Date: 05/06/11 11:55 am Title: Curtain Call
you are really great author, definitely one of the best from this site!
that was really good story, especially at the beggining. I really liked part about homeless twins. later it becomes too much in Quentin Tarantino style as for my taste, but still good.
at the beginning it was almost as good as What Patience Earns!
thank you for giving us so well writen stories! can't wait to read another of your works!
Date: 05/06/11 11:05 am Title: Curtain Call
Please, please write a sequel. I must say, if i had the means, i would publish til story as a book or something. King of Kinz is the best story i've ever read, including the books in our local liberary. I want to thank you for an extremely exciting story, and again, please write a sequel! xoxo V
Date: 05/06/11 10:26 am Title: Curtain Call
This is the most brilliant epilogue I have ever read. And, sincerely, I didn't expect any less of you.
I love how the ending is left open. I'll probably spend countless hours wondering if Bushido will forgive Renn one last time, or did he finally push him too hard.
I'll be waiting for a sequel, but if it never comes I want you to know that this was one of the most amazing stories ever. I will miss reading it, waiting for another chapter, wondering what happens next, ...
Thank you for writing this story, it made my day again and again.
Date: 05/06/11 10:11 am Title: Curtain Call
oh. my. god. my heart is beating so fast right now. that was an evil, evil ending! x_x i kept thinking 'oh, i expected that, oh, i saw this coming...' and then i reached the last paragraph and BAM you turned the tables on us! i literally gasped at the last line!
in order not to feel too sad, i'd like to think that bushido did shoot bill, not to kill him, but to pull a similar act to how he got out of jail. that way bill would be believed to be dead by the rest of the world and he will be able to stay with bushido. hee! ^_^
if you do end up writing a sequel i'd be so fucking happy! i can't believe this story is over. i'm going to miss it so much...
Date: 05/06/11 08:35 am Title: Curtain Call
Wow.
My god woman, take a mother fucking bow right now.
I am stunned.
It hurts, oh god it hurts, but this ache is so good. I keep coming back like Bill does, because he has to. HE HAS TO, and so do I. I Want this hurt, because I wouldn't feel complete without having it.
That ending...I don't dare finish it, but I should have known it wouldn't be pretty either way and yet I still hope that even if Bill does meet his end here, that he at least has that sense of closure (though dying would do that to you no matter if you find it or not).
I just...this isn't even nearly what I want to say to you, but by god, I want a standing ovation from the fucking world right now.
I bow down to you and applaud you.
This has been one hell of a ride, my dear. Thank you so much for letting me join it, as bumpy and heartbreaking as its been.
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: 05/06/11 08:34 am Title: Curtain Call
I simply can not believe this is the end of their game. I can't believe there will no longer be anymore updates on KoK, or anymore of you banging your head against the wall trying to write, or me flailing over new chapters. This was a beauty, and it was amazing. I love it to pieces.... I was with this baby since the very beginning, and as with the story, I grew. I'm honored to know you, i'm honored to be in the actual credits, but most of all, i'm honored to be your friend.
Long live Raiju.
Long live the king.
(I don't care if it's cheesy.)
-Rockstar101 ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 05/04/11 04:56 pm Title: ACT XIV - Part 5
It's not gonna be that simple, poor Bill. Can't wait to see how it goes wrong.
Date: 05/04/11 02:33 pm Title: ACT XIV - Part 4
My heart is breaking for Bill. Worse, he has no idea how much trouble they're really in.
Date: 05/04/11 02:09 pm Title: ACT XIV - Part 3
Wow. Just... wow.
Date: 05/04/11 01:53 pm Title: ACT XIV - Part 2
Ok, I could stand to read a lot more of that. Bill on Renn: pretty awesome.
Date: 05/04/11 01:40 pm Title: ACT XIV - Part 1
Fascinating stuff. It really doesn't seem to me, from what you've shown so far, like Bill is going to be happy about stepping down from being in charge. only takes a taste...
Date: 05/03/11 02:33 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
this is such a great story! i love how theres a lot that i dont expect in it like this part. and i think bill and bushido would be a great couple in real life too. :D maybe not in this one since bushido is kind of mean... but definetly in what patience earns and Obluquy for sure. :) but yeah! all the stories in unbreakable are really amazing and i just thought you might like to know(: is this story really almost over? :/
Author's Response: Yes, sadly it's almost complete. I finished writing the epilogue to it yesterday, which will be posted on Friday. I'm really glad you enjoyed it while it lasted!
Date: 05/03/11 01:37 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
I just died, and came back a zombie craving..no not brains but another chapter
Date: 05/02/11 02:10 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
Oh my god! What is happening. Im sick to my stomach
Date: 05/01/11 12:08 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
Great job as always. I love this story and reading it has become one of the best things in my life. I will miss it dearly when it's done
Date: 05/01/11 08:02 am Title: ACT I - Part 1
"So, two versions of the same story it is!"
You never disappoint me XD
Date: 05/01/11 03:01 am Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
arg! Most of this chapter made me so happy. Bill is finally getting help, the boys are living together. I am so scared of the epilogue now. I can't wait for it though.
Date: 04/30/11 08:14 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
I'm so sorry I lost faith there for a second...though, to be fair, the fact I was so pissed is a testament you and your writing xD Anyways....when is this epilogue coming? I'm sad at the thought of Bill living a lie for Tom's sake.
Date: 04/30/11 04:04 pm Title: ACT XVII - Part 4
I have no idea what to say. This story has just taken my breath away and I have finally caught up. If you were to write an actual book and sell it, I would buy it without a second thought. Two songs that I thought went really well with this story are Cold by Crossfade and Cold (but I'm still here) by Evans Blue. I wish you the best of luck in your other stories and I know I could praise this story with thousands of compliments, but they wouldn't be enough.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the rec's! I've actually been listening to an instrumental remix of the first off and on throughout this :D