Date: 12/27/12 09:13 am Title: Chapter 8 - Waking The Elder
Chapters are very welcome (:
Date: 10/12/12 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - Hamburg Bokeh
Please, please continue.. It's so dead here.. :/
Date: 08/16/12 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Waking The Elder
Aah... One chapter to early xD would you please write mire, now? Xp.
Date: 08/16/12 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Dark Visions In Sterile Light
Awesome! Its so nice to know that.... Maybe... In thus story tom and Bill have a lil bro xD. Please more?
Date: 07/27/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Examining The Familiar
this was a good chapter explaining a bit more now :)
Date: 07/22/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Skills Unveiled
ok so hes a magnet...i think
Date: 07/21/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Rush-Hour Surprise
hmm its getting better, maybe a bit borning but that comes with all stories :)
Author's Response: It'll get more exciting, I promise, but I don't like stories that immediately starts with action, drama and such, I like building up xD
Date: 07/20/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Studies In The Street
hehe i hope its bill he bumped into ^-^
Date: 07/20/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday has become everyday again
its good I'm a bit confused on some parts r Bill and Tom not human or soemthing or is the guy in the first chapter not human or something? but all in all this is good I would like to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: I'd love to un-confuse you, but I'm afraid I'll reveal too much of the story... It will be more clear in a few chapters :PrnThanks for the review :P