Date: 09/13/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
well finally i have time for let you a rev.
i think this was indeed a very good chapter, but i sense the storm coming over?
So, the blond guard wasn't Gusti, now i can only think of Andy... but we'll see
oh please update soon! it's been so long since your last update! i'm here biting at my nails! i've almost reach the finger XD No, no, just kiddin' no presure... see ya!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I always enjoy hearing from you. Yes, you do sense a storm coming. :-D rnI know it has been so long since my last update, I am so very sorry. I have been so busy with school an they keep piling me up with homework and I end up with no time to write. I am in the process of writing the next chapter though, just no telling how long it will take to get it done. I just hope that school will slow down a little soon so that I can get back to writing lol.
Date: 08/17/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
lol, you worry too much. no one is going to stop reading because of this chapter. i liked it. thanks for the update and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it :-DrnI know, I do worry too much. I think I am my own worse critic! Sorry it took so long to reply and sorry that the next chapter is not up yet, but school has kept me so busy that I have had no time. I am working on the next chapter at the moment, I promise.
Date: 08/16/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I actually really liked this chapter.
Cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked this chapter. :-D
Date: 08/16/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, Ophideus is such an idiot! I'm not going to get angry, he gets a lesson! :-D
How you thought that I'll stop reading this? :-D No, no, I don't. :-) There is no hurry, I like to read about how people live in Dystopia, it is interesting to me.
Of course I don't look forward to Bill and Tom will have it tough, but as we all know: No pain, no gain. They are young, strong men, they can cope with such an idiot as Ophideus :-) I keep my fingers crossed for them.
Tom plays the guitar. Bill is certainly a great singer. Gustav is a doctor who can certainly beat a drum, and still find George and they may form a group of underground "Dystopia Hotel" :-D They can sing protestsongs and disrupt the whole artificial society with the help of love. :-D:-D:-D
Well... I'd rather I'm silent... ;-D, J. :o)
Author's Response: I agree! Ophideus is an idiot! But, sadly, there are people like that in the world. :-( rnHahahahahha you made me laugh so hard with the 'Dystopia Hotel' singing protest songs and disruption of society. I love that hehehe.
Date: 08/16/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
That was actually really good...keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, hun. Sorry it took me so long to reply and to get the next chapter up, but school has kept me ridiculously busy so that I have not had time to do anything else. *sighs* BUT I am working on the next chapter. :-D
Date: 08/16/10 11:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Why won't Tom move down there? I don't get it XD And Gustav? Why won't they move down there? And if I was Bill, I'd move down there immediatly.
Author's Response: Lol they each have their own reasons for not wanting to go down there just yet. I would move down there immediately too.
Date: 08/16/10 12:56 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Why would I (or we)
stop reading because of this chapter??
Its pretty good :)
Author's Response: lol no idea... I just always worry that people will lose interest and stop reading. Thank you so much.
Date: 08/11/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Ten
im really getting ito the story too
i love it
Author's Response: hehe Thank you! I am glad you are liking it so far. I have had several moments where I really hated a couple chapters, but just having you and others offer words of support really makes me feel better. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 08/11/10 03:49 am Title: Chapter Ten
I think it was a great chapter, thanks so much!
Author's Response: You are welcome :-D It should be I thanking you for reading it and reviewing it lol, so Thank you!
Date: 08/10/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Hi there! Sorry for didn't let you a review before but i've been busy. :(
This is going so cool! you made the right thing for making them wait for their first kiss. It was a HUGE day for Bill and that would had been a little too much for his poor stomach.
ohhh you got me so intrigued by that blond guard! i just can imagine what role he's gonna play!
oh and since i didn't let you rev for the others chapters let me tell you that all bouncing dancing cheerly Bill was awesome!!! it make me crack a smile every time i remember.
i can't wait to know what would happen next! i think he's gonna see Jost? oh i'm speculating, not a good thing to do ho-ho. :O
Well i'm sure you're gonna make that kiss soooo special that i can barely wait for it, but I have to, so till next time!
