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Reviewer: Turner Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:34 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Your situation is terrible hun.
That person should be ashamed.
*hugs*
This chapter was lovely.
xxx

Author's Response: ♥ Thanks, love!

Reviewer: MinxyKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 05:56 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

AW!! i feel bad you've had to deal with ppl who're making thingsgs difficult for you here on THF T^T that really sucks. }:(

i was EXTREMLY happi wen i saw the word vuvuzela in this - I'm from south africa so its rather heart warming to see something thats related to my country in a fanfiction (even if that thing is the most obnoxious thing around =] )

nw bwt the story - i realli luv the way Bill is so unique, it'll be great to see the developemtn in his and tom's relationship ^.^ the anticipation kills my soul *tehehe* you realli are able to capture such interesting personalities traits and ideas within different people very accurately. makes me feel like i'm that person, or i'm feeling their emotions - its realli interestin.
hopefulli u keep on writin cause i'd luv to see where you end up with this.

THANK YOU FOR THE EFFORT!!!

Author's Response: I am very pleased you think I capture the personalities well. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 05:14 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Enjoy your break, sweetheart, you deserve it. I know I'll be right here when you come back =] And I can't help but love this story even more :B

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 04:30 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Oh no ! I feel so sad for you, you don't deserve any of this... take that time away to clear your head and don't let stupid people get to you... I know it's hard since people can be so mean... anyway, I'll wait for you to come back when you're ready. Thanks so much for this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, hun. ♥

Reviewer: fall_forward Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 03:59 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Okay, this will be slightly out of character for me, but everyone giving you a hard time should shut their fucking face. Online harassment...how old are you, 12? I hate when people put words in your mouth when you never said anything to begin with. I'm still a supporter, hon (:

Only bad thing I can say about you...this chapter...vuvuzelas...connected to a megaphone... -shudder- you are cruel, lmao.

Author's Response: VUVUZELA BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ hahahahaha. xD

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 12:58 pm Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Hehe, I bet I would have Gustav's reaction to talkative Bill.

Ooh, and it's cool how Bill is adapting to Tom's needs.

Author's Response: Thank you ♥

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 11:07 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

ok, so let me start by saying that, as usual, I adore the characterizations that you portray with Bill and Tom. This story is going right into my favorites and I sincerely hope you stick with it.

as for the other things, I hope you know that you have a lot of people who enjoy reading your work. some of whom, and i include myself in this, shout and flail with glee every time a new story of yours pops up on our update page. Please know that whatever drama ONE review tries to stir up, there are a LOT of US who want you to stick around.

If you need a break from writing, then by all means, take it. I just hope that the actions of one doesn't ruin the experience of all of us enjoying your god-given writing talent.

Author's Response: We'll see if I write again... Thanks.

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 10:21 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

ok before i actually review your chapter i would like to say that you are not selfish nor worthless for wanting a break from THF(in my opinion sometimes we all need one). but one thing i would like to say and again this is solely my opinion i am not trying to be rude or anything, but i really think that you shouldn't let what one person said make you quit, because what that person said is not true at all. But i support and am behind you on your decision 100%.

Now, on your chapter, again, i really do like how corky and loud you make bill to be.

Author's Response: Um, no. It was a lot more than one person emailing me and harassing me over Facebook messages, lol... About everything, really. Not just this hiatus. Anyway, thanks.

Reviewer: Bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 08:11 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Yay for a new chapter!
Not cool that people are still being silly. :|
It's just super-childish to do this, and especially to a great author!
I can honestly say, I've never seen a fic like any of yours, and even if I did, I wouldn't accuse either party of plagiarism, because although everyone has different minds, some people do have the same ideas.
For example, I once saw a documentary on South Africa, and thought it would be really cool to set a fic in SA, and then the very next day, I logged on, to see a new fic, set in SA! O:
Obviously I never wrote it, I wasn't scared of being accused of plagiarism, everyone should be able to write freely, but I just felt that the other author had a better concept of where she was going, and I sort of, just, write whatever comes to me. :P
Regardless of whether it looks like plagiarism, it's normally not, because everyone puts their own spin on their stories.
In fact, if THF were to set a very specific challenge, no-one would write it the same, so therefore, we can't accuse anyone of plagiarism, and it's plain wrong to, unless it is very apparent that the author deliberately copied and pasted work from another author.
It is definitely not fair to attack any author who has posted their original ideas on this site, even though it's fan-fiction, I've seen a lot of great, original ideas.
People attacking other people just gets me plain angry.
On a brighter note; I LOVED your chapter. ^_^ There were no faults whatsoever, you don't deserve to be treated like this. D:
In any case, I celebrate your updates, and I'm sure many others do, too!
As before, I hope you feel better soon. ^-^

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you :-)

Reviewer: Beatric Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 08:02 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Not give up writing... you must update :o i love thiss fic xDD

Author's Response: Well, I'll update eventually I'm sure.

