Date: 04/30/11 03:49 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
I f*** love this story I'm sorry I never commented before but i just couldnt till I read the whole thing I took me a while to read it all but when I thought I finally caught up to the reading u keep adding more chapters and I luved u for that cause I never wanted this story to end its such a good story I think its the best one I ever read on here and now its almost over:(
But I relly want u to post the epilogue cause Im dieing to know if it relly is Bushido that sent him the plane ticket or not.
Date: 04/30/11 05:17 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
Really looking forward to the epilogue XD
Date: 04/30/11 04:07 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
Is Bushido really dead? I'm wondering if this is just some plan of his to get Bill to let his guard down. I hope not though, I hope things work out for Bill in the end, although I have a nagging feeling this won't work out that way. I liked the end of this chapter, with Bill cutting his hair, and letting go of the person he became.
I can't believe it's actually reaching the end! I had a feeling this was going to be coming soon, but still! This has been a great story, I can't wait to see how everything wraps up :D
Date: 04/29/11 08:34 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
oh bill...
Date: 04/29/11 06:49 pm Title: ACT I - Part 1
"I would most definitely release a gay version, but another that was Het, and movie-casting I could PROMISE wouldn't disappoint. Any female would be so close to Bill that as long as the clothes stayed on, you wouldn't be able to tell the difference."
still, woman is a woman, so for me it could be worthless movie..>.>
Date: 04/29/11 06:10 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
Bill...is...a...moron! If I got something like that I'm up and moving immediately! If not Bushido, SOMEONE is waiting to take him out. WHY would anyone chance that? NObody's dick is that good!
Date: 04/29/11 03:51 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
This is kinda an answer to YOUR answer before XD
Anyway, movie, you say? If that's your dream, go for it :) But I think that this as a movie would only work with the real life people :( And that many of your readers would be disappointed...
I'm really not saying this to get you down, I just felt like sharing my opinion^^ And this as a het? I really apologise for saying this but... if this turn into a het, I will be one of those who won't watch it :( *watching out for flying shoes* Because now that I've read it I have only Bill and Bushido in mind, and for me it would never work to change the characters and make it a het, then it would not be the same story :(
Author's Response: If it were ever to get as far as a movie, I would do all I could to get the real characters here, if not the CLOSEST lookalikes possible. (Hey, it's publicity for them!) You underestimate me, darlin'! I hate Het. Movies, books, anything- I can't deal with it. It's always too cliche and boring. I would most definitely release a gay version, but another that was Het, and movie-casting I could PROMISE wouldn't disappoint. Any female would be so close to Bill that as long as the clothes stayed on, you wouldn't be able to tell the difference. I always say 'aim high' if you're going to dream, and it seems that's just what I'm doing :D Just Het sells better in printed books and movies, gay doesn't. So, two versions of the same story it is!
Date: 04/29/11 01:56 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
Oh, Raiju, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!!!!
Date: 04/29/11 12:50 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
ohhhh my GOD !!!! please don't leave us waiting ...the tension is killing me
ohhh god please let it be a happy ending :D
i love it so much and i'm so sad that this has to end :(
Date: 04/29/11 12:07 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
"(...)something would happen, and either I would be reduced to just watching my body move, listening to my mouth speak…but it wouldn’t be me. "
So it wasn't Bill who killed all those people and not Bill betrayed Bushido? It was all Renn's doing? Oh, I'm relieved....NOT. Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde much? The fact that it was apparently his alter ego and not him doesn't make his fault any less. And for sure it doesn't explain why he's going to lie to Tom and leave him like this. The part about Tom agining so quickly and working too hard for Bill and himself was really touching. If he would only know that Bill is going to betray again, him this time, he would be really heartbroken.
I'm not saying that Bill should resign from his life and live a life that doesn't make him happy, but he should think more about others. Or just think more in general. You captured his feelings very good though, so even if I hate this character and think about him as about egoistic, cruel, self-centered bitch, I still have compassion for him. It must hurt a lot to know that he destroyed his life with his own hands.
“I’m here because I don’t know what else to do about him, Dr. Harrell. I don’t want to get rid of him completely, because he’s saved my life more than once, but I want to be able to keep him at bay.”
How stupid can anyone be? Or was this brain damage even more serious, or maybe he was not completely normal from the beginning? Because if those words were said by normal Bill, the person he always was, something wasn't OK with him still.
"He would wake up from this dream, and he would make it all work. He would forgive it all, forget any anger he had for him, and he would do all he could to stay at the man’s side."
Bushido would have a lot more to forgive and forget...
I have a tiny hope that it' Bushido who sent Bill this card and ticket. Easter was not long ago, why shouldn't he ressurect as well? Of course it would a lot of explaining from Bill's side, and Anis would have every right to be pissed off on Renn, but Renn is tamed now so why shouldn't he forgive Bill and enjoy life like newly married man? And so what that Tom had to be sacrificed in the way? True love needs sacrifices!
But seriously, I hope there is a happy ending for at least some of them. If not for Tom, let it be for Bill and Bushido, I'm not picky in that matter (if you could call such ending happy - Bushido staying with overdramatic psycho-bitch who is mixing psychotropic drugs with wine).
