Date: 04/05/19 04:36 pm Title: MVP
Oh man, i'm sad this story was abandoned. I just read this and On Defence all again remembering how much this story got to me. Pulls on the heart strings and all the right places. I think that there's no ending just makes me know it was all happily-ever-after. They moved to Manchester, got two puppies and loved each other for ever. All thanks to that helpful coke can on Delta airways.
Date: 07/06/17 12:46 am Title: MVP
I happened to check in on your profile and omg you're writing again! I'm going to be up all night reading, but before I scamper off to do that...please tell me you are going to be working on this story at some point. I keep rereading On Defense on my kindle (and tossing around the idea of podfic'ing it) but I'm desperate for more of the story.
Date: 06/02/15 07:54 am Title: MVP
Aw man is there any hope in this ever being updated?
Date: 06/02/15 05:14 am Title: Obstruction
I swoon every time Tom calls Bill Baby ♥_♥ God these two are literally my favourite couple ever! I said it already but seriously, their sex scenes are just.... unreal ! SO GOOD.
Date: 06/02/15 04:05 am Title: Laws of the Game
Oh shit, i honestly believe that that first sex scene in the hotel room in On Defence was the hottest most intense twins i have ever read but this.. this was definitely coming close. I ADORE Bill and Tom as a couple in this series and their sex is always SO intense, even after a year together. Seriously, this is just incomparable to anything!
Date: 09/22/13 09:24 pm Title: MVP
I love this story, and I loved "On Defense", I'm not sure If I've reviewed these stories yet, so I'll do it now. this is amazing, it has it all, humour, irony, GREAT SEX AND SOCCER!! It's perfect! I love Tom and Bill - duh, don't we all?- and I love soccer. So Tom as a soccer player... damn, that's hot! This is amazing, and I read it as often as I can! although I do miss the first story! :( but thank you for writing these sexy stories!
Date: 06/12/13 05:33 pm Title: Laws of the Game
I'm still hoping that you'll continue with this at some point. :)
Date: 10/27/12 05:01 am Title: Laws of the Game
i can't find the "On Defense"
Date: 09/27/12 12:52 pm Title: MVP
please come back and write the next chapter please. I'm dying here.
Date: 08/17/12 12:24 am Title: MVP
*Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasp*
Why did it stop? Where's the rest? COME BACK! D:
Great chapter- again, fucking hot I needed several moments alone *cough cough*
I hope you are able to update again soon :-)
This is brilliant so far!
Date: 08/15/12 10:10 pm Title: Obstruction
Well, isn't Lucy the little streak of rainbow through a gloomy sky :P
Might I ask; why are your sex scenes so FUCKING sexy? I swear, I don't even need porn anymore when I've got this stuff! I envy your slut ability and hope to one day achieve the same smutty awesomeness! *Salute*
Now. ONWARD! :)
Date: 05/15/12 12:09 pm Title: MVP
Im a real soccer fan,it's great to see you know it so well,can't wait for more.
Date: 05/12/12 11:48 am Title: MVP
Omg, I didn't think I'll ever see this updated! I just can't believe it! Plus, can't believe I MISSED the update, ugh! This story is spectacular! I love it to bits, I want to see more and BADLY! i can see a lot of drama boiling here and I can't wait for said drama. I love your writing style - it's so smooth and easy and damn sexy! I can't wait to see where this is heading, please update soon! Promise not to miss the update next time. XD
Date: 04/27/12 09:12 pm Title: MVP
Awesome! I'm so excited for them. Thanks for the update, can't wait for more as always.
Date: 04/15/12 12:03 pm Title: MVP
Love your story with all my heart. Tom is the best boyfriend ever. I just can't... ugh! Don't know what my emotions are doing to me right now... I feel like I could burst!
Date: 03/31/12 05:15 pm Title: MVP
OHHHHHHHHHH. I wonder what Bill will think of my home :):) I feel he may have his ups and downs...
This is so so fabulous! I'm beyond happy to see more. As always, I'm really looking forward to more.
Date: 03/31/12 04:56 pm Title: Interlude
ohhh I'm so so happy to see you writing this story again, it's so wonderful :):):) I just adore these two!
Date: 03/29/12 03:15 pm Title: MVP
Great, just go on, go on, pretty please!!!