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Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:30 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I love this story, Tom seems like someone I know (me) and I want to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SquishyDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:14 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I LOVE IT! this seems so interesting! i cant wait to read more! you are an amazing author and ous houldnt ever forget that!

Author's Response: Thanks. :-) xox

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:00 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

LOL! Bill is so strange, in a cute, really happy way. I can't even begin to tell you what I envision in my mind. Happy, chatterbox Bill with a balloon tied around hiswrist. He reminds me of someone, but I can't put my finger on it. >_>

And awww, OCD Tom with his shyness and his case of the blusies. So cute! I really like this. It was sort of confusing, following Bill because he hopped from topic to topic, but that was half the fun! =D Hahaha, you never really know what he's going to say next, and it keeps you on your toes. This is such a fun story already. Tracking~~~ =D

OH! Question... does Bill have ADD or ADHD? Either of the two? Just wondering.

Omg, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Nah. Bill's just crazy talkative.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:00 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I'm so happy to see a new story from you! Like all of your other ones, I know I'm going to love this fic. The first chapter was very interesting and I adore Bill and TOm's character! Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 08:50 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Oh my god, I simply adore Bill's character. I love how he just stole the seashells and ran away; from my experience with that kind of character in Stargirl, I can tell he's going to do something better with them...right? XD And I love Tom's character, too. How shy and quiet he is. How he's afraid to do anything too out there. Their balance is really nice. :)

Anyway, I'll shut up now and be tracking this, which I haven't done in like forever since there aren't too many good stories around nowadays. :)

Your writing is amazing, Cin. Thought you should know that. <3



Author's Response: Stargirl? That was my nickname in grade school o_o Whaaaat? Thanks so much, though :D xox

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 08:50 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Yay for not going on hiatus~I think this is going to be a sweet and funny story until their relationship develope's into something more serious. I love it so far...

Author's Response: Thank you. :D

Reviewer: xxawsugarxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 08:48 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Very interesting. I'm curious and want to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. :-) More soon, I hope.

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