Date: 07/27/10 05:37 pm Title: THE RING
Lovely story! I enjoyed it, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Happy to hear that. :)
Date: 07/27/10 05:25 pm Title: THE RING
Wow, it was great! I'd love to see Simone's reaction on Bill wearing the engagement ring, it would be priceless. This story is amazing, I'd like it to be longer:) Everything except for Bill in skirts made me smile xD
Author's Response: OMG, I would love to see that too!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA
23,000+ words isn't enough for you? LOL. I guess I should be flattered. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/27/10 03:34 am Title: THE RING
Ema, i have to say that reading this fic fel like an adventure. You have compressed so much emotion and thought into these six chapters that it felt so realistic and believable wihout being boring like a longer fic would have done. Characterization was epic. You gave Jost and the Gs a role that although quite minor, still felt like a great big deal. The development of the twin's affection was also done flawlessly.
Forgive me if I'm wrong but I felt that Freedom and breaking free is the theme of the story. The way you made that into a song and made it a 'thing' was a great way of putting symbolism in the fic. The twins rebelling and breaknig away from rules is something I can very well imagine so that added realism and connection towards the reader.
I love how you tied everything up, with the ring and all. It was very romantic and so damn beautiful that it brought me to tears.
You're a great author and even though you took two years to write this, I'm soooo happy for it because it gave you time to think and rethink things thus making it such a beautiful piece. This story is definitely going to my favorites. Love you, Ema!!
--Jilly < 3
Author's Response: You're the sweetest thing EVER Jilly! Your review really lit up my nighttime.. I swear it felt better than the cookies I'm eating.
rnI'm so happy to hear that it was realistic. Sometimes I felt like it wasnt, and then I was really iffy about making Simone find out about them, and then have Tom rush upstairs and propose to Billl like immediately. I guess its to be like "oh yeah? fuck you!" but still. lol.
rnI'm glad you liked David and the G's roles.. I try to include them in life on the road, otherwise I dont think it would be realistic to completely write them out, esp since they obv see eachother all the damn time IRL.
rnYou really hit the nail on the head with the theme being Freedom!! Happy to see you got it. :) My original summary actually touched on it, but I shortened it and cut it out.
rnYou just make me so happy with all your kind words. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it! It makes the hard work worth it. :)
Date: 07/27/10 02:58 am Title: THE BROTHER
Yay!!! Although I was a bit late in reviewing, i love it when I see my name in the ANs xD I LOOOOOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! You are made of glitter and icing. (OWL talk for 'I adore you')
Author's Response: It's ok, I understood anyways. :) Thank you darling, for all your support. I'm so glad you liked it!!
Date: 07/27/10 02:36 am Title: THE WRATH
What the fudge?? I just realized I havent read his chapter at all!!! I'm so freaking behind! OAO great chapter by the way. ONWARDS!!
Author's Response: YEAH, haha, I was wondering why you didnt review this chapter. HAHA, now I know. :P Glad u liked it. :)
Date: 07/22/10 09:38 pm Title: THE BROTHER
Oh, wow.
I read the summary and if this had been writing by a really bad author, I think I might have cried.
The plot is really good and you write so much better than I excpected you too!
This is brilliant.
It's kinda weird admitting that Bill in leggings is fucking hot in my mind :P
Would love to see him in spandex!
I'll check back when the next chapter is up :3
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your sweet review. All the compliments made me smile so big. :) :) :) Glad to be exceeding your expectations writing-wise. Hope you'll think the same about the last chapter, it's half-way written.
I'm also glad SOMEONE besides myself thinks Bill in leggings/spandex would be super hot, cuz it totally would!
Date: 07/22/10 12:16 pm Title: THE BROTHER
thisis really god cant wait for the next 1
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. :) I'm writing Ch.6 right now, so I'll be up in the next 2 days most likely.
Date: 07/22/10 11:06 am Title: THE BROTHER
loved the chapter. hot twc sex
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you thought so. :)
Date: 07/22/10 04:10 am Title: THE BROTHER
I read this and I can't help but think how much sexier Bill actually would be if he started wearing skirts in real life. Yum... Great story by the way- it definitely keeps my cross-dressing!Bill fantasy alive. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: OMG, Thanks so much!! I don't think the world would be able to handle Bill in a miniskirt. It would just be too hot and the world would errupt in flames. lol. See, he's actually thinking of humanity by not doing it IRL in public. lol. Glad u like my fic!!
Date: 07/22/10 03:58 am Title: THE BROTHER
I can't believe it took me until you asked me to read this fic... I should have clicked it way before. *____* It's amazing... I love the concept very much. :3 Bill trying to open up to a new him, Jost feeling icky toward it, and Tom being the beautiful supportive brother he is. Very sweet. :3
In ch. 2 I think it was... when Bill cried, I started to cry. ;P When he was in Tom's arms.. crying over Jost. Oh dear I died. XD I always cry if one of the twins cry. Bill in a skirt would be the cutest and sexiest thing ever. *___* Mini skirt< 3 I love how Tom's all cool with it. xD I WANNA GLOMP THAT BOY :* So beautiful!