Reviewer: PixieGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 04:09 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Hey you!
I've been a phantom reader so far, I just found the time to start reading again. Just wanted to let you know that even though I am still so busy I can barely find time to write myself, I'm happy to give your story the time it takes to read a chapter. I. LOVE. it!

And I also want to say that you take whatever time you need to clear your head :) I can honestly say that I have a general idea of how you're feeling. I haven't been flamed on this site but it always hurts, wherever it happens. But you know the truth and we believe you and YOU ARE NOT SELFISH for wanting to take some time off. In fact, I think you are responsible, it's never good to let the quality suffer from a bad mood. Don't let whoever it is that said SHIT about you affect the story, she or he is NOT worth it.

This might be the longest review I have ever given to anyone...

Love your story!! Love love love love it!!!

Author's Response: Aww, wow. Thank you so much! ♥

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 03:41 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Clicked on submit before I was done. :p To continue - Love how Bill decided he'd rather be a squid and had so much to say on why he felt that way. Loved that Bill knew what Tom was thinking about and had to try and get Tom to admit to it. Also like how Tom is starting to relax around Bill and letting his guard down a little even though it scares him so much.

Lovely story! I can't get enough of it! And if you need some time off from writing then definately take some time off. Being creative can be exhausting. :]

Author's Response: Thank you again!! ♥

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 03:32 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

I just love how you're writing Bill and Tom in this. I find myself thinking about them during the day. I have the most lovely image in my head of Bill in his orange rubber boots, hands and pockets full of little shells, running home in the moonlight, his full hands and pockets losing a shell or two every few steps, leaving a trail of shells leading to Bill's house. And I love that you have Bill being a cello player. Imagining him playing the cello...pure hotness!

Author's Response: Thanks! ♥

Reviewer: msneu Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 03:25 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Right then. I'm not the most active person here. Be that as it may, I think you are definitely not a monster or any other such words. I don't even know you, but I like to think of myself as a moderately, really good judge of character.

Either way, seeing this story updated was the PERFECT end to an already amazing day (seriously, I didn't think it was possible for today to have gotten better). But I'll respect any choices you make, sometimes a break can be a really good thing.

I'll end this novella now, but I just wanted to drop a line. :] Thank you for your beautiful writings!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ♥

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 03:18 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

*huggles Cine.*

It's none of my business, but, I don't think you are a monster. You are one of the purest, kindest people I've met on here. I wish people wouldn't start shit. Really, I do.

And I just realized that this has NOTHING TO DO WITH YOUR STORY.

But.

I've lurked it on here, and on Mystics.

Don't ever give up. You are too talented to quit, take hiatus, etc.

Author's Response: ♥ thank you!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 02:38 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

I was so happy to see this updated, I actually squealed 0_0 lol.

I'm pretty sure I've said it in all my reviews on the previous chapters, but I must say it again! I love this story!! XD This chapter was great! And I'm definitely looking forward to reading about the party :)

And I'm sure you don't want to keep hearing about it, but, I can't believe someone would call you worthless and selfish for not wanting to take a break! That's completely ridiculous...Even without all the stuff that's been going on, whether you want to take a break or not is none of their business...

I had a very painful dentist appointment today, but this chapter made it all better :D lol

Author's Response: Oh no! I hate the dentist. I have to get a filling replaced soon... But I might get porcelain veneers put on too so that's awesome haha. I hope your mouth feels much better soon ♥

Reviewer: MeckimyLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 02:31 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Hiya Cin!
I'm not much of a commenter, but I've been somewhat following this whole ordeal going on. And I'd just like to say that we, include myself, are all here to support you and your work. You're a wonderful, inspiring writer and never in a million years would I believe you to say something like that you were accused of. You're not a monster, and I'm terribly sorry to hear that you are so heartbroken. In a way, I am as well, for your sake.

Much inspiration and love to you, my dear :3
-Mecki

Author's Response: Thank you very kindly. ♥

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 02:14 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

I love this story :D
I don't really know what your end notes are about, but i hope what ever it is gets better.

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 02:08 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Oh!  This is fantastic!  How is it that every post is amazing in every way?  Never do I get bored or just want to skim over parts and never do I just want to quit reading.  This story is perfect in so many ways.  I love the way Tom was thinking all naughty and Bill was trying to drag it out of Tom xD  And Bill's epic-like run on sentence about cleaning his hands just to touch Tom's clothes was hilarious. 

It really sucks that you're going to give up writing for a while, but like I said last time, take as much time as you need. Your followers/trackers will understand.  And the ones who actually read the author notes and know about the situation, they also know that you never told anyone to say anything.  And I'm so greatful that you wrote two more chapters to post later!

--

PS. I don't think you're a monster.



Author's Response: ♥ I appreciate everything about this comment. I thank you guys like crazy.

Reviewer: LiviKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 02:03 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

im going to cry now :(

Author's Response: I have cried over it tonight too. We can cry together. ♥

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