Date: 06/16/12 09:15 am Title: Never Again
This is good. First time I've read it.
Date: 10/07/10 07:34 pm Title: Never Again
I actually read the story twice(sp?) and still love it. But now I know not to make Bill angery o_o'
Author's Response: HAHA. Yes Bill has an evil side, I'm sure of it. Thanks so much for liking it so much you read it twice.
Date: 09/17/10 11:45 pm Title: Never Again
Revenge can be a very good thing. :)
Author's Response: Revenge is best served...hot? lol.
Date: 07/16/10 11:57 am Title: Never Again
This was fantastic. I love that song, too, by the way. I love evil Bill >:) It makes things more interesting. Well...depending on the plot :P I love your stories!! I hope you write more soon(:
Author's Response: I am totally obsessed with that band. Well the music at least. lol. I don't know where the idea for this story came from but it just jumped into my brain in a complete story all I had to do was write what I was seeing in my brain on paper. A little evil Bill can be nice sometimes. Thank you so much for liking my stories. I am working on 4 at once right now so I will have more for you once "On Star" is completed.
Date: 07/16/10 08:19 am Title: Never Again
OHMY!! I usually NEVER read anything else than tom&bill things cause i don't like them but i had to read this cause it was yours.. and u didn't disappoint me!! I'm glad that it wasn't tom who got burned... :D:D from now on i have to trust ur judgement... xD It was GOOD!!! :):) GO BILL!!! YAY!!! :D ps. Bill rocks!!! :D
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy it made me that you said "I had to read this cause it was yours." OMG people are reading things just because I wrote it?!?!?! ::faint, wake up, happy dance:: If I saw this story and read the warnings 8 times out of 10 I would skip it. I don't like when Tom is the crazy abusive boyfriend so I made an OMC that you have no feelings about and it's easy to hate him. Thanks for not only being a loyal reader but also a loyal reviewer.
Date: 07/15/10 07:11 am Title: Never Again
Wow, that was kind of scary, lolz, but I liked it! Go Bill!
XD
Author's Response: Scary premeditating Bill. haha. Don't get on his bad side.
Date: 07/13/10 05:11 pm Title: Never Again
Ooooh! Surprise ending! Wasn't expecting that. But I totally loved it.
Author's Response: I'm happy the ending was a surprise. This was something very different for me and I'm happy you liked it.
Date: 07/13/10 03:54 pm Title: Never Again
That was actually really good. I don't really go for stories like that, even one-shots; for some reason, the main characters always seem to turn out whiny and helpless.
In this, they did not. I thoroughly enjoyed that, especially Bills' vengenance.
Author's Response: I don't normally go for that kind of story either let alone write them like this but when I heard the song the whole scenario just sprang to mind all at once. I had no choice but to write it. Lol. Thanks for giving it a chance and reading it anyway.
Date: 07/13/10 12:45 pm Title: Never Again
nice, very nice. Even though Bills a murderer, I find this strangely endearing. The story fits greatly with the song and that's said as a Florence and the machine fan :)
next time though, I'd work it out a little bit, just to justify what bill did a little more. 4 hits in a couple of months is bad, don't get me wrong, but setting the bed to fire in that scenario seems a bit like over-reacting. A bit more miserable Bill would've worked for me..
Apart from that, I really enjoyed this, a nice amount of pain with a tiny hint of smut and then, wham.. 'I'm sorry, I hope you burn in hell'
I think that was really brilliant
good job!
~Dawn
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I love Florence + the Machine and I've heard this song 100 times but this last time this story just jumped into my mind. rnrnI usually write things that have more of a background and I even thought out a back story for this one as well but I thought the piece was much better without it going into Bill moving from Germany and meeting Marc and feelings of homesickness seemed to clutter the story up . I wanted somthing short and to the point I also didn't want it to seem like Bill had been his punching bag forever but that in the past few weeks it had escalated and he was sick of it. I'm really happy you liked it anyway it is very diffent from things I normally write.
Date: 07/13/10 11:59 am Title: Never Again
Nice!!!
Not expecting Bill/Omc
But then again, I would've known if I had read the pairing >.<
I'm bad with that.
LOVED IT!
I'm going to update Teach Me today!!
-hugs-
Author's Response: Rach you are so silly. Did you just read it cause I wrote it? I'm so happy you love it. Can't wait for your update.