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Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/20/11 01:10 pm Title: Bill Tapes a Note to a Window, Tom Tapes his Heart Back Together

Damn! I wanted to read about Toby balancing biscuits on his nose :p

Author's Response: Hehe :3

Reviewer: Holleh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/20/11 12:31 pm Title: Bill Likes Tom's Song, Tom Likes Bill's Gift

Hehehehe, how does this come into your mind? I think this Bill is definitely the second cutest Bill I have ever read about. I would definitely circle yes!

Author's Response: I suppose it happens from dreaming too much about all sorts of strange and interesting people? :-p

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 09:16 pm Title: Epilogue

Bill walking into that candy shop and meeting Tom was the best thing he'd ever done. I really like how the Trumpers are portrayed here, especially Simone. It's refreshing to see her so cool and happy and supportive.

The story was played out very well, I couldn't stop reading! I hated to come to the end though...

Author's Response: I'm hoping to plan out a sequel, rest assured. :-) Thank you so, so much! ♥

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 06:29 pm Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Good gravy, did I say innocent? Way way to go, Tomi! :)

Author's Response: Hehehe ;-)

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 05:57 pm Title: Bill is Worrying, Tom is Changing

Trust Bill to worry about losing Tom's love now that he's starting to show more confidence. And oh, these innocently sexy scenes are...innocent and sexy. Nom nom nom indeed.

Author's Response: :D!

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 01:08 pm Title: Bill Hates his Morning Moustache, Tom Hates Gustav

Gah, Gustav sucks here! You can't *make* someone like you anymore than you can make someone be normal. Bill's right, Gustav is crafty, and not in a good way, he needs to leave Tom alone. :(

Author's Response: :-( Agreed

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 10:32 am Title: Bill Feels the Excitement, Tom Feels the Desire

This chapter is all kinds of sweetness, love and desire.

Author's Response: :D :3

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 08:54 am Title: Bill is Almost Always Comfortable, Tom is Almost Always Not

There is something about your stories, especially ones like this have have a good energy about them; you just feel good reading them.

Like when you put a totally way-out Bill who has a surprisingly quiet strength and kindness, especially towards Tom. That people don't necessarily get or like him and yet he's still himself. I love that.

Reading the end notes, I'm glad you're still writing, i really like your stories.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: beeswaxing Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/11 08:35 am Title: Bill Gets Ravaged, Tom Gets Crazy

Considering the night I just had.. Can I just put in a token OWWW? :-)

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/11 01:37 pm Title: Epilogue

This was the cutest story I've ever read. Thanks so much for writing it!

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 09:19 pm Title: Bill Shows Compassion, Tom Shows Trust

so much fluff! this is the first time i've read a sex scene (even typing "sex scene" just feels inadequate...love making makes more sense) in a fic without feeling any lust. i could only think "omg how adorable?" the whole time.

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 10:48 am Title: Bill Recites Tom Thumb, Tom Recites his Past

OH my goodness sooooo heartbreaky :(. But yay for talks of happily ever after!

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/11 12:57 am Title: Epilogue

This was amzing and beautiful....
i wanna hug this story..
This would be a great book.
Your writing is very powerful and creative..
I love it. So many emotions fling through the story...
Simpley amazing.

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 04:22 pm Title: Bill Has an Idea, Tom Has a Worry

"Go lick some rocks" On Of The Best lines I've read in a long time..
I really love this story.. you're a great writer.. I'm not finished yet obviously but I had to write a review for this now..
Oh and I absolutely love the way the titles are written.
Maybe it's a little weird that I pay much attention to them
But then again when you read a story shouldnt the titles be important too..
Anywho i'm going to get back to reading nowww...

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/11 09:53 pm Title: Bill Tells Tom Something, Tom Tells Bill Something Too

They finally said that they love each other so cute ! I hope that Georg will appear in the fiction !!! I love these drawings and Tomi the zombie seems like a turtle lol. But it's really good

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/11 01:32 am Title: Bill is Excited About Milkshakes, Tom is Excited About Public Kisses

I can't wait to know what Gustav wants!

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/11 10:51 pm Title: Bill Feels the Excitement, Tom Feels the Desire

so cuuutttteeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/11 10:19 pm Title: Bill is Surprised by Tom's Family, Tom is Surprised by Lack of Fear

He dares (i mean to kiss bill)! And now they're gonna live and work together! So great !

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/11 01:26 am Title: Bill Wants to Get Closer, Tom Wants to Get Closer

it's so sad... How his family can be like this while Bill is agood person, an adorable kid!

Reviewer: Yako Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/11 08:28 pm Title: Bill Likes Tom's Song, Tom Likes Bill's Gift

I like it!! My favourite is Bill, i like the way he are !

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