Date: 04/29/11 11:47 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
I suspected that Bill had some serious mental illness/es, I feel so sorry for him :(
But I can't believe how stupis he is, and how he can even THINK of choosing Bushido over Tom, 'cause that is what he is doing if he goes. I both hope and not hope that he will go, I'm curious about if it really IS Bushido, but at the same time I want their relationship to END here...decisions, decisions...
Anyway, I have to praise you for your extraordinary devotion to this, it's clear that you enjoy what you are doing :) Because every other author I've seen takes either ages to update, stop updating, don't answer reviews, ruin the plot or is a really bad writer :S
But you pull off all of the above with a perfection of a real author^^ Another thing that I love with your fanfiction, is that I have never found a mistake in it! In more or less ALL others I've read there's at leas ONE mistake - but not here^^
I must say I'm truly amazed, and, If you'd let me, I would love to turn this into a book :) I've heard that you somewhere can make your own book^^ And if I don't make money on it, it's legal, right? Not that I would care if it WASN'T, though XD
I'm really excited over the last (?) chapter^^ You have really touched me with this story, even if I don't really like that Bill loves Bushido so much that it almost reach the point of ridiculous O.o
Love...the horrible things you do to us....
Well, now it's just to find out what happen next, right? :)
Author's Response: Actually I've already talked it through with an agent, and this might actually be turned into something in print. I've started to edit it, and well...my goal would be to make a movie out of it in the long run- all for that awkward moment when Bushido, himself, sees the Het version of the movie and fangirls over it. That would be the ultimate reward :D and thank you so much for all your kindness! Only the epilogue is left, which will be posted Friday. I'm working on it as we speak!
Date: 04/29/11 11:40 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
OMG NO WAI
I was expecting a happy ending but you've gone and flipped the table over and thrown all the chairs. Will Bill find some kind of closure? Will he have a happy ending? Or will he meet his maker?
???????????? AAAHHH look what you're doing to meeee yanking me around with the suspense even now, 110 chapters in. A part of me wants to print this entire story off and get it bound in a book. Such a universe you have created here.
Date: 04/29/11 11:30 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
OMG THANX FOR UPDATING SO FAST
I guess the last chapter is gonna be a killer
I believe Buactually get hurt in jail but has enough money to set something up and put someone else body instead of his to fake his death
Now he's free, maybe he was badly wounded and needed time to recover
Maybe he just watched Bill all the time, knowing how much Bill missed him and has a multiple personality disorder
God, u're great!!
Date: 04/29/11 11:27 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
So what, Bushido had bribe people to make believe that he was dead all this time. I would be happy if Bushido is actually alive but only if he stay away for Bill...or not haha. Guess i have a lovehate relationship with Bushido too. Or maybe it's Kay One, he knew that hotel too. Yeah, it will be cool to have another Kay OneBill smut finale in the Spanish sun :P I know i know, it's no fairy tale. A girl can dream, thought.
Date: 04/29/11 10:55 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
oh god, what is Bill doing? i thought it was over, but now.....i'm not so sure.
Date: 04/29/11 10:49 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
Finally, he broke his leash! Still in denial that Bushido is dead, but in the other hand i knew it was some kind of a sacrifice when he plead guilty for all charges.
Date: 04/29/11 10:45 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
You've left me wordless. I've been with this story for a few months and I have to admit I anticipate and fear the ending. However, it seems like you won't disappoint me.
I cried when I read that Bushido died, and yet I hoped beyond hope that he is still alive. And now that it seems he is, I could not bear for it to be false hope : (
But, either way, I just wanted to let you know that this is a breath taking story and I wish it would never end.
Date: 04/29/11 09:58 am Title: ACT I - Part 1
even one year later Bill is still same old self centered egoist. poor Tom. and Bushido must be an idiot to want back someone who already betrayed him once.
Date: 04/28/11 08:23 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
oh god. the chapter end notes scare me. in before ZOMBIE BUSHIDO!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! My friend and I were joking about that being one of the 'wth?' twists NOBODY would expect- kinda like mpreg, which would leave just about everyone confused XD
Date: 04/28/11 02:53 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 3
what will i do when this story ends? i've been following it since day 1. i know i'm not the best reviewer but i just wanted to let you know this story is incredible and the journey you took us readers on was so long and so heart-breaking, gut-wrenching, goosebumps-raising, sometimes touching and beautiful, sometimes dreadful and exhausting, but always perfectly written and absolutely worth it. not only your writing but your dedication to the story and vision as a writer are admirable. this went beyond fanfiction; you took it, twisted and morphed and made it into your own tale with your own characters who have gone through so much and emerged on the other side... barely alive? but so much stronger. relatable even as they are experiencing things that the average reader can't even wrap their minds around. i could have never anticipated where this story will go when it was just posted. it was always shocking and surprising and never falling into cliches so even now, when there is only one more chapter left, i don't know if to believe that our boys have really reached catharsis. (only hope, of course!)
so thank you from the bottom of my heart for this read, from a dedicated reader since july 2010 :)