Date: 10/23/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
nice chap! they're getting into really serious romantic stuff, the love is right in the around the corner... happy!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 10/23/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
Even though they had sex I can tell that their relationship is starting to transcend that and be about more than just the physical. I hope you can find the time and motivation to write more. Trust me I know EXACTLY how you feel right now.
Author's Response: Yeah. Their relationship is based on so much more than just sex. They will soon enough realize it's love. <3 I'll try to write more soon, too. ;)
Date: 10/23/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm speechless. Really. All that I can say is that this was SO cute chapter! :3 That fluff fitted so perfectly to this chap. Really.
Continue soon? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Thank you SO much. It means a lot to hear it was good. I'll hopefully update again in a few days! <3
Date: 10/22/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
I was scared that this story was only about sex and naughty things. But im sooo glad that there's a sparkle of true love in the last chapters! Im definetly going to follow this story. And YOU should definetly finish this story! Good luck!
Author's Response: Nope. There are feelings behind all the passion! ;) Thank you for following my story and I will definitely finish it (and hopefully soon!). <3
Date: 10/22/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter 6
that was cute that this time they actually got to talk before the sex and they established that its a special thing theyve got going on i liked it :)
Author's Response: I tried my best; everything can't be about sex. Thank you! :)
Date: 10/21/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
WoW-awesome chapter. The scene of their lovemaking was beautiful, having it slow and so loving was perfect! Looking forward to more-thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 10/21/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved it :D I know not everything can be about sex, I just like how you write it. Weather hot and heavy or slow and steady, I just love how you write! :) I only noticed one mistake. "just until the shit was pulled over his head." as funny as that was, I think you meant "shirt" xD Great job, missy. Keep up the good work and don't doubt your skills. They rock my socks :)
Author's Response: Oops! I tend to do a lot of typos! Thanks for pointing that one out! And thank you for these kind words. I will try and update soon again! <3
Date: 10/21/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
God, that was just fucking fabulous.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 10/21/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw. How sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 10/21/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw. They're too sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 10/21/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Onnnhh :P its love XD
Author's Response: It is. :)
Date: 10/21/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
more this is awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you. ;)
Date: 10/21/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww! They wanna get to know each other better! ^^ So sweet. they really, really care for each other! Aaaw. this made me go all fluffy, and the sex was hot too - as always!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. :)
Date: 10/18/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think i´m gonna like this story :D
Author's Response: I hope so too! ;)
Date: 10/06/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 5
I love it :D So sweet :) Getting to know each other :} But I still want to read sex >:]
Author's Response: Everything can't be about sex, lol, but don't worry, there will be more sex in the next chapter. :D
Date: 10/06/10 02:57 am Title: Chapter 4
More sex please! I want it to get dirty >:)
Author's Response: Ooooh. Dirty, huh? :D
Date: 10/06/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Deffinatly! They were feeling it from the start, and the two horny buggers just cant get enough of each other ;) I love it!
Author's Response: Of course they were <3. Thanks!
Date: 10/06/10 02:15 am Title: Chapter 2
It so does NOT suck! :O So hawt! I like Bill demanding. Cant wait to read more sex! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 10/06/10 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved it :D Few errors, like calling Joanne 'he' instead of 'she', but apart from that, I like :) I like how Tom makes Bill feel like he's on fire. I like how they seem to have that sexual tension between them, and I really like how Bill has kind of an attitude xD -holds out hands- cookies please? :D
Author's Response: Oh god *head-desks* I called her a he? I ALWAYS DO THAT! -.- But I try to find all my mistakes before posting... Damn, must have slipped that. XD YOU WANT COOKIES??? I will run to the supermarket then! All for you :D
Date: 09/29/10 03:26 am Title: Chapter 5
awwww i like it
Author's Response: Thanks! :P