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Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 12:19 am Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

They kissed! Bill's staying! *happy sigh* Everything's wonderful.

Love this! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 12:08 am Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Oh God-that was so touching, I have tear's of happiness! Thank you for a beautiful chapter~

Author's Response: Thank you ♥

Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 12:00 am Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

O_O WHAT THE HELL?! I didn't know you updated until I saw it said Chapter 11, because you updated really really early this morning so it said this was updated "7/28" and it still says it because its still "7/28" and oh my gosh I can't believe i didn't know! I don't know what time you posted it... but I'm freaking out anyways haha! Only 3 min until "7/29"

Any way... BILL'S STAYING *dances like a crazy person* AND TOM KISSED BILL! *hyperventilating like a crazy person* Aw! This was so cute! And you're writing has yet to fail me! *hugs and kisses!* can't wait for more!

PS. it is now "7/29" xD



Author's Response: Hahaha! What a lovely review :D Thank you :-)

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 11:18 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Those were the best first kisses I've ever read!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 11:09 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

*is so in love with this chapter it's not funny*

Dear, my heart stopped when Tom overcame his fears and kissed Bill!

Author's Response: :D Yay!

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:58 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Ahhhhhh

*0* This made my night! It was so perfectly written... the kiss and Bill staying and just ACH not a thing was out of place!

My heart has melted~~

Author's Response: :D Hehehe

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:55 pm Title: Bill Talks First Kisses, Tom Talks Physical

“I’ll wait for that kiss, Tom. If it means something to you, if it means as much to you as it does to me, I’m going to wait for it. I don’t care how old I become, how long it’s been since we last spoke. I’m promising you my first kiss.”

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: blackdragonflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:38 pm Title: Bill Rips up his Memories, Tom Rips up his Heart

The boys have such sincere feelings for each other. It makes me very sad to see them so miserable! T-T

Good chapter though. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :-)!

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:35 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Gosh that was pure unadulterated fluff. I think my heart melted. And I know I sighed like the three blondes who like Gaston in Beauty and the Beast at least once XD Spot on, dearie!

Author's Response: thank you :D

Reviewer: hazex Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:48 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Awwww -melts- makes me wish I'd had my first kiss :( maybe soon ? I hope so! :D

Kisses x

Author's Response: ♥

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:24 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Finally a kiss **claps** Bill is staying and Tom is still progressing woohoo! What more can happen with these two 8D

Author's Response: :3 hehe

Reviewer: bambs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:52 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

AHHHHHH!!! THEY KISSED FINALLY!!!! :D awh!! it was soo cute :) i really like it :D

Author's Response: Hehe thanks!

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:45 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Yay, he's staying: ) and that was such a sweet first kiss, I'm proud of tom for fighting his fears. Bills mom is horrible. Great chapter: )

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:36 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Awwww They kissed :D I feel so proud of them, they are adorable and Tom is awesome :D

Author's Response: Hehehe :3

Reviewer: arty343 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:28 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

awww how cute, i want more!!

Author's Response: I'll try and write more soon. :-)

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:20 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Iiihihihihi :"D

Author's Response: :-prn

Reviewer: HotelDeadMau5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:17 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

*Gives you an awesome high five for an awkward first kiss*

Author's Response: :-p

Reviewer: BuggaBiene Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:07 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

That kiss was a total 'awwe!' moment. update soon :)

Author's Response: Hehe :3

Reviewer: SquishyDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:01 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

AWWWW YAY! THEY KISSED! *squeals*

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 07:52 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

Lol I was just about to say, they better get the hell out of there before it rains on them.

And yay!!!! for awkward kisses. Haven't had a kiss yet. Hopefully I will after I turn 20 XD

Author's Response: Hehe. :3

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