Reviews For On Offense
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Reviewer: impossiblek Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 03:41 am Title: Laws of the Game

Oh my God, you have no idea how loud I squealed when I saw this! I loved On Defense (I still read it regularly) and I've been waiting/hoping for months for this sequel! I love your writing and I love this whole AU world you've created. I'm already dying for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 03:21 am Title: Laws of the Game

aww well, i loved the way tom asked bill to move
simone is being a pain in the ass but damn shes right ¬¬

Reviewer: meridian_star Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 03:09 am Title: Laws of the Game

*bounces happily* loved the first one! Excited to see where this goes (especially that slightly familiar flag on the banner there XD)

Reviewer: HeiligeHarmonie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:37 am Title: Laws of the Game

Ooh, thank you, thank you for finally writing this! :D I'm so happy! :D I'm kind of scared of what you may have planed, though O.O

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:32 am Title: Laws of the Game

YAY! I loved the first one so much, I am very much excited for this! I love it already!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:20 am Title: Laws of the Game

That Tom is sneaky but that was so romantic. And hot. Can't forget the hot. *_*

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:03 am Title: Laws of the Game

I lahv deez boiz.
DEES MAI FAVORITE :3
ZO ESSITED YOU DECIDE TO MAKE SEQUEL.
Okay, sorry. :3

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 01:12 am Title: Laws of the Game

aw i remember thiss

Reviewer: Haylz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:49 am Title: Laws of the Game

askdkjkdjkdjd MMMMMMMMMM *__*

I am so happy to see these two sexy boys back! :D

Reviewer: tokiobillhotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:14 am Title: Laws of the Game

:') So beautiful.
I felt bad for Bill and sorta wanted to call Tom a dumbass at first but that ending scene made up for it. :) Wonderful, wonderful job.

Reviewer: Rockrchickk65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:11 am Title: Laws of the Game

I was getting scared for a second there but...*sigh* loveeee. :) Although from the summary I can already see this won't be an easy journey. *bites nails*

Reviewer: RetteLeana Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:10 am Title: Laws of the Game

*_______________________*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heeeeeeeeeeee I wish I could leave a more helpful review but 8D~~~~~~~~ this is me right now!! ^____^

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:03 am Title: Laws of the Game

oh, I forgot, just so you know, I frequently refer to the video-sex from On Defense in my mind during my, ahem, personal, private time. It's quite inspiring to say the least. ;)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:01 am Title: Laws of the Game

Ohhhh I love these boys so much!! *flails madly* I'm SO excited to see more of them, you don't even know!! This is just utterly perfect, each and every section, and of course the two of them are so smoldering together they make me swoon. *___* Thank youuuuuu for making my night!!

Reviewer: MacFosty Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:59 pm Title: Laws of the Game

Finalllyyy :DD

*fans self*

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:58 pm Title: Laws of the Game

OMG YES!!!!

a SQUEEEEQUAL!!!!!

LOVE this story series. LOVE you. LOVE LOVE LOVE. xoxoxoxo

Fucking hot sex, btw. Yes indeed. ;)

Thank you for this, and I'll be sitting here every week waiting somewhat impatiently for updates. :)))))

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:57 pm Title: Laws of the Game

Holy smoke's..I felt every bit of that...what emotion with those two-I can't get enough.
Tom making Bill squirm was great!
Looking forward to the next chapter...thank's for writing the sequel-was hoping for more on these two!

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:45 pm Title: Laws of the Game

Yay! Awesome! :D I love Bill in this story :D and the thought of tom being a soccer player is still awesome

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:44 pm Title: Laws of the Game

finally!!!!!!!! T________________T

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 11:43 pm Title: Laws of the Game

Love, love, love, love. Tom loves Bill, Bill loves Tom, and I loved this. I had always wondered what happened to these two, and look how you read my mind! I can't wait for more <3

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