10 11:40 am Title: Shutout
Please update! I absolutley love this series, and I miss it terribly :)
Date: 08/30/10 08:38 am Title: Shutout
omg you don't want to know how i reacted when i heard about this fic. i almost started to cry. XD
okay, yeah... i'm so glad about this fic. i mean, i'm so happy, that you have started to write this.
i don't know what to say about the chapters... OH, i facepalmed, when i read that Tom's-gift-to-Bill thing. seriously, Gucci bag?
Date: 08/28/10 08:33 pm Title: Shutout
I absolutely adore this story! I can't get enough of it!!!
I couldn't stop laughing when Bill told Tom that Lucy saw him pinching his nipple! I bursted into a fit of giggles! I could actually picture it LOL!
Date: 08/27/10 10:17 am Title: Obstruction
Tom's present better be a good one, his mother doesn't seem the nicest of people.
“Dsquared isn’t a math problem, you know.”
Awesome!
Date: 08/27/10 10:00 am Title: Laws of the Game
I absolutely loved this chapter.
When Tom asked Bill to move in with him, I squealed and excitedly clapped my hands.
Amazing!
Date: 08/26/10 04:03 pm Title: Shutout
lmfao. This was fucking hilarious. Just the laugh I needed.
Date: 08/17/10 02:32 pm Title: Shutout
I love how hard Bill tries things out of his comfort-zone, just because he loves Tom so much :) Those sweethearts. I also feel like Lucy has a hidden meaning, a secret or a life wisdom that'll turn out to either save or ruin everything. Bill and Tom clearly have such a good relationship, though I can sense some trouble in paradise possibly ahead if Bill continues feeling very alone with Tom on his play trips.
Date: 08/15/10 02:24 pm Title: Shutout
Loved it as usual girl! ;)
Date: 08/14/10 02:51 pm Title: Shutout
LOL this chapter was hilarious! The whole situation is so amusingly awkward by itself, but her slugging Bill in the face and then walking in on him was icing on the cake. I'm really, really enjoying this sequel
Date: 08/14/10 10:38 am Title: Shutout
Ohhhh dayyuummm. XD so saw that coming. The sleepwalking no, but her walking in yes. XD let's hope she isn't too scarred. XP