Date: 08/08/10 12:01 am Title: ACT I - Part 8
Oh how I am loving this story. Im glad Bill has his balls back haha
Date: 08/07/10 06:18 pm Title: ACT I - Part 2
Damn. That's all I can say is damn.
Date: 08/06/10 10:50 am Title: ACT I - Part 8
The Foulmouth McDumbfuck nickname was funny as hell! its great to have a comic releif in there :)
Date: 08/06/10 10:33 am Title: ACT I - Part 7
Very visually powerful! :)
Date: 08/06/10 10:29 am Title: ACT I - Part 6
I loved the conversation, the last three lines where very well placed, they showed the power Bushido has over Bill :) Looooove it!!
Date: 08/06/10 10:19 am Title: ACT I - Part 5
BEAUTIFUL! The brotherly love and sacrafice was absolutly perfect!!!!! :)
Date: 08/06/10 09:58 am Title: ACT I - Part 3
Im loving this whole flashback! Great way to show the reader diffrent sides of your characters! :)
Date: 08/06/10 09:49 am Title: ACT I - Part 2
o.O i loved all the discription, the whole story so far really flows, it really pulls you in, its really belivable and smooth, you dont think for one second it might be fiction. It would make a grewat movie! :)
Date: 08/06/10 09:42 am Title: ACT I - Part 1
Wow! im loving the speed of it! Its very 'Godfather' like in my opinion! Keep it up! :)
Date: 08/06/10 09:19 am Title: ACT I - Part 8
That was so sad....But Bill is so wrongnot goig tyo see his brother! How does he think Tom feels being abandoned like that?!
Date: 08/06/10 08:37 am Title: ACT I - Part 8
interesting story
Date: 08/06/10 04:55 am Title: ACT I - Part 8
more more more more more more now!!!!!
Date: 08/05/10 01:52 pm Title: ACT I - Part 7
I donīt know what to think of Bu yet, but poor Bill:(
Iīm really curious about how everything will turn out
Date: 08/01/10 08:34 pm Title: ACT I - Part 7
I'm torn between really liking and really hating Bushido in this story. I feel terrible for Bill. D:
Great chapter!
Date: 08/01/10 04:15 pm Title: ACT I - Part 7
I love this story so far :)
Date: 08/01/10 02:36 pm Title: ACT I - Part 7
Awww poor Bill :( I feel so bad for him! I don't know if I want to know what happened... Well, I hope Bushido help him...
Date: 08/01/10 12:38 pm Title: ACT I - Part 7
i want more!!
Date: 08/01/10 09:08 am Title: ACT I - Part 1
I love this story so much! I get so excited when you edit because I know how good it is going to me and I am dying to learn more about what is going on.
As much as it kills me, I love where you end chapters. Each time I'm like "No! Not yet!"
More please and soon!
Date: 08/01/10 08:27 am Title: ACT I - Part 7
*Squeals madly* OMGOMGOMG Now I know whatya meant when you said that Bill got what he wanted LOL. D: Miss that bitchy Bill though. But! I think it'll be fixed as the story goes on. Aww. ILU. And I love that worried Bushido, like he really wants to know what happened to Bill and how did all those bruises came to his slender body D: Hope to see Tom soon too. At least some scene in the prision?
Keep going hun, and anything that you need, here I am, ya know it already, right?
ILU