Date: 02/14/15 11:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Poor David! He's on the verge of a stroke or something. I hope everything works out in the end. Well, I mean, I do know the story is on hiatus but there has got to be an end sometime if only in your mind. :P
Date: 03/21/11 10:04 am Title: Chapter 9
Just found the story and it's amazing..
Will it be updated sometime?
Author's Response: its kinda on a hiatus right now until I can figure out where im going with itrnhave you read my other ones?
Date: 11/04/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very, very short chapters, but liking it nonetheless >:D
Author's Response: yeahrnthat chapter did not turn out the way i wanted it too
Date: 10/27/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter 9
I think David popped a vein rofl XD
Date: 08/03/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
well in any conclusion, i think both were equally awesome XD good job
Date: 08/01/10 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh shiz nit, they be in trouble
Date: 08/01/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
teehee good sex scene
Date: 08/01/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
omfs, (this is kayla) that was a really good sex scene for your first story, teehee i likes ur writing
Author's Response: the first sex scene was by someone elsernthe second one was by me
Date: 07/30/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
HALLO SIE! lemme attempt this again. THis story is soo nice and pretty! Its really good and I love it soo very much. Im not gonna post on every chapter cause I'm lazy, but i felt the need to try to review(again) hope it goes through this time!
Date: 07/23/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
I feel like your fic has a lot of grammar mistakes.. Don't use 'ja' or especially 'OMG' that's so not writing material. :/ It needs more story felt, like try squeezing in as much adjectives and imaginative descriptions as possible. I think it'll be nicer then. ^-^ But I am still enjoying it!!! :DD
Poor twins. *hugs them* :'(
UPDATE SOON! :D
Author's Response: OkrnI have a hard time with the imaginative descriptions for some reason....donno whyrnAnyway, I know what you mean by the OMG think LOL
Date: 07/23/10 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
'M trying another color ;P
hmm.. it wasn't bad. I liked it. :3333 Good sex ^_^
Date: 07/23/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
This chapter made me shudder :P
paparazzi? o.0 oh nu! D:
Date: 07/23/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Twins are enjoying telling people 1 by 1 huh? :P Haha.. sweet. ^-^
Author's Response: yea, I thought id make it longer by having them tell everyone one by one. Plus, its easier for Bill....he wont get as overwhelmed. ROFL
Date: 07/23/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
SMUT!!!!!!!!! WITH GUSTAV WATCHING O:
acck Loved it xDDDDDDDDddd
< 33333
Author's Response: So did he "wink wink"
Date: 07/23/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
I feel like this goes too fast, but *shrug* I'm enjoying it anyhow!
You made a few grammar mistakes....
and you wrote "Gustave" XD
Anyways, am loving it. :333
Gustav likes twincest ^-^
Author's Response: Yep he doesrnI spelled Gustav's name wrong....that's embarrassing (blush) although I am ALWAYS spelling his LAST name wrong. My spelling isn't that great
Date: 07/23/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
You wrote 'rapping' instead of 'wrapping'. :P
Awww the part where Bill cries made me cry XD I'm just like that..
See what the G's & Andi gonna do. ^-^
Date: 07/23/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Felt rushed, but I liked it nevertheless....
married twins :3333 cute.
the banner is adorable btw ^-^
*clicks Next*
Author's Response: it was originally gonna be a oneshot
Date: 07/21/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awwwwww... -sniffles- Hope this ends well!!!! Love it, write more!!! soon! Please!
Date: 07/21/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 8
What now? Tel me, tell me, tell me! *.*
When I stared reading I thought "Everythink ok? Simone is okay with them?" But now... I love wen sbt knows about twins ^^ What now? What David'll say? And fans? journalists? Tell me please *.* Or... give us new chapter ;P
(And two or three sex scene?:) I think that the last one you should added to chapter when twins tell Simone and Gordon the truth)
Sorry 'bout my bad English - It's to late for me to thinking correct ;P
Author's Response: lol its okrn
Date: 07/21/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet, can't wait to read more, but I'm afraid I'll have to sleep on it. I'm about exhausted lol. Can't wait to read the rest.