Date: 07/26/10 07:51 pm Title: Obstruction
Oh boy! This is going to be interesting !
I'm totally in love with your characters, they are awesome, as friends and lovers, true love at its best :)
Date: 07/26/10 07:47 pm Title: Obstruction
Ouch, I feel chills and they remind me an awful lot of a soulless mother vibes :/ I'm really excited about, and of course enjoying, this story. The Union Jack in the banner seems like a hint, but you're not giving it away yet anyways, and now the mum-thing was totally out of the blue. I wonder what all you got cooked up for these two lovebirds :) I love their interaction, and the bit of them being friends as well as lovers was really sweet.
Date: 07/26/10 07:39 pm Title: Obstruction
lmao. oooooh nein. poor bill. O-o
love it!!! gimme mehr bitte.
Date: 07/26/10 07:32 pm Title: Obstruction
Oh shit, Poor Bill
>.<
Date: 07/26/10 07:27 pm Title: Obstruction
oh this is just getting better and better :D
Date: 07/26/10 07:26 pm Title: Obstruction
omg ._.
@_@
jhsafjfds
@____@
I hate lucy, I prefered Tom's mom in TRILIUM D:
this is truly awesome and I love, love loooooove their relationship :)
thank youuuu ♥
Date: 07/26/10 07:13 pm Title: Obstruction
Lucy's is going to be a problem! Im so happy you updated and cant wait for more!
Date: 07/26/10 09:04 am Title: Laws of the Game
Oh, I Can't Wait For More.
Date: 07/25/10 07:08 am Title: Laws of the Game
aw wow i completely overlooked this fic! I was so happy to see a sequel :D already i love it, i adore both your characterisations and your writing i amazing! Always such a treat to read. Sooo looking forward to chapter two :) take care!
Date: 07/21/10 04:56 pm Title: Laws of the Game
Oh my god! I'm so excited to see that you've decided to post a sequel to On Defense, one of my favorite fic ever! I LOVE the first chapter, it's so sweet to see how much in love they are... The summary makes me a bit nervous tho, I hope it's not a change in their feelings for each other cause that would break my heart! They are the most adorable couple ever :)
The mental image of Tom in a commercial is totally hilarious! And I like how he asked Bill to move in with him by webcam, so cute! I really can't wait for the next chapter !
Date: 07/21/10 04:41 pm Title: Laws of the Game
So cute & so hot ^^
Simone is getting on my nerves though, HAHA xD
Date: 07/21/10 10:10 am Title: Laws of the Game
I'm so happy you decided to make a sequel.I really liked On Defense and wouldn'y mind reading more about soccer player!Tom and his pretty boyfriend BillXD
I love how Simone was with Bill.I guess all moms are the same huh?lol
Date: 07/20/10 11:46 pm Title: Laws of the Game
Aww he got his Tiffany's after all. Great first chapter even if I want to beat Tom's head in for being so cheap and not taking Bill on a proper date in a year. I really liked it and can't wait for more.
Date: 07/20/10 10:19 pm Title: Laws of the Game
Aaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! *_______*
Omg, that scene between them was so sexy! I knew the sequel would be good but damn girl, that was H-O-T. So glad you're continuing with these two. < 333
Date: 07/20/10 08:11 pm Title: Laws of the Game
I'm so excited to see a sequel I'm grinning like a loon. Especially after this chapter *wink wink* I'm going to track this immediately because I already know it's going to be good!
Date: 07/20/10 07:48 pm Title: Laws of the Game
So glad they're back. I can't even tell you how much I love this pairing.
Date: 07/20/10 06:01 pm Title: Laws of the Game
OMG!!! i was thinking that you had give up on this! I'm so HAPPY!!!!
And what a awesome first chapter.
It was so cute that tom knew exactly what bill had in mind! Loved it :)
Date: 07/20/10 04:38 pm Title: Laws of the Game
I can't even express how excited I am about this.
Amazing chapter, looks like it will be an amazing sequel, and again I need to stress how freaking excited I am. Thank you so much for continuing with these two! Unf!
Date: 07/20/10 04:25 pm Title: Laws of the Game
I'm so happy to finally read this sequel, you have no idea. ç__ç
I love this story so much, I was rereading some of it yesterday, too. **
And... this chapter was the most romantic I've ever read, I was actually squirming on my chair while Tom asked for Bill to move in through the webcam... ç_ç And it was so hot at the end, and so cute, so everything... I'm honestly speechless XD I don't really know how to explain how much I loved and love and surely will love this story. (L)
You are really the best. :D
Can't wait to read more of it, of course. (L)
Date: 07/20/10 01:46 pm Title: Laws of the Game
Guh. Okay, that last bit was so hot and sweet that coherency's gone right out the window. Um. Anyway. Eeee, I'm so excited for this sequel! They're both so amazingly bratty sometimes; I love that Tom made Bill squirm before popping the question, heh. And this line made me crack up: They made out in the street until Simone swore at them from the garage.
To sum up, ♥♥♥!