Date: 04/28/11 03:05 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
That was wow...just wow...You have an in incredible gift with words.
Date: 04/28/11 12:53 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
He's d...h-h-he he's d-d... Dead?! What?!! O__O
Date: 04/28/11 12:26 am Title: ACT XV - Part 3
All I can say is day-um!!!!
Date: 04/27/11 09:14 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
I don't know what I'll do when this story is finished.
*Thinks: reread and savor the overall magnificence*
Part of me has wanted this story to come to a close because...*shuffles feet*... I have a Billshido story idea that I think might be up your alley, only if you're interested of course. :D
Author's Response: I won't know what to do with myself, either. I'm too attached to this world and all its characters! Right now I have to finish up two incomplete stories already uploaded, and I have a Billshido already ready to be written (I just have to get TO it), but hey, throw the idea my way! I'd love to hear it if you didn't want to do it yourself :D just use the contact button thing on my profile page here to send me and email and we can talk it over. (Or AIM, MSN, whatever you wish)
Date: 04/27/11 08:12 pm Title: ACT VII - Part 5
Your freaking amaizng, im telling all my friends about this story cause its soo damn good, when i get home from school its the first thing i doo lol, are you an author? because if u arent BECOME ONE!! :)
Author's Response: I am actually thinking of doing just that and possibly publishing this story, actually. Thank you! And I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 04/27/11 06:29 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
DERP! God I love this story so much! But, woman, you killed off my man...I don't know if I'll ever forgive you for this! Bill's changing again, I think it's good for him, though, to finally find himself again after all this. I can't wait for more! :))
-Mo
Date: 04/27/11 02:12 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
oh my, this was amazing. Bill shedding the last bits of his old life....epic chapter ending, girl.
Date: 04/27/11 12:18 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
This story was really intense and nerve-wracking, with lots of surprises. I just can say that Bill was very lucky with his ability of shedding skin. I can't imagine anyone to be able to move on so many times - from famous rockstar to homeless, then to being a prostitute, drug dealer, lover of his boss, psycho-killer, to become a "young man (...) different in so many ways: calm, collected, confident and in-control". I just wonder if he means he became like every other normal human being, or is it just his version of being normal. Because if it's the first option, then he's painfully wrong - or he's a new version of Patrick Bateman (even though Bateman had some moral issues, it got to him at the end), cold and without any compassion. Normal person would probably get crazy after doing things that Bill did. Or wait, Bill is crazy, right? Too bad for Bushido that he loved this monster, because dolled up or not, Bill stayed the same monster that he was, responsible for so many deaths, including the death of the person he thought he loved and who loved him back.
"Now to escape, and to forcefully create a new beginning, he had to make the biggest sacrifice of all, and sacrifice his own heart, his own feelings."
Oh please, how shallow anyone could be to think like that while it weren't his feelings that were the biggest sacrifice - it was someone's life! Since when someone's feelings, something that can change in a blink of an eye, is more important than life of other person? Only someone extremely self-ceneterd would think his heart and his feelings are more important.
I have to say I'm really curious how you are planning to end this story, if there will be any explanation for Bill's behaviour (though nothing would be good enough to explain his betrayal), and what will happen to him and the rest.
Date: 04/27/11 10:33 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
Reading this is like hearing final, solemn chords rung on a piano. I feel like Bushido dying is the best ending that causes the least pain for everyone (except Bu of course). It's over for good now, there's no constant living in fear. The end of this chapter was enthralling with Bill cutting his hair.
Date: 04/27/11 09:58 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
Ok Bu is actually not dead and organized it all to end up with Bill ??
Raiju great work
But Bill is right He DID KILL Anis and he should have stayed and forgive
Acting the way he did just made in Bu's equal; He says he's not Anis' pretty doll; Not He's Anis ' queen and equal
Two different sides of the same coin
Besides like in Othello wioth Iagoa s his dark soul, Renn is Bill's dark one
Drama, passion; U're a great writer
Thanx for writting this and sharing ur talent to the world
Date: 04/27/11 09:43 am Title: ACT I - Part 1
wow!!! I even dream with this story beyond surreal, so fantastic.
the end notes just scarred me lol
Date: 04/27/11 08:57 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
"that made him pull out a clump of his hair toward the back of his head and measure out and inch from the scalp." bleeeh, disgusting. luckily Bill has a bit more taste than this.
I just wonder why you didn't add "major character death" warning?
Date: 04/26/11 11:15 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
Oh god, i'm crying! It's really over now. It's what it takes for everyone to finally having a fresh start. As bad as he was, it really hurts to see him die. I knew this story won't have an happy ending but it's still really sad.
Date: 04/24/11 01:27 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
Happy Easter!! I also wanted to tell you that this story is amazing and I love it even though so much sad/bad stuff happens. It's definetly one of my more favorite stories on this site.
Author's Response: Happy zombie!Jesus Day to you too! And thank you so much :D I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Almost finished~
Date: 04/24/11 06:26 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
I was missing a few chapters and finally catching up with it.
One thing I still need to say:
Where haven't this turned into a bestseller fiction or script for movie yet?
I'm sure you heard of all the praise with great characterisation, great plot, great writing, etc. Seriously, I think this is 1 of the 2 best fiction ever in THF.
By the way in the previous chapter where Tom saw his Scotty, it broke me into tears.
Date: 04/24/11 02:35 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
i still don't believe bushido is dead. i hope to enjoy by stay in denial land until the next chapter
Date: 04/24/11 01:58 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
ug. That is awful for Bill--well, it will be when he finds out. I think its good for the twins to play with the girls.
Date: 04/23/11 04:23 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
no no no ok crying again ; no words;; to painfull to write
good job though
Date: 04/22/11 09:01 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
*sob*bushido...kay...SCOTTY!!!
Date: 04/22/11 08:17 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 2
Not sure how I feel about reading 108 chapters of death fic...that seems a bit blunt and crass but I don't know any other way of putting what I am feeling right now :/ don't get me wrong, you know I've adored this fic - I'm just feeling a bit lost with it all right now. Is it sad that I am hopeful of some awesome twist cause you haven't put in a 'major character death' warning on the summary page yet? Haha, it so is xD