Date: 07/04/12 11:00 am Title: Where the story ends
I think I was holding my breath. So short but so emotional. Again, wonderful. I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I really hope you write a sequel and add to the story. Do they manage to live their lives, find some normalcy with each other or are things off and strained between them. Does one of them start to date? Do they ever get back together? I think I'm going to be mentally writing a sequel all day. Nice angsty job.
Date: 04/29/12 12:18 pm Title: Where the story ends
sad story~
Author's Response:
It is quite sad, isn't it. Thanks for you review :)
Date: 04/29/12 03:12 am Title: Where the story ends
Ug, so very very sad. You write really well though. I'm surprised you have so few reviews. I'm very glad you are working on a multi-chaptered fic now. It seems like you have the skills and potential to give us a really good story.
Author's Response: Aw, you are so sweet! Thank you, your words really mean a lot to me.
Date: 07/20/10 06:01 am Title: Where the story ends
Ouch. Harsh, but very moving. This story has a great sense of urgency because of the way you narrated it. And there are some powerful sentences in there which strengthen your writing. Also, nice imagery. I liked this. Well done. :)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for the this late reply... Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words!
Date: 07/19/10 05:41 pm Title: Where the story ends
Poor Billy:( beautiful story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/19/10 01:55 pm Title: Where the story ends
:'( *sobs*
this its just too beautiful for words.. thanks for sharing X
Author's Response: I should be the one thanking you. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/19/10 11:06 am Title: Where the story ends
This very nearly made me burst into tears. The emotions were so raw, it was fantastic :D
Author's Response: Thank you!