Date: 07/18/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
unf *flails*
i think you killed me...i guess this review is not gonna be very coherent, but im gonna try..
okay..just wanna say this chapter does NOT suck.. its brilliant and i loved it..its soo hot!
please update soon because im looking forward to more X
Author's Response: LOL. I don't want you dead! *wakes her up* And thank you VERY much for saying it didn't suck. I'm really happy if you liked it! Next update tomorrow! ;)
Date: 07/18/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I saw a few mistakes but nothing major.
They waste no time, eh? Make sure Tom remember's the cassette xD That'd be funny as shit if he forgot. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Mistakes? Oh noes, I should find a beta for myself. xD
And yeah, why waste time when you can have fun right now? :D
About the cassette... There will be a surprise about it in the next chapter! xD
Date: 07/18/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, so hot. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :)
Date: 07/18/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it!
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you! :)
Date: 07/18/10 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
WOW hot chapter!!! loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad if you thinks so! :3
Date: 07/18/10 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, that is such a cool ideafor a story! please update soon?:)
Author's Response: Woah. Thanks a lot! And the next chapter will be up tonight! ;)
Date: 07/18/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
OMFG! First, 16 and pregnant is on MTV right now! LOL annnnddd my sisters name is joanne and we call her joey! Coincidence or wat?!
Reli luckin forward to this!
Kissy x
Author's Response: Haha, that's funny! And thank you for reviewing! :)
Date: 07/18/10 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohohooo. I spy a pervy Tom. Lol.
Where's the rest of the crew? I mean, there's always a bunch of them in reality shows, no?
Nau.
WHERE'S MY COOKIE?
Anyways, you know I find the idea ridiculously brilliant, and the banner is just gorgeous. I didn't like Bill being so mean to his sister, though... But that only makes it more realistic. =)
Keep writing! (though I can't promise you I'll keep reading, sawwy)
Author's Response: Maybe he is a bit pervy... lol
There isn't many people, I think that so many isn't needed for this show :)
COOKIE. Come and take? (A)
Well, Bill is used to being in the spotlight, haha, you know how he is. xD
AND YOU WILL KEEP READING, BITCH. I'll make you! :)
Date: 07/18/10 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Looking forward to more. :]
Author's Response: Thank you! :3
Date: 07/17/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill is such an ass im sorry to say :(
Author's Response: Well, he is quite selfish, I must agree with that. But he still has a heart. :)
Date: 07/17/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I so love it so far really its awesome and i want to know wht happens next please continue soon. :DD
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter should be up this evening or tomorrow. :)
Date: 07/17/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it!! This will definitely be an interesting story xD Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you a lot! I promise to update asap :P
Date: 07/17/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
FUCKING CLIFFHANGER
AND FUCKING BRILLIANT
MAKE FUCKING MORE XD
Author's Response: LOL. Fucking more will come soon. Thank you for the review :)
Date: 07/17/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha! I love Bill's tantrum!
*tracks* =)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :3
Date: 07/17/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
*barf* love at first sight XXDD. hey that means that there willbe some eps with No Make Up Bill *party* ^_^. though man can you be more of a Drama Queen and so mean to your sister too i_i but then again if he wasnt then that wouldnt be Bill XP. is loving it. =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you like it so far. ;)
Date: 07/17/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far, update soon...PLEASE
Author's Response: Thank you! And I promise to try and update ASAP. I have the second chapter half done. :)
Date: 07/17/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Funny idea! :D *tracking*
Author's Response: Thank you! *dances*
Date: 07/17/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol im in love with it already!!! cant wait for more!!!^^
Author's Response: Aww. I'm glad you liked it! More is definitely on the way! ;)
Date: 07/17/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want more!!!
Author's Response: More will come... SOON! :D