Date: 03/10/12 12:01 pm Title: Interlude
I'm glad you started writing this again! I had to take a minute to remember what it was about, but yay anyway! Can't wait for more.
Date: 03/10/12 11:12 am Title: Laws of the Game
I am so happy that you and this story are back:-)
Date: 03/10/12 09:47 am Title: Interlude
I've been craving for this for ages! Moooore, pleeease!
Date: 03/10/12 08:38 am Title: Interlude
Omg you have no idea how happy this update makes me!!! Thank you! =D Ive missed this story and these characters so much and I'm super excited to read more about them!
Date: 03/10/12 08:10 am Title: Interlude
I thought I was dreaming when I saw this was updated. Thank you so much for working on this story again.
Date: 02/07/12 06:51 pm Title: Shutout
PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story soooooo much...
Date: 11/28/11 04:48 pm Title: Shutout
Can you continue this sequel :( ! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase
Date: 11/14/11 12:21 pm Title: Shutout
Cool sequel so far. I like that the characters still feel like the characters from On Defense even if a year has gone passed. :)
Date: 10/13/11 08:01 pm Title: Shutout
hope you finish it it is amazing
Date: 09/21/11 02:39 pm Title: Shutout
oh god your brilliant! im enjoying this series so much. your such an amazing author and i love reading your work. cant wait for the next one! :D
Date: 07/21/11 10:42 am Title: Laws of the Game
Still planning on writing this even if it kills you?
Date: 07/13/11 05:07 pm Title: Laws of the Game
This is one of my fave parts in this chapter:
“I think I fell in love with you over this thing, so…” Tom bit his lip and looked out at Bill. “So maybe it’s appropriate I do this on here.”
“You’re not breaking up with me, right?” Bill said with a little grin and immediately remembered why he wasn’t supposed to talk. He was really good at ruining moments.
“Yeah, that’s right,” Tom said, smiling back. “Give me back my soccer jersey and get the hell out of here.”
- LOLOLOL, I love the humor in this. It makes me giggle but oh God Tom is such a dreamguy in this story. I swear, your story is one of the absolute best I've ever read if not THE best.
Tom is so warm and loving and sexy and hot and sweet and dirty and funny and just... ahh, I swear I find him completely perfect in this story.
Screw money! Love is the most important thing and if I had a guy like Tom, I wouldn't care about anything else!!!!!
XD
your story makes me happy.
"Do you wanna fuck?"
"No, I wanna make love"
OHHHH, TOM Y U SO PERFECT!!!!!!? =D
I love it, keep the amazing work!
Date: 07/12/11 09:27 pm Title: Shutout
Haahaa I just read on defense and now I read this! I love you and your writing. I hope they don't break up I love them so much
Date: 06/22/11 05:52 pm Title: Laws of the Game
Plz update
Date: 04/10/11 11:56 pm Title: Shutout
Oh my gosh, that is so creepy and yet funny at the same time! Hopefully Bill and Tom's bedroom door locks and they can get back up to what they were doing! I hope the hilarious awkwardness with Tom's mom continues :)
Date: 04/05/11 03:26 pm Title: Shutout
I loved On defense and I love this. Please update soon, when you can that is.
Date: 02/13/11 09:24 am Title: Shutout
pleaseeeeeeee pleaseeeeee pleaseeeee update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/08/11 12:49 pm Title: Shutout
hahhaahah oh gawwwd that is too funny, i can picture her perfectly for some reason, i need more though, i can't figure her out! eep eep i love this tom and bill, so much love. can't wait for more in this series :)
Date: 02/06/11 01:25 pm Title: Shutout
I've just read On Defense again, followed by this and gosh I miss this universe :) I hope you have time and inspiration to finish this some time, because this Bill and Tom definitely deserve their happily ever after :)