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Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 12:14 am Title: Shutout

That was possitively amazing! Oh, that woman has alot of surprises up her sleeve, doesn't she?

 

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 12:12 am Title: Shutout

That was a BRILLIANT chapter! So sexy and funny! They are the perfect couple, so adorable together, it's a pleasure to read! I'm always excited for a new chapter of this fic and I can't wait for the next one. These characters are awesome and their relationship is one of the best I've read on thf :)

Reviewer: gustavlover41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:44 pm Title: Shutout

Hilarious!!!! Love it!

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:41 pm Title: Shutout

LMAO!


i love this story!

great chapter!

Reviewer: DAni_DISAster Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:32 pm Title: Shutout

its so good !

Reviewer: Jobbernowl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:57 pm Title: Shutout

xD xD xD
As soon as they got on that webcam, I was like, "Tom's mom is going to walk in any second." Haha, I'm psychic.
Seriously, that was hilarious! Keep these chapters coming!

Reviewer: rinigurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:53 pm Title: Shutout

omg that wwas sooo funny and clever i love it please update

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:30 pm Title: Shutout

XD Oh my God Tom's mother is cracking me up to no freaking end XD

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:30 pm Title: Shutout

Poor Bill! I busted out laughing a couple times. Is it bad that I laughed the hardest at "No, don't... hurt me?" Ah that's good, great chapter!

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 09:56 pm Title: Shutout

Hilarious and amazing. I loved it. I hope Bill and Lucy can find some common ground now that she's punched him in the face.

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 09:46 pm Title: Shutout

Eep! I wouldn't want to happen to me! Honestly, though, I think Lucy might actually like/approve of Bill, to some extent.

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 09:43 pm Title: Shutout

aww I love it! I want more now!! :D yay

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 09:27 pm Title: Shutout

Lol lol lol lol

hahah

Reviewer: Winry Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 09:25 pm Title: Shutout

This woman is creepy. Poor Bill ^^

Reviewer: InsertWittyNameHere Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 10:11 am Title: Obstruction

BAHAHAHAHHA! She sounds like the PERFECT person to have as a mother-in-law :/

GOD I LOVE THIS FIC!! I am so happy you pasted it :D :D :D <3 <3

 

UPDATE SOON!

Bitte :) <3

Reviewer: Haylz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 11:03 am Title: Obstruction

Write mooooooooooore ♥

Please. ^_^

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 03:50 am Title: Obstruction

ha ha i am so excited i have been waiting so long for this ON DEFENSE is my absolute favorite story!!! so i cannot wait for your next post and see what you have planned for the boys... i love your writting i think there isn't a story of your i haven't read i am really so excited i hope you are happy with what you have so far :)

Reviewer: Jejje Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 02:35 pm Title: Obstruction

omg this is going to be so interesting XD *loves* (LLL) Poor Bill!

But I'm sure that eventually Lucy will love Bill, too... or at least I hope so *_*

This chapter was as good as always... funny, hot, perfect (L) Loved it.

Please, more! :D

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 05:53 pm Title: Obstruction

haha oh God, poor poor Bill! And of course Tom too ;) this was such a lovely chapter, i always adore Bill and Tom's interactions, their conversations seem completely believable. And man, i adore Tom's use of 'baby', definitely one of my favourite nicknames for him :) this was sublime! And reading these characters again makes me wants to go back and read On Defense again :) so i shall do just so!

Reviewer: trlne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 09:14 pm Title: Obstruction

uuh.Tom's mom is lovely :p

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