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Reviewer: tommikaulitzgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:14 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

hehe. ilovedit!

two chapters with sex = yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Author's Response: ;giggle; Thanks!

Reviewer: tommikaulitzgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:53 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

awwww!!! why to go Tomi is right!!! XD ilovethisstory soooo much!! i cant wait for more!! everyday i get more and more into it!

i love how adventurous Tom is getting! i wannnnnnttt hiimmmm >.>

Author's Response: Hehehe thank you!!

Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:36 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

WOO TOMI! That little animal hehe That was hot, if I should say so myself lolol. I liked this chapter very much, it may even be in my top three favorites. Tom has grown so much, and call me strange, but I'm proud of him :)

Author's Response: Thank you :D :D

Reviewer: Rennned Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 05:23 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Ahhh, yay! Amazingggg! Hehe. I loved Bill's last line. And aggressive Tomi is hot. =D

Author's Response: I think he is too ;-)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:52 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

i loved it! not a moment of itchiness! go tom!

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:31 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

well, helllloooo there Crazy Tom. Plan to stay around, ja???? I love how his compulsions just disappear when he tries to make Bill happy. Gives me all sorts of fuzzy, happy, warm feeeelings. LOL

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:18 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

This couple is too cute! I love it =D

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: santisaysfml Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:24 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

THIS WAS ACTUALLY MY FIRST TIME READING AND LIKE OMG! WHY HAVEN'T I READ THIS BEFORE? I DEDICATED ALL MY AFTERNOON JUST TO READ THIS, JSYK. INKEGRFBVDN OMG I WANT MORE. MORE PLEASE? :D

Author's Response: :D Thank you!! ♥

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 07:31 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Way to go is right! Also, that was the best skinny dipping scene I've ever read on here. Man, that chapter was good.

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 07:06 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

haha Crazy Tom!!! welcome to the club :)

Author's Response: Haha. :-p

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:11 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

So that's what skinny dipping lead to. :D Love how Tom keeps getting more and more comfortable with Bill.

Love this! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 03:07 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

lol, funny last line from Bill. I like aggressive and free Tom. Another great chapter, thanks so much!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:41 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

yay for Tomi! But also yay for Bill...yay for both of them, seeing as they both just got laid in the water, XD. Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:23 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

XD Wow after all that Bill remembered Tom's boxers XD Epic

Author's Response: Hahaha. :3

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:51 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

*o/* go Tom!

Author's Response: ;giggle;

Reviewer: danradfan84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:44 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Wow, loved this.

Author's Response: Thanks :d

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:44 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

How romantic to do it in the water!
I would totally love to be in Bill's position.
^^

Author's Response: :-p :-p

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:30 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

The camping trip is up to a good start! Sexy hexy time for the guy's-so glad they took their relationship up a notch.
Hope nothing happen's to make Tom revert backward's, since he's came so far. Ready for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: LiviKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:23 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

yummerly...im hoping its no where close to ending?

Author's Response: Not quite sure yet haha.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:22 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

That was hot! I love their relationship in this fic, their moods switch from playful to sexy in no time! I absolutely adore this story and I'm so proud of Tom's progress !

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

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