Date: 07/22/16 04:19 pm Title: Too Late
this story is so sad and it's so heartbreaking to see tom go through like this. after reading this story i want to go and hug him, soothe his back and tell him 'please don't cry, everything will be fine'. sorry if it sounds weird but i just can't help it. my heart broke for tom :(
Date: 07/22/16 04:19 pm Title: Too Late
this story is so sad and it's so heartbreaking to see tom go through like this. after reading this story i want to go and hug him, soothe his back and tell him 'please don't cry, everything will be fine'. sorry if it sounds weird but i just can't help it. my heart broke for tom :(
Date: 06/10/15 08:25 pm Title: Too Late
Oh my GOD. ;_; i felt absolutely sick reading this :( like.. In a way i never have before at fiction. This was just so real and devastating and i felt exactly what Bill did when everything came clear. I felt so bad for Tom like when he was smiling, knowing finally he had an escapse despite all the pain that brought it. Oh my godddd! Why did he have to die! If only he had been found and then Bill could find him and say sorry, but he never had the chance! Oh man this fucked me up, i feel so awful! :(
Date: 09/12/11 09:46 am Title: Too Late
i almost cried :(( very good fic!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Aww, I'm sorry, I promise next time I'll right a much happier fic!
Date: 06/20/11 05:21 pm Title: Too Late
:'(
Author's Response:
I know, right? :'(
Date: 02/19/11 08:18 pm Title: Too Late
This is so sad and fucked up that it almost made me cry...
Author's Response:
Same here :(
Date: 02/05/11 07:14 pm Title: Too Late
i....i love this.
Author's Response:
Wow, seriously? Thanks so much :')
Date: 12/18/10 07:04 am Title: Too Late
^__^ Hey Haleema ^_^ ..Poor Tom :'( that's so painful so sad...
I like it the fic so far ^^
Author's Response:
Hi Narcissa :)
rnI know, just writing this made me depressed :(
rnOh this is only a one shot :)
Date: 11/28/10 05:33 pm Title: Too Late
the saddest part of this story, is the fact that this really happens all the time. the people you love are often forgotten, or taken for granted, and when they're gone you never get that time back. parents, grandparents, siblings, friends, even pets...everyone who gives you love can be gone in an instant, but it's hard on a daily basis to remind yourself that evertime you close your eyes, they could be gone forever.
Author's Response:
I know, my cat just recently just got run over by a car and it's only now because she's dead that I've realised how much I loved her :(
rnBut yes, thank you for pointing that out, nobody else has :)
rnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/17/10 02:15 am Title: Too Late
OHH!! And P.S.
Tis story is soo going in my favorites. :D
I love this storyy,
Author's Response:
Whoo you reviewed twice!!
Danke bambs!! I really appreciate it!!! <3
Date: 08/17/10 02:12 am Title: Too Late
GAHH!!
I cried through the whole thing!
I not a fan of Billshido either, in fact i really hate that guy :|
idk why, but he just pisses me off.
I really liked this story cuz its about time that Bill broke Toms heart for once.
All the stories nowadays are of Tom being a jerk, breaking bills heart and then making up.
I like this cuz for once, Bill hurts Tom, and BILL is the jerk.
and now Bill will be miserable because of freaking stupid he was. :D
I sound like i like Bill being hurt, but i dont though, but its about time he did wrong in a story!
You, ive decided, are the BEST person EVER!
Author's Response:
Hi 5 sister! I can't stand Billshido, God knows why I wrote it.
I knoww! Every fic I read, it's always TOM being an asshole! So I thought, Hey, let's turn Bill into the bad guy.
Awww thank you!! <3
Date: 07/18/10 11:00 pm Title: Too Late
Oh.my.god. This made me cry! it was so.. well written, so many emotions and it was sad. omg poor, poor tomi! my heart just broke for him! and i felt sad for Bill too but he did take Tom for granted and all.. but dammit, this was a beautiful story even though it was sad and dear tomi died. i just loved it and i read it twice before i reviewed. i'm going to put it on my favs. :) I really loved it and the details and just.. everything. *sniffs* so, so, so beautiful *standing ovation* the rape was of course horrible, and all but i.. fucking loved this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you!!! Gosh this review just made my day! Thank you for favouriting it, I think you're the first person to do that! ;)
And yeah I know, poor Tom! ;( I was so sad when I wrote this!
And thank you again! You're stories are bloody well awesome as well ;D
Date: 07/18/10 10:36 pm Title: Too Late
omg im not even kidding when i say this. this made me straight up sob> Bill is such a fucking asshole. I just wanted to beat the shit out of him but the bitch got what he deserves. It really did break my heart though. Tom had to go for his brother to learn. really heart breaking :'(
Author's Response:
Yeah, I was aiming for Bill to come off as the bad guy, and he did indeed get what he deserved! In real life he's a sweet heart of course, I don't know what possessed me to write this ;)
Thanks for the review! It's nice to know that I didn't suck completely! ;D xxxx
And I might just write an alternate ending to this story, one where Tom doesn't die, and it's actually a happy ending!
Date: 07/17/10 10:26 pm Title: Too Late
I too am not a fan of Billshido.
LOVED this fic, very tragic, yet somehow well-deserved?
XD
Author's Response: Glad you liked it honey! :) rnrnThanks for the review! xxx
Date: 07/17/10 05:00 pm Title: Too Late
o_O Usually I like Major character deaths and rape but that was strange... I don't know how to explain it. Really... .... wow.
I don't really know what to say exactly, besides that was ... interesting. First I thought Bushido was raping Tom and thought [oh no another Bushido is the bad guy fic] but.. wow. Hmm... I don't know how to explain this.
I was basically like: o_______________0
the entire time. XD
Bill's an ass in this sort of.. and Tom.. aw...
Bushido, I didn't really see much in him to form a full opinion.
Nice oneshot however. Kept my mind... occupied and spinning. XD
Author's Response: It was supposed to be kind of weird :D But it would have made more sense if the italics I put in had showed up. For some reason they're not there =/ rnrnNice to know it kept you occupied! <3
Date: 07/17/10 04:45 pm Title: Too Late
Powerful, raw, heartwrenching...
Author's Response: Thank you! That's everything I was trying to make it to be :)