great new chapter i remember the old one and that was good too, it would have been cool if you kept the first chapter and made this one your second the original chapter provided alot of backround info. But i like this one too, keep it up.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this one as well. You mean that I should've kept the prologue? Yeah, I thought about it, but it didn't work out with the new personalities of the characters and the story line I have in mind, so :p I hope you keep reading and reviewing! It means a lot! ;D