Date: 07/18/10 04:37 am Title: An idea
O.O I LOVE IT
Author's Response: :) thanks for the review!
Date: 07/18/10 03:52 am Title: An idea
Don't use ' just put ". ' is not for dialog.
Anyways, this is very very cute :)
Bill is a sweetheart! Love him :D
Tom should be more supportive... ;P
And the little girl with Tokio Hotel would be so ADORABLE! :D
Update soon. :3
Author's Response: thanks for the advice, though i do see it in published books like that. i've already written it all so i cant be bothered going through it, there's a lot of dialog!and im lazy :P rnim glad your liking it and i will try to update soon!
Date: 07/16/10 11:14 pm Title: A Big Day
I was giggling the whole time I was reading this and it's cute, but in a musical way.
Bill's finally met his match in vocals and he doesn't mind sharing his spotlight with Ange cause of her amazing voice cause seriously if there was a girl out there that can match Bill's singing he wouldn't stand a chance.
Keep going on this story cause it might get heartwarming.
Author's Response: :D yeah, dont worry, you'll be giggling throughout this FF :Prn
rnhaha! well i dont know about that, bill's got a pretty good range :Prn
rnoh, dont worry i will, it's already written :D i does get a bit heartwarming ^__^rnthanks for your review :)
Date: 07/16/10 05:34 pm Title: A Big Day
That was so cute ^___^ I really liked it.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it :) hope you continue to read!
Date: 07/16/10 04:23 pm Title: A Big Day
AWwww okay, I awwed at the summary and once I finished I awwed even more and announced to my brother "this has to be the cutest story I;ve ever read! It needs more reviews".
So freaking adorable!!!!!!111 Ange is such a sweetheart :3 I wanna hug her.
Bill is so sweet, and him with children - even with his style, has this beautiful face of some angel and it would be very nice. If Tokio Hotel had the time to really do something like this I'd scream and fangirl. xD
This kinda reminded of Michael Jackson. :3 And I'm a huge fanatic of him. :)
I have to rush this review! :( but I shall write more when I come back,
lovely plz update!
/btw your banner is BEautIFUL! Adore the concept,
Author's Response: hehe! well im glad that my story translated enough emotion for you to aww :D naw, thanks for thinking that i needs more reviews :)rn
rnyes, she is pretty cute :)rn
rnhehe, i know! it just reminds me of the THTV epp, shoppin with bill and he sees the kid. naww! Yeah, i think that would be great, they should do it when they are older :Prn
rnhaha, MJ! yeah, he's pretty legendary!rn
rnoh, i dont mind, this is probably the longest review i've had so im fine with it :P rn
rni was planning to update today, but my dad stole my laptop and thats where my doc is :/ rn
rnthanks, i must admitt, i like it too :Prn
rnthanks for your review and i hope you continue to read!!
Date: 07/16/10 03:27 pm Title: A Big Day
Ooooo....cool love it!!!
Author's Response: :D thanks for the review and im glad you like it :D
Date: 07/16/10 01:21 pm Title: A Big Day
i love it it has so much heart
Author's Response: Im glad you do :D thanks for the review!