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Reviewer: x_final_day_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 05:46 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

It's insanely insane! hehe You dirty thing you with all the sex and whatnot! It'stotallywonderfulthough b29;

And such a fast update! You really made my day (which hasn't been too great until now :/) Thank you, thank you, thaaaank you for being so great to us!

Author's Response: Thank you! I keep forgetting to post up the picture you drew for me. UGH. I need to write it down somewhere to remember. When I write chapter notes I just forget everything ahaha. I'm sorry. :-(

Reviewer: Rennned Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 05:41 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I swear, you are trying to kill us all with all of the hotness! But it was also sweet and romantic as well. *dreamy sigh* Loved this chapter, as always.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: meridian_star Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 05:18 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

From one who has a few issues with being touched I am adoring this story *hearts*

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 01:36 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I love how in love they are :]

LOVED this! Can't wait for more!

XD

Author's Response: :-) Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 01:34 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Very naughty!

LOVED this, can't wait for more!

XD

Author's Response: :3 Thank you :Drn

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:49 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

So hot! They are so cute together, just perfect for each other! I really liked the chapters where they were alone in the woods, just being together and enjoying each other company! Can't wait for more :P

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 10:59 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I dont get a chance to read updates alot, and when i do its via cell phone. but i have to say that when i can read them, this story is always last. its just so much fun and it puts me in such a good mood.

Author's Response: :-) Thanks!

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 08:00 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

2 chapters???? oh, i am in heaven. can we make it 3?? i'm just sayin'....LOL. Great job!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. :-) I think two is good lol haha

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 07:34 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

Whoa Tom!!!!....
He's like living up to his rep now XD

Author's Response: Heheh :3

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 06:43 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I can seriously FEEL all the love those two share between them and it's just...*happy tear* :')

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 02:58 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

They are so freaking cute. This Tom and Bill is second in cuteness only to Jelly Pencil's Through His Eyes Tom and Bill. Thanks for the continued speedy update, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Never read it, but thanks I guess... lol.

Reviewer: Exklusiv Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 02:16 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

First: Billy makes grilled cheeses with an iron all the time. They totally taste normal. Second: I toasted bread over a fire for a grilled cheese not long ago. It worked well and the toast tasted delicious. Third: thank you for referencing Benny and Joon. And fourth: om nom twinslash :3

Author's Response: I toasted grilled cheese over a fire... the cheese turned to plastic. It was disgusting, hahaha. Thanks :D

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 01:19 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

SECKS. SERIOUSLY. MORE SECKS. I think I love you.

I loved their camping trip, I've never been, but if all camping trips are like this, then hell, sign me up! Tom is like, very good at this whole sex thing. And Bill, well from day one I kinda knew he'd be good at it. I guess I have a thing for very, euhm, vocal partners :)

I really like how there is the sort of positive-negative, black-white, introvert-extravert Bill-Tom relationship. You can see how their differences really bring them together, it's very heartwarming and sweet and you're doing an amazing job expressing their relationship. You go in-depth with all their little touches and words, it makes everything about this story come together and I really love it :)

Thanks for the chappie! :D

Author's Response: Ahhh! ;blushes; Thank you!!!

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:34 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

Bill is bringing out Tom's inner freak lol

Author's Response: Absolutely! Hey, Tom is weird after all! ;-)

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:33 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

more sex

Author's Response: :-p

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:32 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

A nice surprise is what this is!

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/10 12:01 am Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

Hope Bill isn't two sore later on in the day XD

Author's Response: Hehe, no kidding!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:58 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I've been camping before and, sadly, it was nothing like Bill and Tom's trip. Last time I went camping the trip consisted of rain, wet dogs, rain, really wet dogs, rain. Also the tent was too small.

Two chapters with sex is always a lovely idea. :D
Love this! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Eww, wet dog smell. ;shivers; haha. Thank you :D

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:51 pm Title: Bill Tries Something New, Tom Tries Something New

I love that Bill loves Simone. That's so sweet.



Author's Response: :D I think so too!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 11:34 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

"Way to go, Tomi!" is right! I'm so happy he's "coming" out of his shell...



Author's Response: ;giggle; Coming... bwaha. Oh, my immature humor. Thank you :D

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