Date: 07/17/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
HAHT! it would have been nice if there was secks, though :) LOVE IT!
Author's Response: yes, it would've. fangirl me agrees with you completely. thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/17/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really sweet job here, and it was good you didn't delve directly into hard core secks :) It worked quite well with Bill's sexual frustration and general aggravation combined with Tom's growing infatuation with his pretty baby brother. Nice :) * Maria
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I hope you know, though, that you have just completely stroked writer me's ego. She's gloating over here. -.- lol, but thanks a lot for the review. really. :)
Date: 07/17/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's some of the best fingering I've read in a long time. :)
Any chance of a sequel? Perhaps Bill offering to return the favor? ;)
Author's Response: lol, thank you. :) And quite possibly. a sequel's been playing around in my mind, and I know it will please the fangirl in me. lol. Thanks for the review (:
Date: 07/17/10 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww i wanted hot twinsex : lol
but that fingering was reallllllly hot so don't worry this story was awesome i loved it :DD
Author's Response: Yeaa I wanted hot twinsex, too. -sigh- Lol, thank you very much for the review. :D
Date: 07/17/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
fuck the amateur writer! let the fangirl side win!!!! xD
Author's Response: hehee xD I wish she did.
Date: 07/17/10 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
omg... NO SEX?!?!?! WTF?!?!?! then pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dont make this and one-shot and continue! its fucking great!!! i beg you! and believe me, i dont use to beg! xD ur writing is incredible!!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) and I knowww! The fangirl in me is right there with you. She's totes pissed. But I am considering a sequel, so if I do, I'll be sure to let you know. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07/17/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
That made me giggle. I love it!
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you for reviewing (:
Date: 07/17/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't really know what to say other than; HOT x)
Love it, and I can recognize the dilemma you had there...
Author's Response: -Sigh- Yes, quite a dilemma. Fangirl very nearly won. She was so close. But then, idk, writer part took over and grr...she has a way with words, hehee xD (ignore my lame joke) Lol, thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked. :)
Date: 07/17/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
omg this was so awesome! haha! And it was awesome, the line where Bill'd told Tom that life was short and if he didn't find his soulmate he was sure as hell NOT going to die as a virgin. Haha that was totally awesome ;) I really liked it :D
Author's Response: Lol thanks, it was fun writing that part. Thank you for the review :)
Date: 07/17/10 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
i think there was enough without the twinsex, but just in case i second the sequel idea
Author's Response: lol, thanks. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the review =]
Date: 07/17/10 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
So write a sequel with hot twinsex:) I'll definitely read it^^
Author's Response: lol, thanks! &I just might, we'll see. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/17/10 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
This was unbelievably hot. Even without the secks. it's not always necessary for them to go all the way for it to be good, sometimes less is more ;D
Well done ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! :) Of course, now the writer part of me is bragging and saying she told me so. -____- lol, thanks for the review. =]
Date: 07/17/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
thatīs such a shame that you left that out.
The fic was amazing.
But with some sex it would have been completely perfect.
Author's Response: -sigh- I knoooooowww. I tried to tell her, but she wouldn't listen. =[ lol thanks for the review. =]
Date: 07/17/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1
awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you. =]