Date: 03/17/12 09:02 pm Title: MVP
OMGGGGGGG i'm dying ! i waas so happy when a found this chapter, please don't make us wait long ! one of the best series ever !
Date: 03/17/12 08:26 pm Title: MVP
Im absolutely inlove with this story. its the only thing in the Recent stories that i look forward to!
Date: 03/16/12 01:28 pm Title: Interlude
I reread On Defense just to refreshen my memory of it so that I could read this =) I'm loving this sequel already & i'm hoping there will be more soon!
Date: 03/14/12 06:03 pm Title: Interlude
wow, Lucy was quite entertaining...I'd like to see then stuck together for another weekend, maybe while Tom is there so that Bill has to work extra hard not to be his sexy self in front of her...hahaa. I can't wait to see where you go with this, hopefully sooner rather than later :) good luck!
Date: 03/12/12 01:54 am Title: Laws of the Game
wooooooooo!!! loved these two in on defense...I tried to save this until it seemed that it may be finished, because I don't like being left hanging, and since it's been updated I decided to go for it, what with how slow the site is right now...can't wait to see what happens for these two, they're so sexy together they burn my brainnnnnnn
Date: 03/11/12 05:08 pm Title: Interlude
OMGGG ! that's amaaaazing, the characters are so good
Date: 03/11/12 03:45 pm Title: Interlude
Awww, Bill held out and now he gets his reward: Tom and a bag.
Date: 03/11/12 03:27 pm Title: Interlude
You honestly just made my day!
Date: 03/11/12 02:32 pm Title: Interlude
Before i reed, i just wanted to tell you that i'm so so so glaaaad you are writing chapters for the story again, that's soooooooo goood, i'v been like waiting for years !
Date: 03/11/12 12:07 pm Title: Interlude
so happy :))))
Date: 03/11/12 11:12 am Title: Laws of the Game
I literally screamed and started dancing around when I saw this updated. *is still dancing*
Date: 03/11/12 05:20 am Title: Interlude
Oh my God I can't believe my eyes! I really love this story, and I really loved this chapter, even if it was short. Please, write more and soon, it was a nice surprise seeing an update today!
Date: 03/11/12 04:02 am Title: Interlude
You finally updated!! Yaaaaaaay! ^.^
Date: 03/11/12 01:29 am Title: Interlude
*_______* Stars in my eyes. Stars. I'm so, SO excited to get an update on this, you don't even know.
They are such an adorable couple together, Bill being so bratty and spoiled, and Tom taking care of him so, so well. But I'm a bit irked on his behalf he didn't take Bill seriously at all. :( I hope that doesn't turn up to haunt Tom later.
So so so hoping for an update soon. I love this sequel so much and On Defense is still one of my favorites. ♥
Date: 03/10/12 09:38 pm Title: Interlude
I don't care if this was the "interlude" it was wonderful. I'm so excited that your back with this fic. *--*
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, because this fic is worth it and I love it. Is so good to know of "On Offense" again. ^_^
Date: 03/10/12 07:21 pm Title: Interlude
Praise the lord, I needed that. So much het on the site these days, it's good to see a resurgence of the old classics. Thanks!
Date: 03/10/12 03:36 pm Title: Interlude
Haha I freaking Love Bill, that's way too funny! I'm so happy you're posting again!
Date: 03/10/12 03:13 pm Title: Interlude
Seeing this update made my entire weekend! I've loved your writing since I first stumbled into TH fandom, and On Defense is one of my favorite stories of all time because it's Bill and Tom and SOCCER and you really can't get much of a better mix than that! :D
It's incredible that you're still working on this! Thank you very much for posting this interlude!
I love how Bill is so intimidated by Tom's mom (and I don't blame him), but now that Tom's home, I'm sure he'll make it up to him. Somehow. And not with more bags. ;) I can't wait to read more!
Date: 03/10/12 02:31 pm Title: Interlude
Im so glad this was updated! lol :) this is one of my favorites! can't wait for the next chap! this was great :]
Date: 03/10/12 02:14 pm Title: Interlude
yay finally this is the most amazing story.