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Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 01:10 pm Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

I'm so sorry to hear about the flaming. It's such a shame since your story is so beautiful. Every word is in its proper place. Nothing feels rushed or forced. I don't read fanfiction that much, so when my friend told me about your story I had to come read it sounded too good to pass up. I'm so glad she was right. I look forward to seeing you come back and I hope things get resolved soon. **hug**

Author's Response: Thanks so much. ♥

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 11:53 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Good luck with the break. I really love your writing, though, just so you know. Each and every story I've read by you takes ahold of me. I have such strong connection with your characters that sometimes I think you're inside of my head. Everytime I see a banner that looks like your style I get excited because your writing just does that to me. I really hope you get your breathing room and find peace while you're away :)

Author's Response: Well, tahnk you I'm happy you enjoy my stories. :-)

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 11:44 am Title: Bill Tapes a Note to a Window, Tom Tapes his Heart Back Together

Lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 11:20 am Title: Bill Has a Fondess for Running, Tom Has a Fondness for Bill

Poor Tom! The dear is just so nervous and his compulsions... Make me want to cuddle him, but he wouldn't like that much. : )

I love your characters. They feel very real and the setting they live in is easy for me to imagine. I approve of chapters 1-3 so far. ; ) I'm sure I'll love more as they come.

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 10:02 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

D: Evil flamers.
They're jealous of your epic writing. ^^
I'm in loveeee with this story. XD
It's amazing. ^^
And I hope you'll be back soon. ^^
But most importantly, I hope you feel a lot better soon. :D
That's more important than bouncing back quickly. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, hon. :-)

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 09:03 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Your end notes are horribly depressing. For real? On a side note: this chapter is my favorite so far. You describe all the little moments and feelings so well.

Author's Response: Thanks. And yeah, for real.

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 08:32 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Uh-oh, I think some people hate me now. o.o

And damn it, why do people always have to spell my name wrong? D:

Anyway. Wonderful chapter, hon. :) I really like the way you're describing Tom's OCD. It seems so weird to have someone acting that way, and then you remember that it's not weird to the person. And you have to think about why they're doing it -- if it was something that happened earlier on to them or if it was just something that spontaneously happened one day. I wonder which one Tom is; maybe something happened when he was younger to make him like this? :(

Either way, I'm sure I'll find it really interesting how their relationship progresses, especially since Tom is adamant about not having any physical contact with Bill. :/ It's a good thing Bill's not touchy-feely or anything because that would really suck. XD



Author's Response: Don't worry. One person pissed at you compared to dozens pissed at me? I think you're fine.

Thanks. But, it might not even progress at all lol... I'm in no mind to write this anymore.

Reviewer: Chayenne7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 06:28 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Another amazing chapter! I'm so in love with this story you can't imagine. As for this drama that's going on here with Savanna (I would have to be dead not to notice...)since I've quit writing for this fandom a while ago I don't have anything to lose here if I drop in my two cents. I hope you don't mind since we don't know each other at all. But here it is: I like Savannas stories very much. However, the moment I read the first chapter of her story, my first thought was that it had an eery resemblance to yours. It was especially noticeable since it was posted very close in time to your story. So I understand your point and that you are miffed. Totally acceptable. But. And that's why I'm writing all this down to you. this whole shit has happened to me here once. I don't know if you remember, but I had a featured story Scar Tissue, and then a person started posting a story which basically had the same plot, the same characters, they even stole the name of the potion used in my story. This fic is still being posted, despite me having contacted the author and the mods about the possible rip-off. Now she apoligized, put up a disclaimer, but still keeps posting. Do I still care? hell, no. and you shouldn't either. That's my message to you: don't give a f***. This is not the end of the world and it should not be over-dramatized either. You should just keep doing your thing. It's not like people stop reading your story, because of the other. This whole thing is not worth blowing up and you leaving even for a moment!
I hope you don't mind that I ambushed you with this message, but I've been through it all and I never looked back ever since. You shouldn't either. This story is too good and you are an author too good for that. Take care,
Chay

Author's Response: Oh, well. All I know is now I seem like that bad guy for some reason and I've been being harassed left right and centre. It's not so easy to just "not give a fuck" when THF is all you have sometimes. My issue though... you're telling me not to leave but you left because of the same thing? or did you leave for other reasons? Sorry, I only got two hours of sleep because I was up crying all night lol. So my head isn't working. At any rate, thanks but... I still think I'll be leaving for a while.

Reviewer: THbillgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 04:13 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

great chapter!!! it's really good, i cant wait for more:D

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 04:05 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

i heard what happened and i understand why your leaving. But i hope you return soon.

Your story is really good, Cin

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:47 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

YAY! An update!  I was so happy!... Until I read the Chapter End Notes ._.  You're quitting THF for a while?!  No!! *cries in corner*  *Pull yourself together, Madison!* *sniffles* Okay, I guess I understand.  If you need a break, by all means, just take one.  As long as you come back, its all good.  But just remember that you have some very dedicated readers here... *coughs*Me*coughs* xD

I hope your break lets you get yourself together cuz I'm gonna miss you and your writing while you're gone!  Hurry Back!!



Author's Response: ♥ Thank you darling. :-)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:30 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

I love this story and these characters! You are an awesome writer! I understand wanting to take a break, but I hope you don't let the flamers bother you to much, they're not worth it. IMO you are one of the best authors on this site, and I will miss your writing very much.

Author's Response: I'm sure I'll get over it eventually. Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:27 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Who the hell's been flaming you? *gets glarey* N dude, I totes just found this and m loving it

Author's Response: It doesn't matter. Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 02:08 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Love that Bill wants them to match at the party and that Tom's afraid that means he'll have to wear kneehigh boots. :p
Bill and Tom are both so cute and adorable! Love how you've written them both so much!

Hate to hear you're leaving for awhile. :( Alot of my favorite stories here are by you. You will be missed. *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you. :-) ;hug;

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 01:40 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

*blinks* You're the reason I keep revamping and revamping my stories. You were one of my first favs. I hope you come back because I always love your stories.

On topic, I watched Obsessed tonight, a show about people with OCD, and you capture Tom's compusions perfectly. They seem completely irrational yet...somehow they make sense to the people performing them.

Author's Response: I will come back. Eventually. Yes, OCD is hard to live with.

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 01:13 am Title: Bill Likes Tom's Song, Tom Likes Bill's Gift

lmao! i love how Bill announces his need to cry. it seems very...i can't think of the word...

i want to say fake, healthy, rediculous, frusterating. It's very free of him, lol. Such a personality as that is rare to come upon. I like the character you've made Bill into, and Tom's reaction to Bill's advances and friendship is super cute. Can't wait to see where this is going.

and, i just wanted to say, i'm so glad you decided not to take a hiatus, because your stories are truely magic. Thanks so, SO much for sharing your talent with us

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :-)

Reviewer: BuggaBiene Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 01:04 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Flaming? Quitting?! Well, I'll miss you and I hope you'll come back soon :) loved the chapter btw!!

Author's Response: I'll be back eventually. Thank you.

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:52 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I feel kinda bad for Tom, stuck in his obsessive little world. Bill is a curious creature, I wonder how they'll fair together. ha, no pun intended :D

Author's Response: :-p Hehe fair.

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:51 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Oh no! You can't go! What will I do without your updates!

:(

Author's Response: I'll be back.

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/10 12:12 am Title: Bill Wants to Feel the Piano, Tom Wants to Feel Bill

Tom + Knee-High Boots = XD

Author's Response: Terrible imagery. :-p

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