Date: 07/21/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
Oh my goodness! AWESOME CHAPTER - it's so sweet of Bill to let him stay there for the time period - and when you described the whole thing about Tom getting ecited for a shower, I suddenly wanted one SO bad it was funny. Then I decided I wanted to have a bath with bubbles and candles. And I dont even have a bath. *facepalm* literally - after I finish this review, im going to shower and make sure i enjoy it. LOL. I feel really awkward knowing that I take warmth and water for granted.
And I would totes let a homeless dude stay at mine if i trusted him enough. And if he was cute enough ;) But then again if I saw that he'd prepared to steal my stuff while i was out shopping I probably wouldn't. fml. Billa is so kind :3
Awesome chapter!!! I love how often you update - it gives me something to look forward to each day :3
Excited for the next chapter!!! :D Ha, I can't wait to read about Tom and Ella's adventures to the park :')
xx
Author's Response: Naw, thank you X) more soon xoxo
Date: 07/21/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
So Tom did try to steal -pout- bad Tomi
Author's Response: hehe x) thank you, more soon xoxo
Date: 07/21/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
omigosh I am loving this story its so great really it is. i finally go around to reading it(srry no offence i was just to lazy to read more than one story like every few days lol) and its so good *tracking* post soon :DD
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! :) More soon xoxo
Date: 07/21/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
Looking forward to seeing if Tom F's up or thing's go great and Bill is impressed when he return's!
Author's Response: Thank you X) more soon xoxo
Date: 07/21/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
lol Bill scolded him like a little child for stealing his stuff XD I thought he would have blew up and kicked him out. I hope everything goes great when he's gone :)
Author's Response: haha x) thank you xoxo more soon :)
Date: 07/21/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
Omg, bad bad Tomi! Stealing from Bill! Or trying to XD
Lol dx Great chapter, mooore please? ^^
Author's Response: Thank you x) more soon xoxo
Date: 07/20/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
i love this chapter :)
Date: 07/20/10 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
oh i know that soup and it does taste good,a tad spicy if i recall correct.anyways i feel so sorry for tom and i hope bill will let him sleep in the house or smth or at least give him something in return for taking care of the doggie. can't wait for the update xoxo
Date: 07/20/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
yay! :D
Date: 07/20/10 04:57 am Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
You're from Sweden!? o_O ME too. Lol. -.-' xD
Då kan jag ju kommentera på svenska... *glädjedans* 8D
Date: 07/20/10 02:39 am Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
I just found this story and awww! Hobo!Tom XD
Date: 07/19/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
Hi! nice chapie ^_^ and i wonder what that "mexican soup" will be (since i'm mexican i think it will be interesting, maybe if one fortunate day i go on vacation to Europe and happen to pass by Sweden do you think it'll be too hard to get?)
Anyway... i'm talking nonsense.. ohhhh i can't wait to see how Tom goes with the lovely Ella! well see ya!
Date: 07/19/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
loved this chapter!!!
i really cant wait for more, it's addicting!!!
Date: 07/19/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
AWWW!!! i really like this story! I just want to squeeze the life out of tom, you make him sound even cuter!
Date: 07/19/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
I think this is incredibly sweet. Most of the time when people write a more timid Tom, they go overboard but you write him well. This is great so far. :)
Date: 07/19/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
Glad Bill finally found the courage to ask Tom to watch his dog. Looking forward to reading about that. :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D more soon xoxo
Date: 07/19/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
Tom is so cute!
Author's Response: hehe thank you :) more soon xoxo
Date: 07/19/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
That is great!
Author's Response: Thanks! xoxo
Date: 07/19/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo. I like this Tom. This story has potential to address a lot of issues and still continue to be entertaining. I am enjoying so far.
Author's Response: Thank you!! ;) More soon, xoxo
Date: 07/19/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 4. Time waits for no one
Awww I hope you're feeling better :( *sends virtual cookies and cocoa*
Awesome chapter! It was short and sweet; I loved reading about Bill and Tom eating homeless soup together haha, that was so sweet :'D
And Im so glad Bill decided he trusted Tom enough to ask if he'd care for Ella!!!
Yay to friendship progress!!! :D
So looking forward to the next chapter!!! :D
xx
Author's Response: cocoa ... @_@ <33 me like :3 mwaah, thank you x) more soon xoxo