I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

this was a nice story!

Author's Response: YAY! Thank you. I'm glad u think so. :)

Lols XD I think just clothes, as a publicity stunt ^-^ Not hair, 'cause it took Tom FOREVER to get his dreads (unless you wanna do it with his braids???), and with their hair colors different now...it'd be weird...But I think it should be the clothes XD OOH, and to justify twincest: Tom had always kinda been in love with Bill, and got with those girls to try and get his mind off Bill, but Bill never showed signs of liking Tom (either because he didn't think he was attracted to Tom, or because he was better at hiding it), but with Tom wearing all those hot, tight clothes, Bill's either realizing he likes him or finding it hard to ignore his feelings...XD

Author's Response: Haha, yes, as much as I've always wanted to see our dear Tomi with his hair unbraided, loose and flowing, I think I should abstain for the sake of the story. Perhaps another time though. As for the twins' long-term feelings for eachother, I hadn't thought of it much, but I think your ideas would fit in well. My ideas were for the short-term plot points of Tom getting caught jacking off in Bill's clothing: Bill-"Ewww!" Tom-"Wha? You thought I wouldn't jack off this whole week just cuz I'm forced to wear your dumb clothes?!" lol, and so on. I've started writing Ch.3 for this fic because of our conversations. :)

Lols XD This sounds like fun ^-^ Okay... well, is there anything about the twins following through on promises no matter what, or something like that??? If there's not, I think you can get away with adding it... Then, the only justification needed is that Bill and Tom were tricked into signing the papers (I dunno, maybe they were TOLD Jost had sent them, but he didn't really???) and then they felt they had to follow through because they'd promised, even if it was a trick... although that seems really weak...Maybe it's a publicity stunt that Jost wants, just to see what happens XD Do they switch hairstyles too, or just clothing???

Author's Response: I was thinking some sort of hilarious blackmail maybe? Lol. Like or else the G's would leak some funny photos of the twins or something. Or perhaps David has some interest in seeing the twins switch as well n he insists they follow through. A publicity stunt is a good idea. Or..... ok, u actually just gave me an idea! I've been churning my brain for months now, but I just came up w this- what if the twins go up to Jost complaining of what the G's did n Jost wants to teach them a lesson about reading what they sign before signing it n now insists that they follow thru!..? Plus, it is a good publicity stunt. Lol. Does it sound plausible? Naw, just clothing. I think it's humiliating enough for Tom to have to wear Bill's tight pants n Bill to be wearing Tom's baseball caps. Lol.

I think that's the first time someone's said that to me...and for whatever reason, it made me get a happy-cry kind of feeling inside...Thank you for saying that, Ema-san =')

Author's Response: No worries. I understand. I've always felt that when someone is able to give negative as well as positive reviews, it makes it more special n meaningful to finally receive their praise. :) Kind of like the praise isn't so empty cuz not everyone gets it.

"Maybe this generation's youth were completely warped in the head." WOOT FOR FUCKED-UP-NESS!!!! XD Now, as the the actual STORY XD This was really well done. The transition from "brotherly love and support" to "sexual tension and love and support" was very well done, although I think Simone would've had a bit more of a freak-out at Tom. I mean, she'd just witnessed her sons kissing while naked in their pool, and one of her sons giving the other son a hand job. No matter how okay I think incest (that doesn't produce a baby) is, I'm still positive that I would freak out if sons of mine were in an incestuous relationship. I would probably yell, and scream, and sob, and ask them why they'd done this to me - not because they were both gay, but because I'd be afraid of losing my sons to the law. Also, Jost sees them kiss, and does nothing about it. That's highly unrealistic, especially considering your Jost is almost homophobic in his dislike of Bill's new style. Other than that, I loved this, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff ^-^

