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Reviewer: aimee123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 06:43 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Love it! It's so sweet and i like Reading Tom as this character cause I've hardly read any where he's really shy and nervous. Also Ludovico Einaudi is amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:43 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I know the feeling. o:
Both of wanting to go on hiatus, and of wanting to post something so much. :'D
Everything you write intrigues me. ^^
It's always interesting, and the characters just stick with you, and never let you go. xD
Your fics are seriously addictive, and they should come with a warning that you will not be able to tear yourself away from the screen until you've finished the fic. XD
And even then, you can come back and read it again, and it's still just as good as the first time you read it!
I could gush about your work forever, but I think I already sound obsessive.
So I'll end with saying that I really like this! ^^

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!! ♥

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:41 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I like it. Write some more. And smush your little Dolly-doll daughter a little bit for me.

Author's Response: I will! :D Hehe.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:33 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

i love it Bill is cracking me up.

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:33 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

i love it Bill is cracking me up.

Reviewer: Subtlemagic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 11:35 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Firstly I love Einaudi, I've been playing the days non-stop, unfortunately my hands are really small so I find some of the cords a little more difficult than I probably should.

Second, Bill is a nutcase a seriously unhinged person there, but so much fun.

Author's Response: He's just excited! Everything is interesting to him. :3

Reviewer: love_angel91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 11:09 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I love it! Its so cute =) More plz ^^

Author's Response: Thank you :-)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 09:51 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

so cute. :D

Author's Response: :3

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 09:35 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I LOVE this! I really like Tom's character in this one, he's so vivid. And I think Bill is just as mysterious to me as he is to Tom.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: kramllew Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 06:48 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

o.O i like it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 05:55 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I like this alot. I really enjoyed Bill's character. he's very strange in a good way

Author's Response: Thanks :-)

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 03:32 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

What a sweet surprise to find a new story by you!
Bill is so great! I wish I knew someone like him in real life. And Tom is such a lovely opposite to him.
"You look like you have a disease,” “That’s rude to anyone who has a disease like this.” That really made me laugh.
And for the record...ferris wheels are, quite possibly, the scariest ride ever invented. Especially if you're scared of heights. I would much rather ride a roller coaster. If you get scared you can scream and no one looks at you weird.
If you scream on a ferris wheel though...

I'm already loving this! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: hahah. Thank you!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 03:25 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I think this is very cute. They are both very interesting and distinct characters. I was so shocked to see that you had posted something so soon. I was also shocked, because apparently I had never read your profile before. I think because I knew you had a daughter, i assumed you were older. Well that, and the fact that your writing is so stellar. But I just found out...you are only 18!!!! I am so uber impressed now its not even funny. your resume is so impressive...you have a very bright future my dear.
I look forward to more of Bill and his orange boots. =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:33 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I love it! I think the Plot is great and I love the personalities and the clash between the two, I simply can't wait for more! XD

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: THbillgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/10 12:18 am Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

awww cute chapter!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BKDreist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 11:15 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Lol its very interesting. And different! I loved it. Bill is so energetic- I cant keep up with him. Tom's ocd is win. Is there more?

Author's Response: Yes. Theres more. Soon.

Reviewer: hazex Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 10:04 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

OMFG! I totally loved it! And then I saw you wrote it and I was like 'God you're an idiot Hazel! Who else can write something that can speak to you with only one sentence!?'

Super excited for this one girl!

Kisses to you and dresden! x

Author's Response: Aww, thank you darling! Kiss kiss!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 10:02 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

Yay! I was very excited to see that you posted a new story! I love all your stories, and I can already tell that this one is going to be no different! I love your Bill...I always love to read about weird eccentric characters like this! I can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:41 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

hmmmm I must say keep writing its interesting and funny..Bill kills me with those boots

Author's Response: Heheh. :3

Reviewer: xoxanywherexox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 09:38 pm Title: Bill's New to Silent Valley, Tom's New to the Fair

I like it so far :) i can't wait to read more. i love bill's personality, he makes me laugh. ;) Tom's personality makes me think of me haha

Author's Response: Well, I like writing relatable characters I guess hehe. :3

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