Date: 04/25/26 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Your Arms.
Great!
Date: 04/25/26 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 15: Presents & Accidents.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:58 am Title: Chapter 14: Chicken Noodle Soup & Eskimo Kisses.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:52 am Title: Chapter 13: A Lake House & Rough Sex.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:43 am Title: Chapter 12: Tired of Saying No.
Great
Date: 04/17/26 12:39 am Title: Chapter 11: The Truth.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:35 am Title: Chapter 10: Boys Suck.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:28 am Title: Chapter 9: A Break.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:19 am Title: Chapter 8: Broken.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:13 am Title: Chapter 7: Lips That Press & Advice.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:06 am Title: Chapter 6: In The Morning & Breakfast.
Excellent
Date: 04/17/26 12:01 am Title: Chapter 5: Shots & Tribulations
Excellent
Date: 04/16/26 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sex ED & Pancakes.
Excellent
Date: 04/16/26 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Memories.
Excellent
Date: 04/16/26 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Oh Boy.
Excellent
Date: 04/16/26 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prologue.
Loved it
Date: 03/28/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Your Arms.
welll , i loved this story . i really enjoy reading ure stories . ure such a great writter . will be looking up the sequel .
Date: 08/19/11 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: Boys Suck.
She should just dump nate! I hate him x( Team Tom!
Date: 08/16/11 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 16: In Your Arms.
“Can I be Spiderman instead? I hate Superman,” he said shyly.
Hahahah, Tom xD cute.
Great story. Very very great :)
I'm looking forward to reading the sequal because I'm sure it's good like the other two stories I've read from you. You're a very good writer
Author's Response: I just read all of your reviews and wooooow, thank you SO much ! I really appreciate the feedback and advice. (:
Date: 08/16/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 15: Presents & Accidents.
Wow.. eh.
Just a thought here; because your chapters are short and you don't write the scenes more detailed and longer, it seems too quickly when you skip to the next scene or the next part.
Like when Nate just came and said those things and then a car hitting Liz... it's all happening very fast.
You're a good writer. I really REALLY enjoy reading these chapters so it's not to complain. It's more to help you if you ever accept any advice because that could only make you better and better in writing stories and describing them and explaining them in more details :)