Date: 09/29/24 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 03/28/20 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
How have I only just read this? This was so fucking hot, I can’t. Absolutely wonderfully written!
Date: 06/03/16 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Um. *fans self* this was pretty damn good.
Date: 07/29/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1
The amateur writer in you who thinks she knows it all was right. There was no place for hot twinsex in this story. It was perfect just the way it was.
Date: 03/14/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, this was so hot, even if it was just fingering. Maybe you should write a sequel and add the hot twinsex there. (;
Date: 11/17/10 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was pretty sure i already commented this, but i guess i didn't. But YOU GOTTA MEKA A SEQUEL!! This was awsome! really liked it :DD
Date: 08/14/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wanted that hot twc ..! But i guess that writer in you were right when it came to the hot twin sex ._. ugh! Though i loved it
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed even without the twc. :)
Date: 08/02/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Read this per Tay's reccomendation (she's awesome like that), and I'm so glad that I did read it because it was brilliant! You know, there is so much twinsex around THF that - for me, personally - I actually enjoy and sometimes prefer to read fics that don't include it, but have another level of smuttyness such as this. It was hot and sexy, and adorable with Bill's frustration and Tom's willingness to be the 'helpful' older brother. Hopefully Bill will return the favour in the future ;) I am all for a sequel because I'm another greedy fangirl when it comes to writing such as this - but again, I would be satisfied without twinsex and Bill reciprocating and driving Tom to a powerful orgasm ;)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I am working on a sequel at the moment and I sure hope it lives up to expectations. Such an awesome review, again, thank you so much! :D
Date: 08/02/10 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1
That was hot! Really nice. :) I like how you describe Tom and Bill's relationship and how close they are, especially this: "when it came to Bill’s erratic behavior and temperamental mood swings, Tom always either knew the reason or was the reason." That sounds so right!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm so glad someone picked up on that! I've included little tiny hints in there and it makes me so happy that you spotted them! :) Thanks a lot for reviewing.
Date: 08/02/10 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1
oh there should definitely be sequel to this where Bill pays Tom back!
Author's Response: I'm working on it. ;) Thank you for reading &reviewing!
Date: 07/22/10 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill is absolutely right in getting french tips.
and you are absolutely right in choosing to write hot twin-time.
Author's Response: Haha, am glad you think so. Thanks for reviewing (:
Date: 07/19/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
This was super hot!!
Author's Response: Thanks! (:
Date: 07/19/10 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1
No hot twinsex...until the sequel you mean, right? Right?
Author's Response: Haha, yes indeed. I do mean until the sequel, since so many people have asked for 1. xD
Date: 07/18/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooo, I really enjoyed this! Very cute and hot and twinly. :) I would love to see a sequel. :D
Author's Response: Why, thank you. :) I'm definitely considering doing a sequel. Thank you for the review! :D
Date: 07/18/10 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. awesome!!!!! *___* u should write one with hot twinsex as well though... XD
Author's Response: lol I just might. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. =]
Date: 07/18/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Very hot and sexy! Loving the idea of a sequel. :]
Author's Response: hehee, thank you! &I am definitely considering doing 1, since so many people have asked for it. Thanks for reviewing =]
Date: 07/18/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow O.O
That was hot as hell, seriously! You should write a sequel or something, I would love to read about Bill returning the favour >:D
Author's Response: Thank you! I am considering a sequel, seeing as it's such a popular request. Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you liked.
Date: 07/18/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
the whole no hot twin secks is usually a bummer, but that was hot as all heck. seriously 0,0
but i do think Bill should tak off the tips, and give Tomi a run for his money 0.o...yea, i'm a perv like that.
a girl can dream, no?
Author's Response: why, thank you :) &your dreams just might come true in the sequel ;) thank you for the review (:
Date: 07/17/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
=[ why not continue and make it three chapter's...#2-Bill does Tom a favor, #3-they do the deed!!! Hey-a girl can wish can't she?!
Thank you for the story, I really liked it!
Author's Response: I will possibly be doing a sequel so maybe your wish will come true. lol &Thank YOU for the lovely review :)
Date: 07/17/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, that was really sexy. I enjoyed this a lot! That was some great twin fingering. :3 A bit too fast for twinsex, yes, but this was quiiiiiite nice. I liked having Tom's perspective during the sexytiems.
Author's Response: Thank you soo much :) I'm glad you enjoyed.