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Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 04:49 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

AHH! When i read the chapter title i was like "Bill talks first kisses- aw!!, Tom talks physcial- OH MY FUCKING- WHAT THE HELL?!" XD And I knew it! I knew what Andreas was planning! Epic win on my part for guessing, on Andy for being a scheming son-of-a-gun, on Bill's part for letting Tom know he likes him and being patient, and on Toms part for TALKIN PHYSICAL! xD haha! "lets get physical, physical" Anyway, this is great, as always, and sorry my review is later than usual D: Love it update! Can' wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: ScreamingStephi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 04:35 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

I love this storryy. I reallyy like bill's fun,upbeat personalityy. Can't wait for the next chapterr(:

Author's Response: Thank you :-)

Reviewer: alwaysontheedge Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 04:33 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

ok so i came ot reading this story a but late, but needless to say once i started i read the whole thing in one shot. although i was heartbroken when you atarted talking about quitting writing. im so happy you didn't.. you are a wonderful author and no, this story does not suck and yes, keep writing cuz now i wanna know what happens next.

thankyou

Author's Response: Oh, well thank you!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 04:25 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

Love that Bill was balancing books on his feet with Tom's help. And yay! for Andi being brave enough to ask his parents if Bill could live with them and yay! for his parents actually considering it. This chapter had so many fun, cute parts in it. I really enjoyed it. :D

Love this! Can't wait! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 03:41 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

Aww...they confessed their love!!This was such a cute chapter :)

And I hope Simone and Gordon decide to keep Bill! And then him and Tom can live happily ever after! lol

I say it every chapter, but I must say it again, awesome chapter and I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 03:40 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

Wait the last part "Bill and Tom would get their promised kiss far sooner than later"... what did you mean by that?!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
:)

Author's Response: Thanks :-)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 03:27 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

This story does not suck. And don't speak badly of yourself. Negative self talk is powerful. Speak well of yourself and your writing will continue to be wonderful. Speak badly of yourself or your writing and they will suffer. I loved this chapter, I think Bill and Tom are so cute and so perfect for each other!!

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 03:21 am Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

you update so fast I can barely keep up! its great!!

Author's Response: Hehehe. :-p I try to get one a day, but it's hard hah.

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 03:17 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

God Bill is too perfect

Author's Response: :3

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 06:43 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

It was awesome! *_* Perfect. More would have ruined the intimacy of the chapter, don't you think? :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 06:42 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

Bill's family is horrible, I feel so bad for him ! Let's hope that Andi is going to figure something out cause I don't want Bill to leave Tom either !

Author's Response: Hope so!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 05:09 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

It's not that short :D And it's really good I feel sad now T-T

Author's Response: Aww , don't be sad!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 04:54 pm Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

This doesn't suck :D

Author's Response: Well, thanks! :D

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 02:43 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

Awwww!!! I loved it!!!! XD All you're stories are just so amazing and this is nothing short of that! :D Bill and Tom are so cute and you know everyone is just rooting for a kiss haha, but it was so cute, I can't help but wonder what Andreas is up to, but I suppose we'll find out in the next chapter :D Please update soon, this was just fantastic XD

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! ♥

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 11:20 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

if Andreas pulls this off, you ought to slap a cape on him, throw on some tights and call him Superman. Awwww, I love the fact that he'd do anything to keep his little brother happy. *claps happily* maybe, just maybe....Bill gets to stay....but can he cuss out his grandmother first? Just cause I'd love to see it ONCE in a fic of what I have been through in real life. LOL

Author's Response: I just don't think it's in his nature to do that! :-p As for Andreas, he would be Superman for sure!!

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 10:39 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

it does not suck

Author's Response: Well thank you :D

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 09:39 am Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

Andreas is saving the day =)

Author's Response: He's a good guy. :3

Reviewer: hazex Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 09:17 am Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

I Dont want Bill to leave D:

Good chappie, kisses

x

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: schreibendundschreiend Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 04:55 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

i just found this song and it reminded me of Bill and Tom in your story. I think, if you like Einaudi you might like this song. It's a cello piano duet by Arvo Pärt and i thought it funny that the cello parts are very chaotic in the beginning, as you Bill is, but then when the piano joins it, the whole things calms a bit...like Tom. anyway, i'd love to hear you thoughts on it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5vO92REraUo&feature=related

Author's Response: Oh... wow! That is... absolutely beautiful! Thank you for showing me this!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 02:54 am Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

Poor Bill! What a terrible family he has. And you almost had me tearing up reading about how badly Bill and Tom don't want to be seperated. They both totally in love with eachother...even if they can't express it yet. And I hope Andi pulls through and finds a way! As always, I am very much looking forward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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