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Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 07:33 pm Title: Obstruction

oh gawwwd...i hope tom's mom doens't make bill's weekend that much of a hell...

Reviewer: Fifi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 05:56 pm Title: Obstruction

The mother in law of doom!!!

OMG good luck to you Bill

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 04:39 pm Title: Obstruction

XD Poor Bill XD

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 01:55 pm Title: Obstruction

Wow, how did that woman give birth to Tom???? Just asking, because she really scares me lol! Great sexy times and also bitchy stuff. The chemistry between Tom and Bill is superb :) I really look forward to how Bill is going to survive this. Either it'll be a catastrophe or the two of them will actually become friends. The in between stuff, now that's what I can hardly wait to read about *g* * Maria

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 01:35 pm Title: Laws of the Game

It's all warm and smutty the first half and BAM comes the mother in law? No way.

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 12:41 pm Title: Obstruction

awwwww tom's mom is a bitch. good luck dealing with that bill.great story

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 03:18 am Title: Obstruction

Oh wow...I would kill a boyfriend who sprung something like that on me. Poor Bill. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 01:51 am Title: Obstruction

Oh god, okay. That was a DAMN hot sex scene and then Bill gets Tom's mean old mama? This should be a hell of a ride. LOL

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 01:35 am Title: Obstruction

I don't know whether I should be *____* over the first half or D: over the second half, but awesome chapter and as usual, you are fantastic at leaving me anxious for more!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 12:35 am Title: Obstruction

O___O What a B*I*T*C*H !

I hope Bill and Bill and Tom's relationship survive's...

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 12:30 am Title: Obstruction

ooooooommmmmmmmmggggggggggg there's a sequel!!! i fucking love you right now!

awwww Tom and Bill are too adorable!

Lucy sounds like a bitch but i hope she changes her attitude!

can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: HeiligeHarmonie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 12:29 am Title: Obstruction

Oh, poor Bill. Tom wouldn't survive stepping into the apartment if I were Bill, no matter how fantastic the present.

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 11:17 pm Title: Obstruction

Ahahaha, poor Bill! But the sex at the beginning made up for it. :) Damn girl!

Reviewer: likeitskiaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 10:09 pm Title: Obstruction

Ohhh god. I hope my mother in law isn't like that. Ahaha.

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 09:41 pm Title: Obstruction

Ouch! Poor Bill! I hate pesky mothers-in-law. Erhm, well, you know what I mean, lol!

Tom's present had better be GOOD <3

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 09:39 pm Title: Obstruction

Well, she sounds like a charming woman!

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 08:47 pm Title: Laws of the Game

i was all hot and bothered reading the first part of this chapter and then...boo. buzzkill that is Tom's mother. LOL.....poor Bill, he's got Cruella DeVille for 2 whole days. XDDDD

Reviewer: MAD Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 08:43 pm Title: Obstruction

Classic mother!!! Hahaha xD it's great although =)

Reviewer: Muffinholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 08:27 pm Title: Obstruction

more please?

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 08:19 pm Title: Obstruction

Oh no, poor Bill. You are a cruel, cruel woman. I loved it! Can't wait for the next update.

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