Date: 08/01/10 09:58 pm Title: Learning takes time, but in this case not much time.
Well, if it helps, it's an okay chapter.
Author's Response: it kinda does, thanks :)
Date: 08/01/10 01:54 pm Title: New Faces.
Awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/30/10 01:07 am Title: Learning takes time, but in this case not much time.
i like it alot dont worry about anything
Author's Response: aw, thanks :)
Date: 07/29/10 03:12 pm Title: Learning takes time, but in this case not much time.
It's awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/29/10 03:06 pm Title: Learning takes time, but in this case not much time.
I like it don't put your self down...
Author's Response: lol, but its just the way i am, but thanks anyway ^__^
Date: 07/29/10 02:08 pm Title: Learning takes time, but in this case not much time.
I noticed some spelling mistakes so go through it once more. Well, it is a bit naive but also kinda sweet so don't be sp disappointed.
Author's Response: yeah, i suck at spelling, but i do not have the time to double check it (in australia, we're in the middle of the school year) but in my defense, in aus, we spell things different, apologise, in other places they spell it apologize and colour and color. lol, thanks for being honest :)
Date: 07/28/10 02:27 pm Title: Ride ‘em Cowgirl!
Horse are my passion :) They are my FAVORITE animal and i LOVE being around them. they make me sooo happy :) This story is so amazing! i really like it so far :D
Author's Response: thats wonderful! i used to obsessed with horses when i was younger, but i kinda got over them (my grandfather was a horse trainer, one time he was in the world record books ^__^) but i still think they are beautiful creatures and i still have two posters in my room :P oh, thank you so much!
Date: 07/28/10 12:53 am Title: Ride ‘em Cowgirl!
loverly my lady :)
Author's Response: lol!! thanks for readin'
Date: 07/27/10 11:26 pm Title: Ride ‘em Cowgirl!
Hahaha... That's cute! I love it!
Author's Response: :P glad you do!
Date: 07/27/10 02:39 pm Title: Ride ‘em Cowgirl!
Awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: :D danke!
Date: 07/27/10 01:44 pm Title: Ride ‘em Cowgirl!
Awww poor Bill! lol great chapter you were right it was a funny chapter
Author's Response: i know, but i really can imagine it, and you must admit, i would kinda be funny :S im glad you agreed :P
Date: 07/26/10 10:08 pm Title: Willkommen im Hotel
O.O can;t wait for more! good chapter!
Author's Response: well, guess what, i just added another chap! thanks so much :)
Date: 07/25/10 08:47 pm Title: Willkommen im Hotel
Ah ha... this chapter is cool..
Author's Response: lol... thanks ^__^
Date: 07/25/10 06:29 am Title: Willkommen im Hotel
MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: :D im glad you like it enough it to have caps :P
Date: 07/25/10 06:01 am Title: Willkommen im Hotel
There's one thing I'm wondering about. I'm no expert on cancer, but doesn't chemo make you sick? I mean, it breaks down your immune system, and causes higher risk for catching anything. And one tend to be really tired from it? At the time when my immune system were broken (not because of chemo! xD) I had to stay in bed several days a week.
Oh, and it would be nice with longer chapters, and it would be really good with some more describing about things around them and what they are feeling, and not only act and talk.
Author's Response: yeah, it does, it makes you spew a lot and weak, i know coz my family has had experience, but i wanted this to be happy so i kept it out :P and about the chapters, i've written the whole thing already(i wrote it months ago), so i'm too lazy to write it all again, plus i really dont have the time, sorry
Date: 07/25/10 04:58 am Title: Willkommen im Hotel
Awesome I can't wait it's geting more and more exiting :)
Author's Response: :) im glad your excited :D
Author's Response: :) im glad your excited :D
Date: 07/25/10 12:32 am Title: A duet.
Awww... To cute!!
Author's Response: :) thanks for reading! and reviewing, i might add ;)
Date: 07/24/10 04:54 pm Title: A duet.
Oh em Gee I love this new chapter good work!
Author's Response: haha! ah, thank you very much!
Date: 07/24/10 02:21 pm Title: A duet.
Awesomeeeee :D can't wait :)
Author's Response: :D
Date: 07/24/10 12:22 pm Title: A duet.
awww Bill is so sweet...:)
its attracting..it turns me on lmaooo jk
but yahhh im lovin it so far :)
Author's Response: :) bahahahaha! im glad your liking it :)