Date: 08/12/11 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
That was cute, also a little sad, but with just enough happiness to make you feel like you can keep going.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! More is being validated xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
N'aww! I like this story though....it's cute! Is there gonna be a sequel?
Author's Response: Ummm, I have no idea! But I might just make this into series and put small one-shot-sequels up, if you get it? XD though I'm not sure :P we'll see! Glad you like this! More is up xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
I was so happy to see this updated and you didn't disappoint! I don't want to see this end, but this was a lovely chapter. It's a shame that Bill's dad isn't proud of him. :(
Author's Response: Aw thank you :') Yeah it sucks, I really love father-son love D: glad you like it! more is up xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
The ending couldn't have been any more perfect. I can't seem to stop smiling at how sweet it was =)
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoy it :D more is being validated xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 08:59 am Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
yay update. do you see this huge smile on my face?
Author's Response: No :/ But I can imagine! :D more soon xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 07:34 am Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
Aaww^^ The ending was so sweet~
Moving on - Bill's dad is a pretty important character (since he is supposed to be the evil guy) but something about him feels off... I would have preferred if you had thought more of his behaviour and what he would be saying. Perhaps some more glaring behind Bill's back, hushed talking to his mother, or just better arguments against Bill.
Like, they have a huge fight, whch end with him calling Bill a fag, met by silence and then Bill storm out.
But this is of course only suggestions :) The chapter itself were really good^^ And for a second I thoughtt Tom was going to take the drugs O.o
And if you haven't a tight plot I may come with an idea? Maybe Bill could get a move? Take Tom along, find him a job and so?
Still, your plot may have my idea look like crap XD
I look forward to the next chapter^^
Author's Response: I think the whole chapter was a bit off... I guess I wasn't in my best writing mood, lol. But thanks anyway, I'll keep your advice in mind. And I'm not really sure of how to end this yet, but I have something in mind ^^ glad you enjoy it, more soon xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 06:51 am Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
Oh, i love this story so much :') sad it is coming to it's end, but i will enjoy the last chapters at least!
Author's Response: glad you like it :') more soon xoxo
Date: 08/12/11 03:44 am Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
omg this was so cute!! ^-^ Wow they really love each other in this story that's what I like about this c: sad that it's coming to an end can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you :D more soon xoxo
Date: 08/11/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
Hell yeah they kissed!!!
Author's Response: Hell yeah they did x)
Date: 08/11/11 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 22. More than a feeling
www Ill be so sad to see this going. Amazing chapter, I love how you show their emotons--epic cuteness
Author's Response: Thank you :* glad you like it xoxo more soon!
Date: 08/10/11 12:52 am Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
I'm really excited about the next chapter :3.
Date: 08/10/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 19. Letters and drawings
HAHA @ the scissors. OMG.
Date: 08/10/11 12:30 am Title: Chapter 17. Two is better than one
May I just say that I find you to be a brilliant writer? I'm really appreciating the time and care you're taking with the plot.
Date: 08/10/11 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11. Through the night
I really enjoyed the song. Both the song, and the chapter. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 08/09/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 8. Within hope
Ella is precious.
Date: 08/01/11 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
Why oh why did I start this wonderful story knowing it wasn't finished! I'm dying to know what's going to happen next =) Maybe Bill tracks down Tom's dad & surprise! he actually will want Tom n his life or something...I dunno. Tom just deserves some happiness & stability. I feel so sad for him. This fic is simply amazing. Hopefully there is more sometime soon?
Date: 07/14/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
*hugs Tom and cries* awwww
Date: 07/06/11 10:59 am Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
*sniff* so sad
Author's Response: (: more soon xoxo
Date: 07/05/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
Thanks for the updates! =)
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing xoxo
Date: 07/05/11 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 21. Slice of your pie
I'm working on a Christmas part for my story too, glad I'm not alone!
Bill is doing a great thing for Tom, letting him stay there until he comes back. I'm happy they're getting comfortable with each other.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: thanks :) oh well then you know how it feels xD more soon xoxo