Date: 12/15/10 05:19 pm Title: Uh oh.
Wow, bad bushido! Poor boys! But I want to know what happens next! :-) write more soon, please xx
Author's Response: I'll try! Thank you~
Date: 08/10/10 01:34 pm Title: Uh oh.
awesome chapter more soon ?
Author's Response: Hopefully!
Date: 07/15/10 03:56 am Title: Uh oh.
Maaaaaannnn.. this is so NOT "Completed". *pout* You left me hanging.
I was totally getting into it and then you just stopped. The best part was the "..Have you kissed a girl?" bit where they kiss, and I was really hoping that it would last, and that you would describe stuff better. Then I moved the page down and realised there's only like another paragraph of writing... let down! :( I really hope you'll go back and edit the ending, and add all the juicey scenes and feelings and what's going thru the twins' minds when snogging. So hot. You have a good thing going here, it's naughty and tantalizing, and please continue. :)
Author's Response: Yes:D Sorry, I forgot to undo the "completed" box. It's not done, but I just didn't feel up to writing anymore because it was taking forever and I'm hyped on pills sooooo yeah. I'll probably edit it and finish it tomorrow or the next day.
Date: 07/15/10 03:08 am Title: Uh oh.
Oh, oh *sigh* Bu as the bad guy... again. He has the look, yeah, but he's not THAT bad on real life and he could be a really nice character.
And well, I like pedo!bu, all the twin-play and everything but this idea could take a very different way.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I stole from a TV show xD I know he's probably really sweet, but I like to think he's an evil, pedo, rapist :D