Author's Response: There you are! I was getting worried about you! I am glad you are doing okay :-Drn Whew... I am glad I am not getting mobbed for not making them kiss, so many wanted them to I think. But you are right, it was a busy day for Bill and a draining one, that would have been too much for him. rnhahaha I know I keep mentioning that blond guard, I am glad people are getting intrigued by him... that is my intention lol. You will find out who he is and what role he will play in due time though.rn rnI am so glad you liked dancing Bill, it had me laughing because he looks so ridiculous, but adorable lol.rnrnThank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08/10/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Ten
:-) They certainly will kiss when the time comes. :-) Homosexuality is not permitted in the Dystopia, well? I understand that Bill is afraid to fall in love with Tom. Although It happens. Maybe it happened? :-)
I'm curious who Bill meets again on the black market. And what about that blond guard? Is he dangerous? Is it Andreas? ;-)
Too many questions. You must write the answers, Lynn :-) I look forward for the next chapter :-) J. :o)
Author's Response: hehehe Ja, they will kiss when the time comes :-)rnNo, homosexuality is not permitted in Dystopia. He is afraid, but you are right, it does happen.rnrnYou will find out about the blond guard, don't worry. :-)rnrnhehe I know you have a lot of questions, but I will get to them in due time. You made me smile really big, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08/10/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Awwwww
Well just makes the real kiss even better and sweeter XD
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it :-D rnI agree, it does make it sweeter and better. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 08/09/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Nine
this was a really good chapter
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Date: 08/09/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Oh, poor Bill, he was so frightened that they will be caught. Finally, he ate something that was cooked with love and well-liked. I feel sorry for Bill and his "funnel cake", which ended in the toilet :-D
Anyway, I had no idea what it is, so I went to look at You Tube. :-D
Their trip to the sea was a so romantic, I enjoyed it with them at the same time, there is a good atmosphere for the first kiss. ;-)
Yes, everyone is different, but when they join and fight for their ideals, they are incredibly strong. When I was as old as Tom and Bill, I had the "Velvet Revolution" in Prague, so I wish them both that they managed it in a Dystopia. :-)
Thanks for writing this, Lynn, I liked your story. J. :o)
Author's Response: Ja, poor Bill :-( That would be horrible to get sick whenever you get too nervous. I have 2 family members who do that.rnrnI have never eaten a funnel cake. I have seen a lot of it, but never got around to trying one. I need to someday soon. :-DrnrnThat is true, when people unite for one ideal they can be strong. I am glad your 'Velvet Revolution' turned out well.rnrnYou are welcome! :-D I am really enjoying writing this story so far. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :-D
Date: 08/09/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter Nine
Oh wow, that was really good...I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Danke schön! I will be starting on writing chapter 10 within the next few days. I just need to get some homework out of the way first. :-D
Date: 08/09/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter Nine
Thanks for the update, looking forward to more! =)
Author's Response: No problem! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing :-D
Date: 08/01/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I love Bill's little dance! This was another great chapter. Bill is going to have a very hard time going back to real life after this. I'm looking forward to seeing where Tom wants to take Bill, and learning more about Tom. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: hehehe I liked his dance too; it made me laugh. Ja, he will have a hard time going back up there, but he has to do it. :-( Thank you for reading!
Date: 08/01/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Eight
ROFL
yea the pics DID remind me of the story
i love this story
cant wait for more
Author's Response: I am so glad that I am not the only one who saw those pics and thought of the story lol. Hopefully I am not the only one who had a fit of laughter when I saw them lol.rn Lol I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for reading! :-D
Date: 08/01/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Eight
(:
Author's Response: lol :-D I am glad you liked it.
Date: 08/01/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Seesh Lynn that was amazing I loved it
Author's Response: Thank you!