Date: 08/23/11 11:39 am Title: Curtain Call
Congrats! Awesome story!
I don't know what to say about the end,I was k.o.
I can expect anything from Bushido, even if he really loved or actually loves Bill.
The fact that Bill took a plane for see his former boss, lover, etc... without nothing else than the key card, for me it means that actually Bill really wanted to leave his boring, monotonous and meaningless life to give in completly to Bushido.
Thanks girl!
Date: 07/24/11 10:30 pm Title: Curtain Call
please please please an hint Is Bill dEAD?
Is there gonna be a sequel
Please
Date: 07/07/11 07:29 pm Title: Curtain Call
In my mind, Bill dies. I think that's honestly the only peace for him. It's the only way of letting this go with total closure. It's done and over and he's gone, and it's better for him that way, if not necessarily for me as the reader. Call me soft but I'd been desperately hoping that somehow they were going to get a happy ending of some sort. This, in it's own way, counts. Bill is finally free, Tom will be able to rebuild eventually, and the other players in Berlin are as safe as they choose to be.
This whole story was one of repeated punches to the gut, but that and that fact that I couldn't ever look away for long just shows exactly how powerful your writing is. You're a very talented writer, and were this a novel in a bookshop I'd have definitely bought it.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for being such a dedicated reader :D
Date: 07/07/11 06:44 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
This is... this can't be the end. How can this be the end? Bill... and Tom... and... I really hope the questions are answered in the epilogue or I am going to be asking myself them for the rest of forever. This fic is worked into my brain so deep I don't think it's ever leaving.
Date: 07/07/11 06:02 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
... So, I'm not prepared for the ending. Not at all. Damn it! And there I was thinking I could finally relax, because he's gonna be ok. Short haired, but ok.
Date: 07/05/11 12:45 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
Seems to me like Gina and Kay would go well together, for all he'd be thinking of Bill so much of the time. He deserves some happiness though, just like the twins do.
Date: 07/05/11 12:33 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 1
I feel no shame in admitting that I cried when Tom was reunited with his dog. After everything they've been through, that moment was such a contrast it shook me all the way through. Perfect.
Date: 07/05/11 12:25 am Title: ACT XVI - Part 8
Interesting that Gina could see what so many others couldn't. Seems she's the best friend Bill ever actually had. And now if Bushido is dead and can't come after them... maybe they can really be free.
Date: 07/05/11 12:15 am Title: ACT XVI - Part 7
It's interesting that Bill felt the need to let Bushido know what he'd done. That one line was enough to tell him everything, and it says a lot about wat was going on in his head. This whole peice is magnificently done.
Date: 07/05/11 12:05 am Title: ACT XVI - Part 6
Talk about taking a big risk. I only hope it's worth it.
Date: 07/04/11 11:53 pm Title: ACT XVI - Part 5
Gustav, of all people... guess that's the mark of a real friend, when you can call them out of nowhere and they've still got your back. Sounds like something the twins need just to give them some emotional stabilty back, some reason to trust people again.
Getting there. Working up the courage now to read to the end.
Date: 06/29/11 03:05 pm Title: Curtain Call
it's really a shame that i am just now reading this final chapter. this story...ugh, it was just so much for me. you wrote it so well, and it was so complete and PERFECT, it's hard to believe this came from a fansite. i hate that it's over and all, but man, you know how to give one hell of a reading experience.
Date: 06/28/11 06:04 pm Title: Curtain Call
foo shizzle!! This is one of THE best fics i've read!! damn i've been reading this for a couple of weeks and honey, this brutal, passionate etc fic is killing me!! (well Did kill me xP) and the end!! mothafuckaaaaa gosh xD hahahah i was like WTF NOOOOOO XD hahahaha LOVED IT!!! Mucho löööwee ;)
Date: 06/09/11 08:50 pm Title: Curtain Call
oh please oh please oh please oh please oh pretty please with a cherry on top, could you write a sequal *pouts* you are one of my favorite authors, and im just here, hanging on a cliff thinkning "how could Raiju do this to me!" lol but seriously a sequal would be soooooooooooooooooooo awesome, you have no idea. this was the VERY FIRST story i ever read on this site, therefore its special :)
Date: 06/06/11 11:35 am Title: Curtain Call
I only get to catch up with this now.
And, I can't even say if I love or hate the ending, all I can say it's so intriguing that I don't think I'll ever read a story like this ever.
So kudos to you.
Date: 06/01/11 10:33 am Title: Curtain Call
Raiju, this story is amazing. I'm reading through it a second time, all at once. It's more than just some story posted on a fic hosting site; it's a universe, a monumental effort in which a piece of yourself was invested. I deeply respect and admire you for creating this.
Date: 05/27/11 09:58 pm Title: ACT I - Part 3
You know, this might be my favorite chapter! No blood, no gore, just Bushido actually being nice and shit.. these reviews are hard to write because I already know what's gonna happen, but I'll try xD
Date: 05/27/11 09:34 pm Title: ACT I - Part 2
Okay, eww. If you have to pay hookers to get some.. that just says something. Ew! Everytime I read this I'm grateful Bill didn't kill the kids because if he did, I would've come and shot you. I do know where you live! kinda. But still.. I would've found you. ugh, I need a damn happy story, why did I promise to review this. KoK was fabulous when I was in a shit mood all the time but now I just see him damn depressing it is the whole way through :( . But, it's still pretty fucking awesome, especially when Renn comes out
Date: 05/27/11 09:24 pm Title: ACT I - Part 1
So I've come to review as promised! I had forgotten how intense the beginning was, and although I'm craving something a bit more fluffy, if you catch my drift, it's still fucking amazing! I love the description of Bill and the guys, they seem so badass, and just picturing Kay with a gun has me in a puddle yo!
Date: 05/26/11 04:50 pm Title: ACT XV - Part 5
oh, this is going to break my heart. why can't they just go together, it's still going. bill!!! listen to his heart