Date: 07/28/10 07:50 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear
Wow, I`m proud of Tom and very happy for Bill!! I hope they stay together forever!!!
I loved it and can`t wait for the next chapter!!!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/28/10 07:35 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear
*ducking the flying popcorn after kicking over my bowl* WOOOOHOOOOO! yes! yes! yes! yes! *pumps fist and dances around*
again...WOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: Hahahah!
Date: 07/28/10 07:23 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear
Thank God my fist kiss wasn't awkward. But sooooo cute I love this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 07/28/10 05:02 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
I reli liked it :) dont be so hard on yourself :D
Kisses x
Author's Response: Well thank you :D
Date: 07/28/10 04:58 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
Andi is the best brother ever ! Their conversation was very interesting, I like the way Bill’s mind works. Oh and he was so cute, promising Tom his first kiss!
Author's Response: :D Thanks!
Date: 07/28/10 03:39 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
AWWWWW Tom is letting Bill in!
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 07/28/10 02:04 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
It really doesn't suck at all! If you're struggling... I can't tell at all. It really seems like you have it all planned out. If that's not the case, don't worry about it :) The story will come to you, I'm sure of it.
Author's Response: Well, thanks bub. :D ♥
Date: 07/28/10 01:50 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart
Don't you say anything bad about this! I love it :P And so sorry that the second picture is so late... I haven't had much time at all to work on it :((
Author's Response: Aww, it's okay.
Date: 07/28/10 01:41 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
It doesnt suck! I'm certainly enjoying it. I wish I could come up with the words to express to you how much I love this story. Andi is right. They do need each other and I'm looking forward to watching them develop into stronger characters.
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Date: 07/28/10 11:24 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
They were holding's hands---what progress!!!! I'm dying for their first kiss, even if it is just small, tender and full of promise-it will be beautiful!!
Author's Response: :-) Thank you
Date: 07/28/10 11:14 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
This might sound weird, but I love watching Tom struggle. At least when he's trying to tell Bill how he feels or touch him. Not in a mean way, just...it shows how important Bill is because nothing, especially love is ever easy.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: 07/28/10 10:31 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
That was beautiful! I'm so proud of Tom in this one. I love Andreas!
Author's Response: Thank you :3
Date: 07/28/10 09:50 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
Aww that's so sweet =D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/28/10 09:15 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
This is a beautiful story! I've been AWOL from the site for a while, and this was quite a gem to discover upon my return. Your Bill reminds me very slightly of one of my favorite Bill-characters, from Through His Eyes, by Jelly Pencil. I think perhaps it's the almost innocent wonder aspect? Whatever it is, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Ah, very interesting. :-) I've never read her stories, I don't think, despite her being fairly well known on this site. :-o Anyhoo, thank you very much. :D
Date: 07/28/10 08:51 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
In your chapter end notes, you say that you're struggling with this story and that it "really sucks." I'm hoping you mean that the struggle sucks, and not the story, because the story is amazing. It's impossible to NOT love and understand these characters. They would undoubtedly be a challenge to live with in real life, but somehow, the way you write them makes me wish I had the chance to try. This story teaches the reader things that not everyone is privileged to know. That makes it a fabulous story.
Author's Response: Ohh thank you so much!! And yeah, it's more so the struggle to keep confidence that sucks in the greater scheme of things; unfortunately it makes me feel very poorly about the chapters, but I'm going to definitely try to get the next chapter to do what I want. :3 Thanks again!! ♥
Date: 07/28/10 08:44 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
“Tom,” Simone interjected. “We can’t just take Bill in, what if where he is going is good? Do you even know who’s taking him? Maybe they want to give him the family that Bill’s parents never did.”
“We can give him that family, Mum… Please, if you just think about it…”
“And we will,” Gordon interrupted. “Just… give us some time to talk, Tom. We’ll figure this out.”
Hey darlin. I noticed sumn here. During this part of the story TomandBill are upstairs, Andreas is talking to the parent but Gordon is saying "Tom" when he's addressing Andi.
Apart from that, enjoying the read. Hoping all is well with you, Daisy.
Author's Response: Ahh, crap. Teach me to write at 2 am. Thanks I'll fix it. :-)
Date: 07/28/10 08:11 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
awwwwww, the boys....Tom is making strides he can't even see right now. I've never wanted a kiss to happen so badly as I do with these two. Not sure what it is you're struggling with in this story, but I hope you work it out...and if I can help, you know where to find me ;o). Great job as always and I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm just struggling with confidence, probably due to all the stress I got earlier on. :-( Thank you very much though :D
Date: 07/28/10 07:56 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
I love this story and the fact that it gets updated so quickly. Also, i love the way you described Tom's frustration. Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 07/28/10 04:59 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
I hope Bill gets to stay and be with Tom. I'll be very sad if he doesn't. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/28/10 04:56 am Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical
Those two are so cute! I love how they act around each other and Bill's thought process is just awesome
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!