David needs to calm down... TH has many fanboys. And they're not all gay anyways. There's no way Bill can look like a manly badass rockstar. His face is naturally feminine, innocent, sweet and he looks like an angel God sent to this bloody earth. He's too beautiful for looking... 'hardcore'. Same with Tom, they naturally have this.. sweet angelic faces. Eeee so cute. *melts*
Anyways, the thing about the song "Freedom" was wow... hmm.. the record company is blah... Personally I got into TH b/c I thought our lovely Bill was a gorgeous lesbian. :P XDDD I was like "Oh Lord! She's SOOO pretty *spazz*" His fingers is what convinced me was a female. They looked so girly. o.0 His face had me thinking.. but I have this VCR of a live Peter Pan play of a woman playing peter pan. Her hair was so short, and when I was every young I remember asking my father if she was male or female, he said "look at the fingers- she's a woman" Soooooo I thought Bill was a girl. :p ahaha.
ANYWYASSSS off topic again! XD This is how my reviews get so HUGE.
I loved the smut, so hot... Love how they're so accepting of one another, yet there's still this tint of angst with the 'should we?' thing.. and I adore the crying. :P It makes me cry... and feel your story deeper. Amazing. Seeing Bill in a dress would be pure secks my my *_______________*
I like my sex when Bill screams.. but at least he cried :'D ahaha (:
I'm trying to quicken this review b/c I HAVE to log off but I'll write more later promise my MJ lovah buddy :D
LOVELY FIC.
WILL LOVE TO READ CH. 6 :DDDDDDD
~cherry
Author's Response: Cherrrrryyy!! You're wonderfully sweet to me. Thanks so much for giving my fic a try and I'm so glad you like! I hope u didn't cry too bad. :(rnI wanted Bill be a bit emo but have an actual reason, and then when he finds Tom and they're all coupley and Bill has an outlet for his girliness then his normal personality comes back and he;s no longer frustrated and sad and can deal with David's bullshit.rnDavid's character was moulded from the stereotypic adult who doesnt understand boy-bands and why girls like them, Yates too. That's why he bashes the "little girls" all the time, cuz he just doesnt understand.
That Freedom song was the twins "flighting back" and showing David who's boss. lol.
While Bill does look fem, and that's a big part of why I like him and Tom, I always knew he was a boy. O.o lol. The first pic I saw of him I was like mesmerized by his hair, the lion's mane back then. lol. So the sex was ok? Good. At least it wasn't fail. I always feel like a sound like a thesaurus, and while that may not be bad in other parts it would ruin sex. lol.
I think Tom is a little too accepting , but that's the way his character turned out. O-well. Thanks again for the lovely review, the loveliest one I've got for this fic so far. I will post Ch.6 as soon as I finish it. Just for u. :)
Date: 07/22/10 03:01 am Title: THE BROTHER
"Slippery when wet." LMAO Seriously can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad ur liking it. Btw, i wrote the whole paragraph cuz i really wanted to include "slippery when wet" in ther somewhere. lol.
Date: 07/19/10 10:09 pm Title: THE WRATH
They'll always be together :) Loved this can't wait to see what happened next!
Author's Response: Think I should post the next chap tonight? Arnt u the one who told me to make ppl wait? :P Thank you for all the reviews. You're sweet.
Date: 07/19/10 10:07 pm Title: THE GRAPES
Oooh la la! So hot!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I appreciate that. :)
Date: 07/19/10 09:59 pm Title: THE NAILS
Oh my! Leggings don't even looks good on girls... I'm seriously having trouble picturing Bill in them. However, I LOVE the red nail polish!
Author's Response: I think Bill would pull them off. I wanted to give him some "middle ground" between pants and something girly to lounge around in. Thanks! I love the red too. :)
Date: 07/19/10 09:55 pm Title: THE PANTS
"Tweedledee, Tweedledum, Gee, Gee. All here, good." Best line ever!
Author's Response: Thank you. It was my way of making Jost a clever bastard. lol.
Date: 07/19/10 04:50 am Title: THE GRAPES
Ema!! You write gooood. That hand-job scene was amazing. The plot is really well developed as well. To six chapters, I think you're getting the best out of it. I'm just surprised I didn't find the 'next' button at the end of chapter3. I could e sworn I saw five chapters. Lol. Update soon!!
--OWL
Author's Response: Wow, thank you OWL, I really appreciate the lovely comment. I don't socialize much around here, so it's a pleasure to get feedback from someone I've actually been introduced to. :) You probably thought 5 because I mentioned in the Shrei Box that I'd written a long sex scene into chapter 5. I had just finished writing it when I got on the Box yesterday. I just started writing chapter 6 a few hours ago and I have it all planned out, and now your nice comment has me pumped! I'm gonna post chapter 4 right now! Just for you. :)
Date: 07/18/10 08:45 pm Title: THE GRAPES
i think it turned out just fine.:)
Author's Response: Thank u, glad u think so. :)
Date: 07/18/10 09:57 am Title: THE GRAPES
femmyBill! that was hot!!
Author's Response: Thank u!! There's more of that to come also. :)
Date: 07/18/10 03:24 am Title: THE GRAPES
I love this story so far, but I hate David, I hope Tom kicks his ass for how he's treating his Billa. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I'm happy ur enjoying it so far! :) I've just finished the 5th chapter, and I'm hesitating plunging into the 6th one. Theres some drama that needs to happen and tie everything up and I'm scared!! :( lol
Date: 07/18/10 02:48 am Title: THE GRAPES
You and your quick updates are going to RUIN me for other stories. Screw you. In the most loving way possible. :p
This was...mmmm. ;)
Author's Response: Tehehehe. I plead Innocent. Oh wait, it is my fault. Oops. lol. I'm so happy that you like this fic! Thanks so much. :)