Date: 08/01/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fast, really fast and really, really dramatic. Gonna give it a chance ;)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I'm sorry it's really fast. And I'm sorry it's taking so long to write.
Date: 07/18/10 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi
I just read it, and I must say it is sad. Will you continue it? Surely you'do. right? I don't understand why a person suicide, that just don't get into my mind, I can understand though the pain for seeing someone you love drift away from you.
Nice first chapter of this story, personally I love Allien.
Please continue the fic.
Velia
Author's Response: Oh thank you! You got what I was trying to say through Bill's past and in the hotel. Thank you. :)
Date: 07/14/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Your an excellent writer. I normally really don't like suicidal characters but I will read the story if it is written well. If you were to write some from Tom's point of view it would make me want to read it even more but, of course, your the author and that is your choice to make.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. :) Hm, Tom's POV... Sounds like an idea.... ;)
Date: 07/14/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Your an excellent writer. I normally really don't like suicidal characters but I will read the story if it is written well. If you were to write some from Tom's point of view it would make me want to read it even more but, of course, your the author and that is your choice to make.