Author's Response: I'm really glad someone else is pro-incest (with absolutely NO babies) in real life besides me. lol.rn
I really appreciate this review. It's not often I get criticism so thank you. I'm so very glad you liked it and the transition to twincest was good- I always try and make that as realistic as possible, and I don't always know what other ppl thought of it. So thanks. :)rn
As for Simone and Jost- WAIT! I HAVE EXPLANATIONS! Hahaha. I thought it would come out this way in the story, so I'm sad it didn't but anywho... Simone doesn't know she's walked into a full-blown relationship between them, she thinks it must be a "phase" for them because she understands that their fame isolates them. She's also not only rather open-minded as I described at the beginning, but feels like a 3rd wheel when it comes to parenting the twins, cuz as much as they act like a family unit, they're still not very close, as displayed by Tom's not feeling like staying in a [almost] stanger's room while at their parent's place. As for Jost- Jost is a hardass when it comes to public image which equals $$. He was a bit behind the times at the beginning, but chilled out when he saw Bill's new look was still making $$. But he's also practically raised the twins so he's seen them cuddle plenty of times, and knows they are very close. In the end, he's assuming that kiss in the car was brotherly, kind of how u sometimes kiss your parents on the lips when young. Does that make sense? I'm sorry, it's my bad, I should have explained it better in the story I guess. :( rn
Thank u so much for your review!

OMG, Bill in white dress, I want see this! xD I just like Bill in girly clothes.
I don´t know what say. I like this story and way to they found themself.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) I really would love to write Bill wearing a wedding dress one day too (and marrying Tom)! I thought I would put it in this story, but in the end it didn't pan out that way. :( So I guess I'll have to save the idea for a later date. One day. One day... :) I have a little fetish for Bill in girly/girls clothing too. hehe.

Chapter 3 was so intense. I'm so glad to find a story that actually makes me feel like I'm "inside it", the way you wrote the first erotic scene in the bus was so real that I actually felt shaken during and afterwards. In my opinion you really managed to avoid the usual fan fiction cliches and created something original and incredibly interesting from a psychological point of view (I've always wondered how Bill'd possible gender confusion might have affected their relationship!). The build up, the emotions, everything... it was all gripping and exactly what I'm looking for in an incestual story - those raw and conflictiong emotions, not just "hey let's fuck and be done with it". So thank you for creating it!

Author's Response: Oh shit dude!! Your review just made me so fucking happy! All your compliments and things you described is exactly what I was going for when I wrote this. I actually passed my iPod touch to my bf so he could read your super nice review also. :)
The fact that you as a reader could feel the emotion and it sucked u in makes me feel like I did my job as a writer, and that u thought I avoided cliches means a lot to me. I worked on chapter 3 for so long, even more than chap5, just cuz I knew the moment when they step over the brother/lover line has to be believable. In fact I seriously don't think Tom could handle it if Bill got any hotter in real life.. Like in that one interview where Bill has his dreads and a ton of lipgloss on and he's looking pouty and seductive, and Tom's saying how he's done with one night stands.. That was like HAHAHA!!!! I knew it!! Well not really, but it's times like those that make me wonder if he really is keeping his paws away from his smoking hot brother who does actually look pretty girly. Twins that are so dedicated to eachother, who are also very different, and live such a sheltered bubble life make me question their real life possibility of something like this happening, and that makes me very inspired to write. Thank u again so much for a lovely review that really perked up my morning. :)

I loved it!! Really, it was a surprisingly good story and I also loved the ending.. =)

Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm glad you liked it!! Thank u. :)

I have to say I excpected this to be a bit longer but at the same time I don't mind that it ended where it did.

I really like it.

Your writing is really good and I'm quite impressed with the sex scenes.

Author's Response: AHHH!! Thank you. I'm glad to hear that. Writing sex was a little intimidating. lol. You know, by the end of it I felt like it could have been longer as well... but I had planned it out from the beginning to be only 6 chapters.. In retrospect I could have lengthened the ending, and split ch6 to make a ch7 as well, so the proposal and wedding or somehting could have had ch7, but there was something kick-ass for me about Tom turning around and being like "oh yeah? u want me to marry some pretty girl?! here, fuck u!" and goes right upstairs to propose to his brother. lol. Also, 23,000+ words was long enough for me. Longest story I've ever finished. I'm so glad you liked it!! :)