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Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 07:43 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

so sad. I hope everything works out for Bill. His grandma is a bitch. so is mine come to think of it, lol. looking forward to the next update. hope all is well with you

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 07:42 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

so sad. I hope everything works out for Bill. His grandma is a bitch. so is mine come to think of it, lol. looking forward to the next update. hope all is well with you

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Muffinholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 05:36 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Aww, evil grandmother! Shipping Bill away from Tom! *sigh* poor them.. More please?

Author's Response: More soon :-)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 04:01 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

I didn't think this sucked. poor Bill. I hope he gets things straightened out with his mom and grandma. Thanks for the continued speedy updates!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 02:50 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Poor Bill, having to be past around like that...especially now that he was making some progress with Tom. He can't leave now! And this most certainly doesn't suck. I'm looking forward to more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 02:41 am Title: Bill is Almost Always Comfortable, Tom is Almost Always Not

Oh my God that picture is so cute! Bill is like my three best friends put into one, I love it XD

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yeah, I think she did a great job on the drawing :D

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 02:37 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

This was a sad chapter...

I'm amazed though, even when your words don't seem to work for you they still flow pretty well! :) I adore the way you give us details little by little about the characters. Until next chapter~

I wish good health for you and Dresden! Hopefully she gets some sleep so you can too.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 02:21 am Title: Bill Finds Talking About Home Hard, Tom Finds Bill Perfect

Well like always I liked the chapter

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: BuggaBiene Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 02:08 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Poor Bill :(

Author's Response: :-(

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 01:45 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

;_______; that's really harsh, to ship him off after one minor infraction! Poor Bill.

Author's Response: Sad to say, I think he's used to it. D:

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 01:19 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

You too! Sweet dreams, hehe ;)

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 01:09 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Bad gramma, bad! *hits gramma with rolled up newspaper*
So sweet how they fell asleep in each others arms. Hope Bill gets to stay there. With his gramma and in Tom's arms.

Lovey love this story! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! ♥

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 01:09 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

x3 That was so random and silly that I couldn't possibly be sad anymore~

I'm off to bed now, dear, for I have an eaaarly appointment tomorrow. I hope you have better luck getting the baby to sleep tonight (or at least a day to rest tomorrow

Author's Response: She's already in bed :D She went fairly easily. :-) Have a nice sleep!

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 01:09 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Aww, that is so sad. How can that happen to poor Bill, i love Bill so much for his attitude and every time some one tries to hurt him, i get so defensive. Bill is sweet and enthusiastic just like me and i love him!!
i cat'wait for the next chapter!! ^__^

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 12:44 am Title: Bill is Almost Always Comfortable, Tom is Almost Always Not

Wow, i wonder what going to happen next, you know in bed. I know that they are not going to do that since Tom is like that but i still think that they may talk and maybe kiss, who knows. I really want to find out!!
I loved this chapter, but didn't understand why people didn't want to speak to Tom, i just don't get it, Bill is so cool!!
Well anyways i can't wait for the next chapter, and this one was really good too. I loved it!!!!^_^

Author's Response: No, people did want to speak to Tom. It was Bill they didn't want to speak to. Thank you!

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 12:44 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

This doesn't suck at all! I love every thing about this... except the fact that Bill is so sad because that always makes me sad, and when I'm sad, it's hard to cheer me up.

Rambling! :)) Anyway... yeah I love the chapter, AND the story, AND Dresden haha. She's such a gorgeous handful ;-P

Author's Response: Cheer up, buttercup! At least you're not an egg!

Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 12:17 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Oh. My. Rambling-Bill!  NOOO!!! He can't leave!  Stupid grandma! :(.... Okay, now that I've got that out of my system, I have to, once again, let you know how amazing this is.  I cried ;-; I'm over-emotional, but I can't help it... it was so sad! D:

But I absolutely bursted with joy when Tom and Bill slept in the same bed, that was just too cute!  And tsk, tsk, Tomi!  Rubbin' all over innocent Bill's belly! xD jk, but seriously, that was just the most adorable thing! :D

I'm so happy you updated! And I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: Thank you, darling!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:40 pm Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

Awww that sux for Bill-hope there is a way around the situation and he can stay. In my head i'm thinking maybe Bill had sleep apnea when he was younger-if not, im curious to know what his breathing problem was...thank's for the update-it's appreciated so much

Author's Response: Sleep apnea sucks so badly, haha. Thank you!

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:37 pm Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

D: How, how, WHY WOULD YOU, you are SO mean to us poor readers! Getting us all excited then, BAM! "Chapter End Notes:" you're wicked with these cliff-hangers Chabear!!!! Just plain wicked!

Author's Response: It's just how I rock.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:27 pm Title: Bill is Almost Always Comfortable, Tom is Almost Always Not

LOL Gustav is a character when drunk!
I am loving how Bill and Tom's friendship/relationship is developing-perfect for this story!
Thank you and keep your chin up-we're here for you!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

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